Napaguy

What a masterful handling of this tangled web. The sins of the "fathers" shall come home to roost and the "children" shall rise up and lead them. Kudos again to my favorite author.

I luv this. This is Mark Arbour at his finest! What more can I say! Hats Off Lenard

Beginnings of a good story -- keep up the good work

Well done -- if only Avery had the confidence and courage let Matt know the Hell he lives in.

Great story line-- all laid out .. Now let's see what happens!

Memories of such abuse will be a difficult recovery regardless of when or how they are dealt with I. The future. The coffee shop meeting gives hope for the future.

How sweet -- a no nonsense love story without all the drama etc keep up the romance going!

Perhaps our boy has found his savior - I am hopeful anyway!

Kudos for sorting out Zach's family mess. Once everyone discovered how the pieces fit together, the puzzle was solved. The Brad and Marc relationship seems "weird". They seem to be "dancing" around one another instead of with one another. Will it survive? Mark, your writings continue to entertain and amaze me. Best Regards Len

Isn't it strange that that the school admin is not more tuned to the matter of emotional and physical abuse. My heart goes out to those like Avery who must suffer as others turn the other way.

It is so precious as a parent to be allowed children to carefore, nourish, and protect, as they grow and develop and eventually find their way in this world. It is such a travesty and is so wrong for a parent to violate this trust with abuse, selfish, thoughtless and cruel acts that will leave a child scared for life even if they are perchance fortunate to escape by some means sooner than later. the message is clear I just hope the story brings relief and restitution to this tender soul.

Good start on what appears to be a new story looking forward to timely updates

Great story development as always. I for one am always delighted to have Will featured. this is a tough and delicate matter that is begging resolution. wishing you a great new year. lh

Touché! And a smooth move for Zach. You amaze me Mark ,every chapter fits so perfect around the characters involved. you are truly the best read around. Keep up up the good work. lhh