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  1. dearpeter

    Chapter 5

    Fuck. Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck. “Fuck!” Alex slammed his fist against the mattress, causing Harry to jump. “Sorry.” Alex looked immediately apologetic, but the enormity of the situation soon hit him. He looked at Harry’s glistening eyes and quivering lip, then down Harry’s clothes piled on the floor. “I think you need to go.” “What?!” Harry’s eyes were now threatening to overflow. “You need to go. You can’t be here when she wakes up.” Harry looke
  2. dearpeter

    Chapter 4

    Hi Arran, I meant for Jennifer to come off as more tired and drunk, rather than flippant. Chapter 5 will deal with the morning after, and the flow-on effects of Jennifer's decisions. Also, I love engaging with you guys! It's such a cliche, but reader interaction really is the only payment we get. I hope it continues
  3. dearpeter

    Chapter 4

    Glad you enjoyed, Talo You'll find out next chapter just how much Jennifer suspected, and who she's now going to blame. Looks like she might have an image problem on her hands...
  4. Thanks for the shout-out, Talo!
  5. dearpeter

    Chapter 4

    Glad you enjoyed the chapter, Brayon! As a reader, I'm much more interested in emotions and how things *feel*, and hopefully that translates in my writing. I guess 'he jammed in his ten-inch penis and fucked me doggy-style' has its purpose, but it's also kinda boring. As for the 'big talk' with mom, you can look forward to that in Chapter 5
  6. dearpeter

    Chapter 4

    I think getting caught 'after' the act is almost worse, in some ways. Hard to argue it's just 'fooling around' when you invite somebody into your bed and fall asleep in their arms. You're right about Harry and Alex, as well. Neither of them lives a perfect life, and they need each other in ways they probably don't yet understand.
  7. dearpeter

    Chapter 4

    You're very cluey, NimirRaj. One of the key themes of this story is going to be Alex learning to live a more 'authentic' life on social media. What's going to happen that forces that authenticity upon him, though? Also, we'll be delving more into just how upset Jennifer is and *why* in the next chapter. You'll also find out whether she knew about Alex's sexuality all along. Stay tuned.
  8. dearpeter

    Chapter 4

    Absolute perfection. Despite all the times Harry had seen Alex shirtless on Instagram, or seen him in person wearing a Speedo, or even seen his bare ass on display in the changing room, he was still wholly unprepared for the sight of Alex Wyatt fully naked. He was absolute perfection. Harry watched as Alex kicked his skinny jeans off and stepped into the shower, immediately reaching for a bottle of body wash. He placed a gentle kiss on Harry’s lips, then turned him around and star
  9. dearpeter

    Chapter 3

    Thanks for the kind words, Talo! I'm new to this genre, but certainly not new to writing. Hopefully I can complete some of the other stuff I have laying around and start putting it out there, as well.
  10. dearpeter

    Chapter 3

    You're not far off in your assessment of Alex, drpaladin. He is, at heart, a lonely boy. A lonely boy with hormones, who saw something that he wanted and then inadvertently caught feelings. Stay tuned, because Alex has some difficult choices ahead.
  11. dearpeter

    Chapter 3

    Hi NimirRaj, I think Harry got over his shyness after Alex said the *exact* right thing on the phone. In that moment, he started to believe there was an emotional aspect to their relationship, and that Alex wasn't just using him to get off. Also, as you're about to learn in Chapter Four, Harry isn't the only one with a mother to worry about ;)
  12. dearpeter

    Chapter 2

    Hi Arran, You're pretty much on-the-money with your character assessments. With regard to the pace, that's actually a plot point in itself. Alex goes after what he wants, Harry's hormones kinda cloud his thinking, but what happens once the initial hormones wear off? What happens when Harry starts to see the reality behind Alex's social media persona? What happens if Alex's relationship status no longer matches the 'straight and available' image that he conveys to girls on Instagram? That's kinda the 'different direction' I'm talking about. This story was gonna be a series of steamy one-shots for Nifty, but now my characters have emotional complexities. I know what I'm going to do with those complexities from a narrative standpoint, I just didn't expect to be going in that direction when I started
  13. dearpeter

    Chapter 3

    Did I just put out on the first date? Fuck. It was the question that bounced around Harry’s skull all the way home from the photo shoot. No longer in Alex’s intoxicating presence, he felt the familiar poison of self-doubt coursing through his veins, convincing him that Alex had got what he wanted and that he’d now cast him aside as a one-afternoon-stand. “Harry? Did you hear what I said?” “Huh?” Harry looked over at his mother, watching him out of the corner of her eye as she
  14. dearpeter

    Chapter 2

    Thanks for reading, Talo! I always feel like I'm getting to know these characters along the way. It's already going in a different direction than I originally intended! Glad you appreciate the effort, as well. It feels effortless at the moment, so hopefully that continues!
  15. dearpeter

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading, Arran! Alex is more physically mature, but only a few months older. They're both mid-teens, for the record
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    Chapter 2

    Fourteen long days. That was how long Harry had to wait before he could see Alex again. They’d filled that time exchanging DMs, sending each other selfies, and talking on the phone when privacy allowed. The electricity they’d shared in person was still present in their remote conversations, with Alex’s irresistible charm somehow shining even through the phone handset. The end result was, Harry was falling hard and fast. He’d had a massive crush on Alex for as long as he could remembe
  17. dearpeter

    Chapter 1

    Hi NimirRaj, I can promise that Christopher won't be having any questionable relations with characters in the story. He's simply a gay man with a wandering eye. Thanks for taking the time to read
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    Chapter 1

    Harrison Delaney‘s biceps were way too small. So were his pectorals. And his triceps. And his shoulders. At least his ears weren’t too small, though. No, they were just way too big. Much like his nose and the stupid mole on his left cheek. What the fuck was he thinking doing this modeling shoot? It had all started innocently enough. He’d been horsing around at the beach, enjoying innocent fun with his cousins, when a photographer had introduced himself to Harry’s mo
  19. After meeting a flirtatious Instagram influencer at a photo shoot, Harrison Delaney must learn to navigate the world of social media stardom, including all the pitfalls that come with it.
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