Overall a good story although I found it getting bogged down with the story line. If it been me I probably would have tried to decrease some of the story line at k 's estate, but I am not a writer. Would give it 4 out of 5.
Can't say I have read a sci-fi plot quite like this one so congratulations . The addition of the relationship between the main characters also adds some fun
I am fairly new to this site and apologize for not adding a comment earlier. I kept hitting liked, but didn't see any changes till I scrolled through the comments. I like the story as well as the main character. There's apparently a long way to go in the story. Thanks,
Understood! I don't write. My is a technical/ physical calling, but I can understand how unhappy reviews can effect your passion. In any case good recovery!