Rhythminthemind
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"Is teaching magic illegal?" It is if you teach without a license or to someone who is not government registered.
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Not profoundly imperfect. Just regular people.
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It's a possibility.
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I can't answer cuz spoilers. It gets discussed later.
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Agreed.
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I always considered Samson the member of this group with the clearest head tactically. He wouldn't go for a kill when this is someone potentially recruitable.
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It says Middle Eastern.
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OH MY GOD SOMEONE FINALLY GOT THE REFERENCE!
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"Wouldn't an alarm system be more pragmatic?" Peter uses an alarm system too, I'm sure.
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Interlude 6: Waves.
Rhythminthemind commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Interlude 6: Waves.
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I was incapable of cussing at that age .
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Interlude 5: Casper Sullivan
Rhythminthemind commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Interlude 5: Casper Sullivan
"Who were the 'other two' Tsuru brought in? Charlie and Twenty-Three, I hope." Uh. No. That cliffhanger was not resolved off screen. Charlie and Twenty-Three are still, unfortunately, gone. The other two Tsuru brought in were the two other slaves who were present for the incident. Seventeen and Eighteen: The girl with the super senses and the guy who Caleb incapacitated by offering to break him out. -
The pause for breath begins now. Sorta.
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James can't press the weight so much as just protect her with a barrier in case she drops it.
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Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
Rhythminthemind commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Book Two: Winter. Prologue.
Oh, wow. You're virtually up to date at last! Nice to see your thoughts, and glad you enjoyed so far! -
"Peter and the Grandparents has to be aware on some level what Finch has been assigned to do right?" I mean. Tsuru talked openly to Finch about it like, two chapters ago, so. Yeah.
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James: “Okay,” Tasha said evenly as James lined up his shot. “So you went out with a boy in Oregon-” “We sorta made out a little, too,” he noted, sending a condensed gust of wind swooshing down the range of the gymnasium. It struck his target dead on, sending it clacking back against the rail along which it moved, built into the far wall of the space. He glanced across the way to make sure his father was still out of earshot. Tasha scoffed, then returned to setting up her weights.
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Significantly more than punished, yeah. Hideyoshi and Tsuru are an intensely wrathful pair of characters, and both are more or less defined by their love of their family. I do not personally believe that they were motivated by justice here. I think they were motivated by a desire for vengeance, pure and simple.
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I mean, fair.
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Very true. Father's MO is completely different.
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Mostly just sorta happened. That said, a story does inherently undergo planning as you're writing it. And I had some four years in which to plan this out as I was writing, so some parts of it are more or less entirely planned out.
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Probably by just admitting he got swooped by a bird at some point. They were all over the city and randomly attacking people, so it wouldn't exactly raise suspicion. His first instinct would probably be to hide it, though. Like, just wear long pants and hope it healed over before anyone found out.
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"It's hard to see at this stage, though, how you will ever be able to rein your story back in to become more contained!" Heh. We shall see.
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Balance is the idea 😛.
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I can't disagree on either point. Freja's advice is sorta... loosely based on mindfulness meditation, which is a real-world emotional self-regulation technique.
