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  1. Fog of Redemption is an epic story of three people lives that take a dramatic twist as the entire would in plunged into nuclear war.
  2. Chapter 3 It had been a long day at work for Allen. As he drove home, he thought about how nice a long hot bath would feel. It had been two day since Gil had left, and Allen was starting to get worried. Gil often had to leave for days at a time, but be he usually called everyday that he was away. Something about this time felt different. There were things going on the Allen didn’t understand, though he tried with all his might to do so. Allen wished that he knew what Gil did when
  3. Fog of Redemption Chapter 2 “Gilthas Tentrious, otherwise knows as Sylvantrius, please step forward,” spoke an elderly man dressed in deep purple robes. “You are called forth to this council on the grounds that you have broken the Code of Silence. These are grave charges and, if proven guilty, will result in the excommunication from The Order of the Light. Do you understand these charges?” “Yes High Magnus.” “How then, do you plea?” “I am not guilty of breaking
  4. Fog of Redemption Chapter 1 He could barely think over the din of the screams. People ran in every direction, trying to escape from the destruction, looking for missing loved one, or trying to figure out what was going on. Everywhere he looked there was death and mayhem. Giving into the urge to bolt in a panicky run, he took off for the town square. As he was running he pasted a young child screaming for her mother. Pity took his heart and he slowed down to help the girl. As h
  5. Here's my submission... can't decide if I likes it or hates it. lol I might make another.
  6. Thanks. It's Wednesday, and I see I have my answer. See ya'll Friday!
  7. Since chapter 27 was posted on Sunday, does that void out the Wednesday post? Not that I mind waiting till Friday for the next installment. It's a fight between wanting the next installment and not wanting the story to end.
  8. Awesome as usual. I'm really glad to see the new book up and running. Urban Fantasies are a real favorite of mine. I was a bit shocked to see the new evil that was eluded to in the last chapter of Growing Pains, seemingly stamped out in the first chapter. Like everyone else, I don't think we've the last of it. One interesting note that I was very happy to read was that Worthington wants to work primarily with the magical world rather than the mundane world. I guess a part of me wishes that could be the case with me too. hahaha
  9. Very interesting article indeed. I have to say that I don't think his theory is a sound one though. If I understand the theory correctly, it basically says that you can use gravity to "pull" time back around it's self to create a loop. This possible because time is relevant to the speed in which you are traveling. For example: Travel through space for 50 years going the speed on light and return to earth. You will find that it has been far longer that 50 year since you left but in reality, millions of years. This would actually be time travel in it's self, but to the future. So what this guy is saying is we take gravity and slow it down. I personally can't think of anything source of gravity that would be strong enough to slow down time. The strongest gravitational pull in the universe comes from the super black holes that are in the center of every galaxy. Gravity so strong that it sucks in light. Who knows what they do to time. My point here is: if you use gravity strong enough to bend time, like a black hole, how do you contain it? How do you keep it from crushing you into oblivian. This truly would be a project for the the future when we understand the cosmos better than we do now. Dan's idea seems more likely. Make a bubble out side space and time, and transmit data. Or travel faster than the speed light. Same idea as the gravity expect you go forward so far you end up looping back around. To bad faster than light travel is thought to be impossible. Seems like and easier route to take.
  10. Sorry took so long to post... been busy today. Read the new Chapter last night before bed and as always, it was great. Dan dropped enough hints for a few of us to pick up on, but it's always good to have confirmation of ones theories. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
  11. Excellent chapter. It's got me thinking. I comment more later after a few more post are up. Don't want to spoil anything for someone who hasn't read yet.
  12. I have to disagree. I don't think it's just his mother's side. I think his father had it (Whatever IT is), as well as the lawyer Mr. Smythe, and Stacy. When Worthington sat on her lap he felt a tingling. I'll bet anything she was either delving to "feel" the extent of his sun burn and scratches or healing them in some fashion. This is story is listed as a modern/urban fantasy and I seem to recall a blog by Dan mentioning a story he was working on that involved magick of some fashion. Anyone else thinking along these lines?
  13. I think there is a lot going on in this story that we haven't been told yet. Dan is excellent in hiding things in plain site. There is all the obvious stuff that have been mention in the above posts, but there is something else completely that I am curious about. His Aunt says something about him being raised with a different code of ethics and stresses that he will not use his abilities to compel people into doing things they wouldn't normally do. He(Worthington) seemed to have missed the meaning behind this but I didn't. I think this family has some kind of extra sensory perception thing going on. There were clues all over in this chapter. I think Worthington can feel peoples emotions, read their minds and project his will onto other people. In fact, I think the whole family can. It kind of reminds me of the movie, The Covenant. Old money, inherited power, family secrets so deep the make the grand canyon look like a regular hole in the ground. Still though, this is the first chapter, and I might be reading way to much into things. We'll see how it all plays out.
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