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  1. JLynch

    Chapter 18 C.O.

    JLynch commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 18 C.O.

    “One best stand way back” Highly recommended. Pent up angst is an apt description.
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    Chapter 18 C.O.

    JLynch commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 18 C.O.

    I don’t think Deck really cares that much about his siblings, especially Louie Lee. But, it was just the shock of it that got to him. I believe the person who inspired the character Ozzie actually IS (or was) on Chaturbate. I found a video of him on another site that was apparently part of a Chaturbate performance. I don’t know what his SN is though. Actually, most of my characters are inspired by a photo or video I’ve found online. I don’t believe I can post any of them, though.
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    Chapter 18 C.O.

    JLynch commented on JLynch's story chapter in Chapter 18 C.O.

    Unlike a lot of stories about teenagers where the boys seem to jump into bed with each other with nary a hesitation, a lot of these early encounters are awkward and tentative. C.O. is obviously having trouble sorting out his feelings for Thayer, Ty, and Ozzie. Equally, or even more so, Thayer is struggling with his sexual identity, willing to let himself be seduced by Cutie while having all of these feelings about C.O. and, regrettably for him, even Romey.
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    Chapter 18 C.O.

    JLynch posted new chapter in The Jerk-Off

    Ty hadn’t done anything so normal in such a long time, he’d almost forgotten what it was like. When he was in high school, he actually made the varsity basketball team. Even though his height was modest compared to his towering teammates, he still had some moves. At 5’9” he wasn’t going to be able to shoot over a lot of guys, so he developed a patented move to feint one way, then go the other way, spin around and release long jump shots from the three-point arc. When Blong told him he
  5. JLynch
    Totally a side idea. There is no story, “Rory Gets His.”
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    Have patience. This chapter might have been a bit frustrating thematically but it’s sort of necessary for the rest of the story to come together.
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    That IS an interesting idea. I’ll have to let that percolate.
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    Nice summary but your conclusions may not be correct. Read on!
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    His eyes opened slightly, just little slits. In this moment, the first thing he saw was the most beautiful woman in the world. Maybe it was his own reflection in a mirror. He imagined it could be. Then, he realized it wasn’t. It was his mother. “Wake up, you cute thing,” she purred, giving him light kisses all over his face. His eyes, his cheeks, his nose, her lips barely grazing his. Responding with soft murmurs, Ozzie began to stretch his limbs. “C’mon, sweetheart. It’s noon. Ti
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    Perhaps. But, Ron Meshbesher is gone now. His firm has survived, however. His name was famously evoked in the Cohen Brothers movie, A Serious Man. At the very end of the movie, Larry Gopnik’s lawyer (Yes! That’s right!) tells him he is in serious trouble and he’s going to need expert help. “You’re gonna need Ron Meshbesher!” When I saw the movie in a Twin Cities movie theater, the entire audience broke into raucous laughter.
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    It’s kind of a mess, isn’t it? A fun mess, I think. Of course, what do I know? Haha! Yeah…and what about that body?
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    5:30 a.m. The sun was just peering over the horizon, the sudden glare causing Freddie’s eyes to flutter open. He squinted before burying his eyes deeper into the pillow. His arm was slung over Elliott’s back, Freddie’s cock neatly burrowed between his butt cheeks. He pressed his lips to the back of Elliott’s head, delighting in the taste and smell at the nape of his neck. He felt his dick begin to swell. Last night had ranked right up at the top of the secret life he sometimes ca
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    Yeah. What about that guy (Cornish Jago)?
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    I wouldn’t characterize the interaction of C.O. and Thayer as a flame out. They are both feeling their way through this…uncharted territory for these teenagers. The emotional distance between Thayer at 16 and C.O. at 18, compared to Ozzie at 19, is profound.
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    This is not really a hint…or maybe it is—but who is “their guy?”
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    Just as he was entering a higher level of inner peace and contentment, the Living ECK Master felt the sting of a mosquito biting the side of his face. His sensitivity was so heightened he could literally feel the blood being sucked out of his cheek. Instinctively, his hand shot up and slapped his face, jolting him back down to a lower vibrational level. After a spirited banquet with his senior advisors, during which they courted a newly anointed member, Sri Mahanta tried to quiet himself wi
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    Hahaha! Not really! I try to keep the butt fucking down to a realistic level.
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    That comment literally had me laughing out loud. Good one, Dog! I guess we’ll have to wait until the end to find out more about Shamus.
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    Thanks to all for reading my story. For those wondering where the story is heading and will end, we’re just past the mid-point.
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    Good summary, Scrubber! Some inaccuracies but your assumptions are not totally unfounded. Let’s see what happens!
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    In a sense this is intentional. The “motivations” of the players are confusing because the left hands don’t know what the right hands are doing. And, Shamus is just scratching the surface of it all.
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    Flat on his back, Dino stared at the ceiling mounted mirror over his bed. What a lucky guy! After a satisfied yawn, he looked at himself a little more critically, trying to suck his stomach in. Maybe I should cut back a bit on the Osso Buco, he thought, patting his tummy and watching it jiggle in the mirror. Although, giving it a second thought, it had tasted so damn good last night. A fabulous dinner at his favorite restaurant, Piero’s. A joint richly decorated in dark wood, Italianate painted
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    Ah yes…Fred and Elliott. I think Louie Lee knew perfectly well how he was going to resume his life, even without the property on Ledecker Island. That is, if, in fact, he didn’t steal it back and keep the money to boot, as Scrubber has speculated. I guess we’re gonna find out…eventually. Thanks again for your thoughtful comments.
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    Be sure to buckle up, good Dr! If you thought this was going places you’d never thought to suspect, You ain’t seen nuttin’ yet!
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    You’re coming to some perfectly logical conclusions that will prove to be incorrect! Read on…!
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