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    enserio de acuerdo en que este capitulo es un relleno o que? como vas a poner este capitulo es mas de lo mismo amigo tienes bloqueo de escritor o que? deja que nik se enfrente a su mamá y vas a esperar a que amos se lo folle? for do something with nic and let the boy be destroyed, no wonder the poor thing doesn't trust anyone
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    it's late now it's david and andy
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    solo puedo decir que mas de una vez derramé lagrimas felicidades gran historia
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    andy is 19 years old, 13 years have already passed since the death of the fetus, it would have been 6 years, therefore, andy is the son of the prostitute that the detectives visited when the car caught fire, since the age coincides with that child, they only say that he appeared to be 4 years old but if we go to the idea due to poor nutrition he did not grow enough at that age.
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    Chapter 4: Drive

    J.L commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 4: Drive

    It only remains to wait for this sea of emotions of both to calm down
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    Chapter 4: Drive

    J.L commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Chapter 4: Drive

    for god's sake because everyone is against alec they don't see he's a teenager who grew up and was home schooled the whole time he had no social interaction with other kids as a result of this he expresses no feelings for anyone other than by their parents. . how do they want me to understand these feelings if he is new to this on the other hand they throw him in a high school where the essence of each person is afloat obviously he is going to collapse and by the way the same idea for finn, if he was also looking for river and alec why not i call or text alec. this guy also has his own demons stop attacking alec
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    Three: Get Together

    J.L commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Three: Get Together

    I just hope that when he leaves and returns he is one of those who changes for the better and leaves many open-mouthed with his new look
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    Three: Get Together

    J.L commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Three: Get Together

    I was asking how old these boys were, I know that Finn is 17 and Alec is 15, how old is River? Besides, it is the conversation behind them that really hurt, not what they said, but rather that it was behind their backs instead of saying it about forehead. When I was in what you call secondary school, there were lonely boys like that, but since in the story they didn't mess with anyone and nobody messed with them, one respected them, I think my secondary school was great in that sense. each one in his world and pending of each one.
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