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  1. CasualWanderer82
    I think the term "Giorgio's boy" is one of endearment. It means Nate came to be Taletti's right hand.
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    Nate made a lot of mistakes. But he also made at least two things right in his life...
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    Thank you for the feedback @Erik
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    I do like my stories with a twist!
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    Thank YOU for reading and bringing my stories to life!
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    (23 years earlier) Nate sat slouched on the edge of a weathered wooden bench, the paint long since peeled away to reveal splintered grain beneath. A cigarette dangled lazily between his fingers, the ember glowing as he took a slow drag. His eyes scanned the playground with sharp precision, moving from face to face like a predator surveying its domain. The smoke curled from his lips in thin tendrils, breaking apart in the warm breeze before dissipating into nothing. Around him, the usual cre
  7. CasualWanderer82
    I'm taking my time! Thank you @The Donling 😉
  8. CasualWanderer82
    Next chapter will definitely flesh out Enzo and his motivations. Thank you for commenting!
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    This is as much a story about understanding who Nate is and what he's done, as it is about the boys realizing who they are without him.
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    Thank YOU for being ao kind.
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    I wrote chapter 8 and 9 back to back, ao it'll be here before the weekend hopefully. I think I might break my 10 chapter record with his story!
  12. CasualWanderer82
    This made me chuckle...
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    The world around Caleb felt suffocating. A structure loomed before him, its grids endless, stretching far beyond what his eyes could see. The air was thick and heavy, like molasses, pressing down on his lungs. He was trapped inside, the only exit lost somewhere in the dark. Then, the voices. They came suddenly, sharp and chaotic, echoing from a distance. Men yelling, their words tangled in rage. The sound of bodies slamming, fists meeting flesh, something crashing to the floor. Th
  14. CasualWanderer82

    "24 Hours"

    CasualWanderer82 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "24 Hours"

    Good to see you back @SWGuy I missed your insightful comments.
  15. CasualWanderer82
    Nate is definitely a compelling, complex character. "Manhunt" isn't about looking for Nate. It's about understanding him.
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    I'm glad you liked it, @austinbiguy Buckle up!
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    Caleb's the least prepared for this. It's expected that he'll shut down when the only thing that held him together is suddenly gone. But he's slowly understanding just how strong he can be. It's just...a different kind of strength.
  18. CasualWanderer82
    Love seeing readers jump on the Ryan's "love train". Don't judge a book by it's cover.
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    (30 years earlier) The rock struck the side of the little boy's head with a dull thud. For a second, there was nothing but silence, no pain, no reaction, just the world tipping sideways as he stumbled, then crumpled to the ground. Then came the heat, the wet trickle of blood sliding down his temple, and the sound of laughter. Harsh, ugly laughter. The boy blinked, dazed, his tiny hands pressing against the dirt. He lifted his head just enough to see them standing over him, a
  20. CasualWanderer82
    Smart cookie @349bdr Unfortunately for Nate, I don't think it worked...😅
  21. CasualWanderer82
    Ditto! ❤️
  22. CasualWanderer82
    I wouldn't know. My chapters are as long as they have to be to tell a good story. Chances are if you think like Jeff's character you're probably reading "average crap" too.
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    You and me both @Cane23 !
  24. CasualWanderer82
    Jenna's...yeah, she's a bitch.
  25. CasualWanderer82
    The cabin was getting a little too crowded for such big personalities...😜
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