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That's awesome. I've been checking back occasionally in case I missed the email.

Just spent the last few days re-reading this story. I'm so excited to see what you add to it. No pressure but how is the progress going?

I really enjoyed this story. A fun and interesting spin. Thank you

If a vote is being taken, I would love to see 2 carseats in there. If Loren hasn't already, he should definitely trade his Mercedes Sprinter camper for a Mercedes Sprinter 12 passenger.

I was genuinely surprised by the ending. I thought they'd be the ultimate uncles. I had no clue Loren would decide to be a dad. I thought that was his hard limit but I'm more than happy with the developments. Thank you for this story and I cannot wait to see what else is coming. Any clues????

This story was the highlight of my week. Every Monday and Thursday I prioritized this posting over everything else. And for good reason. I fell in love with Loren and Jay (and Aidan and Carson). Where Jay has more of the knight and shining armor vibe, I loved Loren from the beginning. There was always a little mystery about him. One thing I love about this story is that she doesn't give things away too early, and always leave you guessing and trying to figure things out. Sometimes I was right but mostly I was wrong. Either way, every chapter is a delight to read. The story does not go stagnant or get boring. I can't think of a single chapter I didn't like. They were either great or excellent.

Can't say it better myself

I think it was a perfect sunset sail for them

At first I was thinking poor Loren, but then I was like POOR JAY! Here we thought it would be a few weeks, maybe a month…not a whole year! Loren is right, it’s not a lizard, it won’t grow make. I don’t think Loren’s gone more than a week without sex since he was…too young! phenomenal chapter. I want front row seats to the sex dungeon!

Us every chapter leading up to this: Am I the only one that thinks this is Seamus' doing? Does he not scream over protective? I almost lost my coffee on this one: This so incredibly Loren to the core 🤣🤣 Where do you come up with this stuff?? 😂😂🤣🤣 @84Mags I got a new comment badge also!

WE'RE MOVING TO DENVER!

Here's my wager for what Loren does. I'm probably wrong but, I'm going to say it just in case, because when the underdog wins, they win big. Loren is going to suggest moving to Denver. C'mon people. He's been driving around Denver all day. He knows Jay loves it there. The kids are there. He's looking at houses that catch his eye. Houses in good neighborhoods with good schools. We know in BN that they end up moving there. This is the moment. I'm telling you. I'm calling it right now.

They have NOTHING to do. They're getting Loe out of the house so they can complete their master plan and wait for Jay to arrive. Sneaky bitches This made me LOL. The evil eye.

If I block out the last portion of the chapter, I would say this rivals as one of my favorite chapters yet. The entire scene with Lars, Loren, and the guys is perfection. It is so well written the way they revert back to their old selves. It's true and honest healing happening. Courtney and Jay mirroring each other is also beautiful. For all the harm done, they were sent angels. Jay had a realization of his own when he got back to Wisconsin. The tides are changing. It looks like there might be a little scuffle with him and his brothers, but the long term changes happening will be for the positive. Someone on here has been counting down to BN Epilogue. It's the fall now. September? Give or take. T minus 5 or 6 months. That's our time frame to get this mess cleaned up. Get to work Loren.

I thought Loren got drunk simply because they were celebrating. But now you have me thinking. It's plausible. There is enough happening that maybe Loren isn't handling it so well. If he knows about Lars and Courtney starting their journey to parenthood, that could also be a contributing factor. His brother, who shares his trauma, is able to move on.

Since Loren and Lars have been pretty well dissected, I want to touch on how amazing the beginning of the chapter is. C'mon people, LOREN IS DREAMING OF BEING MAN PREGNANCIES and making dutch babies for breakfast and forecasting baby showers. If his babaries (baby ovaries) are not revving up, than I don't know what the hell is happening. He wants babies. He wants Jay's babies. I hope reconciling witt Jay gives him the closure he needs to move on.

This right here. It's why I come back over and over and over

I want an explanation. I need to know how this kind of mind works. It's foreign to me.

This scares me.

My mind had also gone in a different direction but the outcome was the same, maybe worse. I figured the parents had lied but to know the extend of what they'd done...sheesh. It was hard to read, envisioning two 7 year old boys being subjected to this kind of abuse. Terrible.

I don't get anxiety but I was feeling stressed as they got closer to the meeting. I almost had to put my phone down when they walked through the cafe. I couldn't handle it anymore!

You two kill me 🤣🤣🤣🤣

⬆️⬆️⬆️⬆️ All the love. Carson is the first baby to be born into this new and glorious family growing around Loren. He was never going to turn down the request to be the lady oven liaison because he won’t let anything happen to this kid. I see big BIG changes ahead

besides a well picked GIF, you've been rendered commentless. I'm impressed.

I'm 50/50. We lock our doors but not when we're home. So I didn't find it strange that his family came in. Although...Jay is uber famous, so his doors should be locked... Regardless, I'm glad his parents walked in. HILAROUS