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In my opinion, if we see the one who has sacrificed the most, it is Alec, so Finn has not sacrificed much at the relationship level to continue together. If it is known that I listen to him, he taught him to live when he was a teenager, but at the time he preferred his family, they don't see it from alec's perspective and vice versa, each one only sees it from their point of view and doesn't put themselves in the other's shoes I hope alec proposes a 50 50 that is to say let's see how he goes living here for a while but then living in my new house to see how things go, the two win and discover themselves
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imagine that two eggs appear, one white and one black, and they are from Kadin and Jevikel!!!, wow and from the way Lukodan didn't say anything when Kadin asked Jevikel what he looked like, I think he had his eye on Kadin and the way the writer said they had to make their decisions apparently not everything will be good
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As I see it, Dex thinks or adds that Jonathan told Maddox that Rusty touched his butt, I hope to see how Dex will act when he discovers that this is not the case, will he apologize to Jonathan for Maddox when he finds out? jhonatan will surely leave for a while, the safest thing to give Maddox and his friends space
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Part 4 The Warm Winds from the South
J.L commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Part 4 The Warm Winds from the South
times are the same, but people not each generation develops as a result of another and this or improves or worsens is on the side of people with conscience and respect helping this change to be understood, it is like the grinch who hated Christmas according to when in fact the grinch hated people, a brief advice if the human is capable of respecting his neighbor, he can advance and evolve mutual respect is the basis of coexistence -
enserio de acuerdo en que este capitulo es un relleno o que? como vas a poner este capitulo es mas de lo mismo amigo tienes bloqueo de escritor o que? deja que nik se enfrente a su mamá y vas a esperar a que amos se lo folle? for do something with nic and let the boy be destroyed, no wonder the poor thing doesn't trust anyone
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Chapter 20: Frank's Discovery
J.L commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 20: Frank's Discovery
it's late now it's david and andy -
solo puedo decir que mas de una vez derramé lagrimas felicidades gran historia
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Chapter 16: The Man and The Child
J.L commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 16: The Man and The Child
andy is 19 years old, 13 years have already passed since the death of the fetus, it would have been 6 years, therefore, andy is the son of the prostitute that the detectives visited when the car caught fire, since the age coincides with that child, they only say that he appeared to be 4 years old but if we go to the idea due to poor nutrition he did not grow enough at that age. -
It only remains to wait for this sea of emotions of both to calm down
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for god's sake because everyone is against alec they don't see he's a teenager who grew up and was home schooled the whole time he had no social interaction with other kids as a result of this he expresses no feelings for anyone other than by their parents. . how do they want me to understand these feelings if he is new to this on the other hand they throw him in a high school where the essence of each person is afloat obviously he is going to collapse and by the way the same idea for finn, if he was also looking for river and alec why not i call or text alec. this guy also has his own demons stop attacking alec
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I just hope that when he leaves and returns he is one of those who changes for the better and leaves many open-mouthed with his new look
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I was asking how old these boys were, I know that Finn is 17 and Alec is 15, how old is River? Besides, it is the conversation behind them that really hurt, not what they said, but rather that it was behind their backs instead of saying it about forehead. When I was in what you call secondary school, there were lonely boys like that, but since in the story they didn't mess with anyone and nobody messed with them, one respected them, I think my secondary school was great in that sense. each one in his world and pending of each one.
