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Well, wasn't Aiden Owen's first? And how long were they together? If I remember correctly, Aiden did do stuff with other people before he hooked up with Owen. Such was not the case for Owen. He was running away from his uncaring family, trying to make sense of the mess he was in, and then having to deal with new people. Aiden helpled him with that (although he wasn't the only one). I think it's because of the fact that being with Aiden was what helped normalize his previous situation in TLW that is making it so hard for Owen to 'move on'. But I dunno. Just a thought.

So Travis, in the midst of a very terrible day for him, can only relax when he talks to Dennis? And Dennis always gets distracted when he talks to Travis? Huh I like the Owen/Dennis friendship. It's funny and amusing to see them talk to each other. Still, I'm rooting for Travis and Dennis to get together. I wish Owen would get his head out of his butt about Aiden though. And I wish the same thing about Aiden. And what happened to Ryan, Lacy, and Chris??

He also did the jacket thing when he was in that parking lot and his tires were slashed.

Maroon 5 has come out with the video of their newest single 'Makes Me Wonder'. I really like it and I recommend it to you guys. Now I know that there will be many who dislike their music, but I just want to show you the video. I don't know about you guys, but I think Adam Levine is just so damn sexy. This video only proves it more, in my opinion. Just watching this video gave me the shivers. He's just so...Yum. Lol Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GVIgOBVO5gA

I've been wondering the same thing. Where are Joe's friends? We've only seen Chris'.

Ditto the thanks ^^ I checked the local bookstore yesterday. They have some of the listed books, but not the first one. And I'm hesitant to start reading those without at least reading the first one first. Maybe the library will have something.

Ditto what sat said ^^ Don't do this. You'll only cause more hurt. You talk about how you've caused someone immeasurable pain that it's too much for you. Doing this will cause more people immeasurable pain. So don't do it.

I was hesitant at first to read Rider's Pride because I knew that it was fan fiction based on a series of books that I have never read before nor ever heard of. But I guess boredom got the better of me and I read it. I'm glad I did. It's a very entertaining read, and after reading the eight chapters that DK has posted, I'm going to go read the books that Rider's Pride is based on. That is, if I can find them. Any recommendations on which one to read first?

Uh oh...

One of the best movies to come out in years! I love this movie. I'm definitely going to see it again and again. Of course, it doesn't hurt that there a lot of hunky guys

Ditto, man. Ditto ^^ I'm enjoying Travis a lot. I'm starting to enjoy Dennis a lot too. So I really like when we see Travis and Dennis together. And I hope Lacy and Ryan become friends again. I wonder why she can't look at him? Maybe there's some feelings there that are not resolved?

I'd definitely like to commend Graeme for an excellent job in writing this short story. I was expecting something totally different. Nevertheless, I am very pleased with this story. Both sad and touching, I recomment 'Ten Years' by Graeme for everyone to read. Click here to read it

Dammit. I don't like cliffhangers

I was wondering...Will we ever see a Chris/Alex talk? Or something to that effect?

Whoa. The ending was interesting... Again, another great chapter. I feel really bad for Dennis. To have a father like that must be terrible. And again, Travis never ceases to amuse me. I think he's become my favorite character in this story And as for Owen...He said he wanted Aiden back! Yay! Now, we only need Aiden to say the same thing. I'm keeping my fingers crossed. Can't wait 'til the next one

NO! THAT CAN'T BE! Dammit. I need to get my TV back. I'm missing too many of these episodes...

Haha. I can't wait 'til Chris sobers up and notices Joe sleeping on his couch. Going to be a pretty interesting conversation.

I was hoping for a confrontation there. Ehh. I guess I'll just wait for the next chapter. I still love it though. Keep 'em coming

Aah. Thank you for such a beautiful story. I don't regret continuing the Do Over series after reading DO, even after lots of hesitation on my part in the beginning. While I was reading the last chapter, I kept thinking to myself, "If the story of Davey and Brian doesn't end happily ever after, I'll throw a fit." I let go of a big sigh of relief as soon as I read the last lines. Thank you for this. I'm almost afraid of reading Let's Do It. You are an awesome author, DK. Keep it up

Haha. I love it

Oy. Sorry for the long post

Personally, I think this is rather selfish. While I may like the idea of Garrett and Billy pursuing their relationship, the mere thought that DK killed off the wives so these two could have one greatly...upsets me. To kill off both Masako and Imaline to further a plot line of Garrett and Billy getting together will undoubtedly turn me off from the story. (Although I doubt even that would prevent me from reading the sequel. I just need to know what happens! ) Okay. First reactions? I had refrained from reading Dreams of Humanity because, like others, I wanted to be able to read the entire way through without having to wait for chapters. When I read DK's post saying that Chapter 40 would be the last of DoH, I decided it was time to read it. I enjoyed every single word I read, and went through a roller coaster of emotions. However, when I read the last couple paragraphs, I couldn't help but feel dismay. My first thought was "What the hell?!?!" (Accomanied by a rather loud gasp) Next thought was, "This is another Dawn of Tears!" (I was very disappointed with the abrupt ending). I quickly dismissed that idea though. My faith in DK as an author quickly silenced that irrational thought. But, nevertheless, I was still dismayed by the ending and quickly logged on to GA to find other people's opinions. I wanted to see what other people thought about the rather abrupt and disappointing ending to one of the best stories I have ever read. My dismay ended rather quickly when I realized that this really wasn't the end (I'm still a bit disappointed that I have to wait though ) I'm gonna have to agree a little bit with Graeme here. The ending of DoH really wasn't an ending at all. Granted, there are many novels and movies out there that end with a cliffhanger of sorts. For example, take a look at the recent X-men movie. At the end, we see that Magneto gains his powers back. A big shock for many people, myself included. This leaves room for another sequel, which I'm sure the ending of DoH was meant to do. However, there is one MAJOR difference between the two. The story of Garrett, Billy, Masako, Imaline, and countless others, by the end of DoH, has not finished. By the end of the third X-men movie, all the conflicts had been resolved (Well, most of them anyway). But, nevertheless, the main conflict had been resolved. However, this is not the case with DoH. The main conflict has not been resolved. Sequels are meant to continue existing stories. Finished stories. Stories that had already resolved a large part of its conflicts. Sequels are merely a continuation, meant to add new spice to an old story or present it at a completely different angle (As I myself am not an author, I would like to know what other authors think about this) Take for example DomLuka's 'The Log Way' and 'In the Fish Bowl." TLW's story had finished. ITFB added spice to an old story, shook it up, and presented it in a different way. Another example would be DK's 'Do Over' and its sequels. By the last paragraph of DO, the story had finished. DOR continued DO, and like ITFB to TLW, it added spice to an old story, shook it up, and presented it in a different way. I hope people are getting what I'm saying here. DoH has not been finished; thus, I can't see the second installment as a sequel. Like Graeme, I'll see it as Chapter 41 of DoH. With that said...When's the next chapter coming out?

Ditto ^^ Fuzzy? I'm liking the supernatural part of this story. That is, if I'm not mistaking something normal for something supernatural. Keep 'em coming

No, you got it correct ^^