Kawanee

I'll check it out soon... I've been busy and I'm catching up on the newness on the site.

Congrats Krista....

I updated... and thanks for starting this thread!

Guess what?? ANOTHER CHAPTER is UP!!! Thanks to my ONE fan Dagus! Anyway people check out the story... let me know if you love it.. hate it... have suggestions.. you know that sort of thing!

This is a couple of sites that writers might be interested in. These are 2 forum based RPG sites, for those of you not familiar with them here is a brief description: Basically you write create a character and write a biography for it, then play the character with other people. You will interact with other writers and respond to thier posts. Everything is written out... Anyway just send me a private message if you need help or have questions. You can contact me here or on the sites if you register. The boards are open to age 14-100 but we try to keep things at a PG 14 level but there are places you can RPG that are geared more to adults. We welcome all sexual orientations and you can play your character however you want. In my opinion it helps people become more descriptive in their writing, but more than that... it's fun! You can refer Kawanee here: (not mandatory but appreaciated) http://www.twisted-realities.org/index.php And Mirage here: http://www.midnight-shadows.org/?styleid=40

I have returned and have updated this story... sorry it took so long, this is performance season and I've had lots of choreography to learn and then performances, and rehersals. Things should be slowing down thank GOODNESS!

New Chapter is up!! Bedell's going to be a father? Who's the mother?

Well There are new chapters up on this story! I'm hoping people are enjoying it, but haven't really had any feedback in here. In chapter 6: Regan visits the village with Morgan and comes face to face with his attacker. In chapter 7: We learn that Regan's torment isn't over Bedell continues to affect him in unforeseen ways. Will Regan's father offer advice to Morgan? And is there anything that can be done to help the boy?

My story Alleys and Broken Dreams is in a contest... It is on Gather.com They are talking about having another contest next year, you must have complete You will need to join in order to vote, but there are over 2500 entrants and lots of reading to be done if you want, and you can review the stories as well. And it is yet another forum to post your stories!!! Hope you enjoy and vote for me!! The way to vote is to assign a star rating at the end of the article. To join: http://www.gather.com/register.jsp Here is the link to my story.. it is only 1 chapter. http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.jsp?arti...281474976936974

Chapter 5 is up... and a preview for next chapter.. Regan will come face to face with Bedell... also Arabeth makes a return visit.

New Chapter is up!

The new chapter is up! The Doctor

Alleys and Broken Dreams The streets are littered with people who once had hopes and dreams. Meet a man with a troubled past who helps other people get off the streets giving them hope to carry on... Lucy: an abused wife who left for the sake of her child Christina: pregnant left home to escape her father I posted all the way up to Chapter 17 of this story and completely revamped parts of it to make more sense. Some of the posts may run a little long, but I think the story is well worth reading. I'm trying to get it published so any and all suggestions are appreciated!

A new chapter has been added to From the Ashes. Check out the story of a firestarter trying to find her way through the world... It's rated T for teens, there's vampires, demons, firestarters and all sorts of magical creatures in caught in a classic struggle between good and evil. Evil is bad isn't it? Well maybe not, as a naive firestarter learns... everything isn't black and white; but various shades of grey. Can she overcome her predjudices to find love in the arms of a vampire?

A new story is up!! The unicorn and the Thief Chapter 1 and 2!! A unicorn loses his innocence in a case of mistaken identity and against his will, he is soul bound to his rapist. He cannot return home and is now stuck in his human form forever. He finds himself slave to cruel master until one day a thief sneaks into the house and frees him... but what can he do? If the soul bond is broken by death, the unicorn dies as well.

The Unicorn and the Thief A unicorn loses his innocence in a case of mistaken identity and against his will, he is soul bound to his rapist. He cannot return home and is now stuck in his human form forever. He finds himself slave to cruel master until one day a thief sneaks into the house and frees him... but what can he do? If the soul bond is broken by death, the unicorn dies as well. Main Characters: Regan, Coren, Bedell, Arabeth... and eventually the thief! A new story is up!! Check it out?

