Gil Andrews

Chapter 3 It had been a long day at work for Allen. As he drove home, he thought about how nice a long hot bath would feel. It had been two day since Gil had left, and Allen was starting to get worried. Gil often had to leave for days at a time, but be he usually called everyday that he was away. Something about this time felt different. There were things going on the Allen didn’t understand, though he tried with all his might to do so. Allen wished that he knew what Gil did when

Fog of Redemption Chapter 2 “Gilthas Tentrious, otherwise knows as Sylvantrius, please step forward,” spoke an elderly man dressed in deep purple robes. “You are called forth to this council on the grounds that you have broken the Code of Silence. These are grave charges and, if proven guilty, will result in the excommunication from The Order of the Light. Do you understand these charges?” “Yes High Magnus.” “How then, do you plea?” “I am not guilty of breaking

Fog of Redemption Chapter 1 He could barely think over the din of the screams. People ran in every direction, trying to escape from the destruction, looking for missing loved one, or trying to figure out what was going on. Everywhere he looked there was death and mayhem. Giving into the urge to bolt in a panicky run, he took off for the town square. As he was running he pasted a young child screaming for her mother. Pity took his heart and he slowed down to help the girl. As h

Fog of Redemption is an epic story of three people lives that take a dramatic twist as the entire would in plunged into nuclear war.

WOW!! Awesome. Way to go GA. I'm just starting out on the threads here, but I hope to commit many more posts of my own in the years to come. To all of you who have been posting and making this place as great as it is, Keep on rockin!

This is indeed the strangest question I have been asked today. I have to agree that it would be incest. Sleeping with anyone that shares your families genetics can only be that, be it clone or otherwise. Would it be weird for two half brother/cousin clone people to have sex? Personally not to me. If it were a girl/boy situation, I would find that weird. I know it sounds kinda contradictory on my part but two boys or two girls are not going to produce off spring that will be uhhhh defective(?). So yeah, incest. Totally.

I found the site through nifty. I was reading Savage Moon by Comie and found the site here though The Shack Out Back. Since then I can't seem to tear myself away! There is a lot of talent here.

I think confidence plays a very large part in an author's ability to write. Natural talent will only take a person so far no matter what they are trying to do. There are some awesome stories out there that are muddled because the author is thinking to much on how the reader will respond to their work. Of course if your writing you should be thinking about the reader, but not to the point the wording becomes bombastic or underdeveloped. You have to have faith that your plot is a good one and that readers will respond to it. When you doubt that faith, that's when writing gets lost in translation. Either because your trying to hard, or not enough.

I have to agree with everyone else so far that unrealistic sex between teenagers is a bit of a tern off as far as a story goes. I respect a writers choice to go that route but, I generally don't read beyond a few chapters. In fact, my encounter with teenage sex was with Comie's Savage Moon. I was blown away with his story. At first I felt guilty for reading. Like I was doing something wrong. I just could help myself though and kept on. I found Savage Moon through Nifty, and after a while found myself at the gay authors web site. From there I read Gone from Darkness. Couldn't take my eyes off the screen. Then I started reading other authors hosted on the site, and I found that a lot of the stories DO involve teenage sex. Most are very realistic, and not taken to an extreme. Needless to say my guilty feelings quickly faded.