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Chapter 7 A Rvelation
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 7 A Rvelation
I started out to simply write about their first night! Then my pen kept on going, and going, and going . . . . -
Chapter 5 More than baby steps
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 5 More than baby steps
I'm not picking on U-N-I! I love them - just ask the author . . . . but theirs is the world for all that teenage angst (well in the early chapters it is!) -
Chapter 6 What Theo says next
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All he fun of the fair in being a switch old bean!! He-he. Oh and there's far more of Adrien's 'domliness' to come. -
Chapter 5 More than baby steps
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 5 More than baby steps
Apart from the nausea you mean? Well too many things to count but . . . . we'll see! -
Chapter 4 An early morning surprise
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 4 An early morning surprise
Oh I've been there believe me! Across a space of over 70 feet I was stopped dead in my tracks by a musician - he was 11 years younger than me and we were together for almost 4 years. -
Chapter 3 Adrien has a decision to make
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Chapter 1 - Because men can enjoy seduction too
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Because men can enjoy seduction too
Hi Bard Simpson, I'm waaay too old to write about teenage angst and I prefer to not re-live my own! I too prefer to read something with a little 'depth' descriptive narrative's great but don't we all talk to each other?! -
Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
Firstly thanks for taking the time to read about my guys and second for such a well-written and thoughtful review. As to Theo's previous 'experiences' . . .all will be revealed - eventually! 😉 -
What a great way to pass an hour-ish on an otherwise boring Tuesday afternoon 😉 Then again spending time in the world of U-N-I is always fun Getting hotter by the moment - and it's got nothing to do with the weather he-he.
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Theo gripped the edge of the sink in the hotel suite’s bathroom, his head falling forward in despair. Everything, absolutely everything, he’d done since he’d had to leave Adrien under questionable circumstances had been aimed at avoiding the situation he was now in. When he raised his head the man facing him looked as morose as he felt. Summoning up every scerrit of his long-ago training he looked long and hard at his reflection until his facial features were subtly changed – changed to loo
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MADE you?! I'm not even in the same country!!!
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Hi Onim, glad to know you're still reading : ) Thanks for the positive words and 'hugs'. I'll be trying to upload chapter 3 later to-day as it's already written and typed (yes I'm a paper and pen kinda writer ) Unfortunately the fourth chapter's still in the writing/editing phase although quite a lot of it's out of my head and down on paper but I'm really slow at typing so don't hold your breath! Mind you I now have my very own editing king - you know who you are! - so maybe it won't take as long as I'm thinking it will. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Spoiler alert:- it's VERY different to what's gone before. Stay safe!
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Adrien pushed himself away from the drawers and walked, or more like stalked, across the three or four yards that separated them. “We began our married life, truly began it, here in this room, on that bed,” he said quietly, taking hold of Theo’s left hand looking at the ring he’d put there, “it seems fitting we should say goodbye there. “No, love, farewell, au revoir, auf wiedersehen not goodbye, unless you’re telling me that’s what this is.” “Theo,” Adrien placed a hand lightly o
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Chapter 5 More than baby steps
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 5 More than baby steps
Unfortunately a fair number of fathers react that way - which must hurt so much. I'm glad you're finding their adventures uplifting - I'm re-reading some of my favourite chapters of anther story on here to get that feeling because my man was taken to hospital yesterday 🚑 and we had to wait until this evening for the C-19 test result. He doesn't have it! 😀 Spoiler alert:- there's going to be 'trouble at t'mill'. -
Chapter 3 Adrien has a decision to make
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 3 Adrien has a decision to make
Why wouldn't he?! And up to now Theo's the only one getting a ride!! -
Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
WOW! That's some compliment - I hope you enjoy the rest of Theo & Adrien's adventures just as much (or maybe even more!) 🙂 -
Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
So glad some things made an impression 😉 -
Theo took in a huge gulp of air, he’d done it. And as he’d predicted it was the look he’d been given which had been the worst of it. When they’d both run out of words Theo had asked if it would be better for him to leave, a simple, single, nod had told him yes. His forehead rested on his hands that currently held the car’s steering wheel as if he was a drowning man holding onto some random piece of flotsam. And he was, he was drowning in an ocean of grief and despair, he wept, his shou
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Part 2 Chapter 4 What Theo Really Wanted
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Part 2 Chapter 4 What Theo Really Wanted
Thank-you both. I wanted to give my guys a fantastic honeymoon while keeping it private to suit their personalities. Ending . . . .? -
Chapter 1 - Because men can enjoy seduction too
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Because men can enjoy seduction too
Thanks for such positive comments. It's been a while since I did the teenage rebellion thing myself (in my case I hit the road with a few name bands waaaay back in the 70's!) so I've no real idea how it manifests itself these days. Besides which I know men who for whatever reason couldn't face/acknowledge being gay until they were turned thirty so in a small way Adrien & Theo are my 'homage' to them and others like them. I hope their story continues to entertain 🙂 P.S. Not 'old' mature like a fine wine! -
Part 2 Chapter 4 What Theo Really Wanted
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Part 2 Chapter 4 What Theo Really Wanted
Do you really believe they'll ever be out of my head?! That's about as likely as me forgetting Theo, Adrien, Charlotte, Bradley, Stephen (and you've met all 5 of them - but not the gay wolves as yet) or any of the others that're already in there! 🙂 -
Part 2 Chapter 4 What Theo Really Wanted
ShadowDweller commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Part 2 Chapter 4 What Theo Really Wanted
Well . . . . there could be an epilogue/finale/encore if only I could get a couple of other guys out of my brain 'cos "They're Always In My Head"! -
Slowly their guests departed, first those who’d arrived on the luxury coach then those who would be staying at the hotel until only Theo, Adrien and their DJ remained in the ballroom, “I’ve left instructions for powering down the rig with the event manager Mister Jepson, she’s all yours. Congratulations gentlemen, I hope you had a good time.” “We most certainly did,” Adrien confirmed. “Yes, we did,” Theo confirmed shaking the young man’s hand, “thank-you,” he walked to the ball
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Ok should I send you my version?! I'm thinking when I've ticked the other dozen or so chapters/epilogues/finales/encores off the writing list
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Nah, just for once I wouldn't want it portrayed in a song this time I'd like to see Mark go all Vesuvius on his parents! Because he so rarely loses it they wouldn't see it coming for starters. Then he could take all the guilt and s**t they've selfishly heaped on him and throw it back at them! Preferably at their front door for all to hear - let them face the looks and gossip of the neighbours he-he. But that's just me 👿