Sorry sinbad... i wasn't talking about this site.. I am still too new to know how to do a view count here.. Maybe we can suggest it here? for the next upgrade? Thanks Jalaki, I actually hadn't had time to check it out yet... I'm getting ready for a performance and things are crazy right now.

Thank you very much! I was thinking that by giving the reviews or comments on the story that it might show the target audience, and giving the number of hits the story had, might prove useful? One of my stories has over 4000 hits and 100 reviews... in less than month, and that it would be an accomplishment to be listed in the authors bio? I'll check the MissSnark site, thanks for recommendation.

I'm trying to get this story published and would like to get some input or reviews. If you give your permission, I'd like to use good reviews in my submission letter and of course I'll take constructive criticism as well... it just won't go in my letter Anyway I'm a new writer here and I hope you enjoy!! I actually have 5 stories on here so please check them all out... unless you are underage for the ones with the mature audiences. These are T rated.. Alleys and Broken Dreams Main Characters: Don, Robert Caldwell, Old Joe, Christina and Sarah. Don lives on the streets, he left home as a teenager after his mother died and things went to crap at home, he tries to help new arrivals get off the streets before it is too late. While Robert.. is a rich man who owns a financial consulting firm, helping the rich get richer, thier paths in life are very different... or are they? From the Ashes Characters: Saphyre Indahol, December Allen, Phoenix, and eventually Eleck oh! and two bit demons and other nastys... along with some secondary characters. This story is based on an RPG character I developed. Saphyre Indahol is a firestarter who was raped and is struggling to find her place in the world and the strength to rebuild her life. She's a bit of a spaz but a real sweetheart, she hates mornings and has been known to fling alarm clocks into alternate realms. Krymsyn Knights Main Characters: Jonathan, Sebastian, Bethany... and a few others to be introduced later. The prolouge tells of a love between Jonathan and Adrian, Adrian is suicidal upon learning of thedeath of his wife during child birth and the fact that he as a vampire cannot raise her. But the true story is set 19 years in the future and about Adrian's daughter Bethany. At the moment, Adrian and Jonathan's love story will be told in flashback to Bethany, if there is enough interest I might write thier story as a prequal. ADULT ORIENTED STORIES: WARNING: EXPLICIT CONTENT!! Do not read this is you are under legal age. The Shower Main Characters: Jay and Shawn Rub a dub dub 2 men in a tub... there is a short storyline, but right now it is listed as completed I am thinking of continuing the story and deal with Shawn's religious parents and his eventual coming out. Shining a light on the intolerance of organized religion and making interesting points to bring up when confronted by uniformed bigoted close minded jerks. Sorry didn't mean to go off on a rant. I'd appreciate the input on whether I should just end it the way it is... or continue on? Please advise! The Seduction of Seth Main Characters: Jacob and Seth Seth accidentally catches a man enjoying himself emmensely, and comes face to face with him the next day. All is not as it seems with Jacob however and Seth finds himself the object of Jacob's desire. One problem... Seth is a straight man with a girlfriend and a curious mind as well as a "little friend" with a mind of its own. I think the story is entertaining, meant to make you laugh as well as keep you guessing if Seth will ever give in to Jacob, and what will happen with Clarissa if he does. There is 1 session of straight sex between Seth and Clarissa, then it is on to Jacob's attempts to bed Seth. COMING SOON: The Unicorn and the Thief A unicorn loses his virginity in a violent encounter.. now he's stuck in human form and bound to his rapist. Hope you enjoy the stories and Thank you very much for your time ~Kawanee P.S. Yes I am aware of all the S's and J's named characters... I like them! I'll try to work on it, and yes... I have accidentally called them the wrong names in the stories!

Honestly... Daniel Radcliffe NEEDS to break free of the "Harry Potter" persona or he'll end up a has been child star. Type cast into oblivian, starring in a controversial show is one of the quickest ways to do it. Not only does he need to break free... he NEEDS to kill the image once and for all. IMO I say good for him!

Hi all, kinda new here... just looking around and familiarizing myself with the site. Thanks to the helpful people here I'm figuring things out... sloooooooooooooooowly but surely! ~Kawanee

A couple of friends sent me here. So far so good, I put 5 stories on the site, so