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This story revolves around Keller, and Tobyn. It is a truly a beautiful story of shifters. Let this wonderful author carry you on this journey and I assure you, you're not going to be disappointed. Read as things unfold for Keller and his journey to falling in love and finding answers that changes his life. And there's cute side characters that I especially enjoyed reading about. Thanks Gary for this beautiful story. One of the best I've ever read.
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Oh my! That was hell of a beautiful story. I enjoyed every bit of it and would love to read more. There's so many unfinished business you have with me Gary. I didn't get to see Warren's wedding. Keller and Tobyn's children. The old wolf reuniting with the pack. Elinor's baby. Tilly's wedding. Keller becoming an alpha and so much more. I would love it if you write a second book on this universe. It's really refreshing to read. Thank you so much sharing such an amazing story with us. Stay healthy dear friend. Lots of love.
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So I was finally able meet the old wolf as a man. He is truly a sensible and intelligent person. I am glad Keller have him, well they have each other.its true; they've both lost and gain somethings. The chapter really held a lot of intensity to it, all those history about Gigi, Carlah and Keller's grandmother.
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Oh God! For a moment I thought the old wolf was not going to come back, but then he did and I was so happy. I hope everything will work out. Tobyn is really the perfect partner one could hope for. I have faith in you Keller.
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Circle Upon Circle Upon Circle
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Circle Upon Circle Upon Circle
WOW! So many emotions in this chapter. I cried when Sybil told that story. But I am happy they'd already killed that man responsible for his parents death. Ah I knew it that Keller was somehow related to the old wolf. And wow, Elinor was his mother's best friend. I am certain his parents must be happy where ever they are to know Elinor's son was Keller's mate. That's right you're the alpha of Morningstar Keller. -
So happy Elinor is pregnant. I can imagine how happy she must be with Keller's confirmation. And Connor's decision to move in was perfect, they two needed that closeness. Really enjoyed this chapter. *Sad face* the story is edging to an end.
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Aww that was a really sweet chapter. Connor handled everything well and I am happy Keller fixed him. The guy's really good and he deserves to be happy. Tobyn being petted got me cooing at how cute he was. That guy is really something, he can be bossy when he likes and cute when he likes. Now I have no doubt that Hugh and Connor are going to make a beautiful couple. I really like how you tell us the stories of other couples through Keller and Tobyn. Now Tobyn your mate asked a question. Let's hear you answer. Lol
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The Times They Are a-Changin'
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in The Times They Are a-Changin'
I really enjoyed Keller's and Warren's reunion. And Warren's getting married, that's lovely. I never thought wolves do marry especially if they're earth mates. So Keller and Tobyn can marry too if they want?. "Hey, not before I say how proud I am of you, bro. I get cred when I introduce myself as the exalted one’s brother.” “Not as good as being the savior’s consort,” Tobyn said smugly, and Warren laughed. Goodness! I laughed really hard reading those lines. And I reread it a couple of times while still laughing. I am also happy for Hugh, he finally found his mate and I was especially happy it was a man, I was kinda getting tired of all those hereto earth mates they've found so far. lol. And Yes, I really love it whenever Keller goes in full doctor mode. I wonder what is wrong with Hugh's mate. But I am only a few minutes away to find out. -
Ah Sybil and Arthur's reunion got me really emotional. I can't imagine what it feels like to finally meet the one for you again after so many years. So happy for those two and all of the others that met their mates. Tilly and Logan meeting each other was hilarious. Those two are truly made for each other.
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Chapter 48 Connections, Old and New
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 48 Connections, Old and New
Wow! I've always enjoyed reading sex scenes but I specially enjoyed yours. I was sort of surprised when you told me in one of your replies that you don't really enjoy writing smut scenes. But the truth is, you're really good at it. You don't just write sex scenes but instead wrote sensual love making and i really really really love it. Me as a person have never read a plain story. I wouldn't even go near a story if it doesn't have even a single sex scene. Lol. That's just how I am. Hutch meeting his mate really made me smile. I am loving Arthur more each time I saw him in a new chapter. -
Not much to say on this. I really enjoyed this chapter and my heart goes out for those two old couple. It made me somehow emotional to hear them say those words. I hope they're mates would be as happy wherever they might be. I am glad Vega finally made their decision.
