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    Your Don character reminds me of another similarly acting Don: Don Auld T. Rump!!! Am I the only one sensing an harmonic resonance here? 🧐
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    A Mourning Storm

    Gforce reviewed Ronyx's story in Fiction

    The family (families) dynamics were well illustrated, even when not particularly enjoyable. While background and present tense (story time) descriptions are helpful, particularly if they are negative or uncomfortable, make sure to efficiently move through them to keep the story tempo and progression moving. Always ask the question, "Will a paper-weight do, or does it require the full brick." This story, over all, was well developed, and presented a diversity of characters. In the romance relationships, try to be sensitive to presenting a balance of both side's full character development. I Thought this was an overall interesting and enjoyable read. Thank You for all your good work.
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