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Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 46 Shining a Bright Light into Darkness
Wow! That was hell of a speech you gave in there Keller. It was incredible and I am certain those being reluctant to leave Vega would have a second thought after hearing that Carlah like speech. It was perfect and I was surprised how Keller knew the right words to say, the right button to press. When they were walking into the Hall with Arthur, I kind of pictured a dramatic soundtrack in my head. Lol. So glad Keller decided to step up, it was the right thing to do. -
Chapter 45 The Awakening
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 45 The Awakening
That's right Keller, you really should thank the earth mother for all those wonderful gifts she bestowed upon you. Having your healing skills, a mate like Tobyn, with a good and generous heart. The word remarkable is the right word to describe Keller. He's just so special, especially with Tobyn by his side. I can't wait for miss Sybil to know her mate is alive and for the others to meet their mates. Thanks for this chapter, I really appreciate it. -
Chapter 44 A Time of Rebirth
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 44 A Time of Rebirth
Fuck! Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck! Forgive my language, but Damn Gary, how do you do it? Every chapter you gave us something new, something incredible and mind-blowing. Ah sometimes I wonder if you're a doctor Gary, the way you explain things was very medical like, save for the touches of magic. My heart can't take all those surprises you're giving it, I think I need a moment to drink. Yeah to celebrate in Sybil's name. I am so, so, so, so happy for her. Oh God, do Keller realize how powerful and incredible he is? Damn! I envy Tobyn for having such an amazing mate. I am just so overwhelmed after reading this chapter. -
Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
I understand it's not easy for Vega pack to leave their home just like that. But that's the best they've got and I hope they'll decided firmly on it in the next meeting. I like that the alpha is a very determined man. -
Keller you horny bastard. Haha. I think the pack will agree. Because it's the only solution as of now. The boys had tried their best ,now it's up to the pack to decide what to do. Ah Logan seemed like a real gently soul, I bet he'll even be more when he meet his mate. Now I am happy you gave Tilly a good man like she deserves.
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Chapter 41 Looking Back while Moving Forward
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 41 Looking Back while Moving Forward
The savior story really intrigued me. I am certain that Keller is the modern day savior of his kind. Maybe that other savior was his ancestor? Because the resemblance was uncanny. Iam glad that Keller figured out how to help Bill and the old alpha. Now Logan is awake. Yeyy. -
Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 40 The Art of the Deal
Oh goodness! This just keeps getting interesting. Like wow! That painting, I have my own theories but I would love to hear the real one from you, so I am not gonna say. Lol. I wanted to talk about merging the packs in the previous chapter, but I didn't and I am happy I was right about it. Thanks for this wonderful story. I have mix feelings as I read on. One; I don't want this story to end and I am already in chapter 40. Two; I want to finish reading it, I want to what will happen in the end and also to read your other stories. -
Chapter 39 Healer Interrupted
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 39 Healer Interrupted
As always, Keller never failed to amaze me. I totally put all extra my attention into reading whenever Keller is doing his doctor things. Lol. It always makes me smile. Having a supportive partner is the best thing one could hope for. Tobyn always ready to help his mate. Lovely chapter Gary, and I have faith in Keller's ability, I am certain Logan is going to be alright. -
Fuck! That's it Gary, guy got me there. Oh hell Logan is Tilly's mate? I can't believe it and I am so happy to know they have at least five patterns that matches. Keller going full feral to protect his mate was priceless. I love how only Tobyn was able to stop his mate with just one sentence. Ah my heart. I can see the pack alpha is a good man, but I am not so sure about his son even though he's Tilly's mate. Well I'll have to wait and see if Tilly will be able to make him better. But the question is, how are they going to convince Logan, to come with them to Morningstar, with how little he trusts them?
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Fuck! That's it Gary, guy got me there. Oh hell Logan is Tilly's mate? I can't believe it and I am so happy to know they have at least five patterns that matches. Keller going full feral to protect his mate was priceless. I love how only Tobyn was able to stop his mate with just one sentence. Ah my heart. I can see the pack alpha is a good man, but I am not so sure about his son even though he's Tilly's mate. Well I'll have to wait and see if Tilly will be able to make him better. But the question is, how are they going to convince Logan, to come with them to Morningstar, with how little he trusts them?
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Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
That's right boys, you're fated for so much more, the earth mother really love you guys, that I am sure of. Another incredible chapter Gary. The sex scene was beautiful, just like the first. I especially love that the two could now hear each other's thoughts. It seems they just completed the joining and I can't even imagine the amount of love and connection they're feeling at the moment. -
Interesting! Those two doesn't seem to be our average werewolves. What am I even saying? Of course they're not average in any way. It was really good to know they can communicate telepathically when in wolf form. They so much love and care for each other. And I understand how Tobyn's mom must have felt to know her son and his mate almost had a death experience. It must be really terrifying for a every mother. Keller is a very good man for letting his brother Take all the credit, not many people could do that.
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Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
Jasmine94 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
Holy shit! Gary you got my heart almost out of its ribcage. Damn that was really terrifying. I was so scared for our boys that couldn't sit but kept pacing while reading this chapter. I want to get that twig and give it the worst of its existence, first I am going to chop it into pieces and then I will garther those pieces and burn thoroughly. Lol. And almost cried out in relief when Warren showed up. Yet again he has proven himself to be a worthy companion Morningstar needed and could rely on. I can practically feel how proud Keller must be of his brother. I am happy the Hunter had been taken care of but I know it's not the end of trouble for our pack. I am certain something is going to come up, probably another Hunter or hunters. -
Aww that's so so so sweet. The joining was everything I imagined it to be. It was perfect and beautiful. I think I can't have much words to describe how i feel right now but I will try. I feel like I am on cloud nine, so much happiness in me that I couldn't help but shed tears– like literally– while smiling at same time. Tobyn! You did the right thing dear. It doesn't matter where you did it as long as you'll surely create the best memory. I felt Keller's excitement when he realized his mate had just seen those colors. What you wrote in this chapter was incredible Gary. Thanks for this.
