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  1. jaclp

    Chapter 29

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 29

    An interesting way of writing! A basic story line with outtakes for the side players! I like the story line, but the outtakes tend to slow it down. I won't complain!🫠
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    Chapter 15

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 15

    I hope you had a wall for diagrams and maps of the characters and plot line for this series of stories! I'm not sure I could even plot them now even having read them within the last 3 to 4 weeks.
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    Chapter 1

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Interesting start! The story line appears to be equal parts fantasy adventure and teenage angst. It will be interesting to see which wins out! On to book three!
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    Chapter 24

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 24

    I Agee this was one of the better chapters. I am not sure that boring and plot development have to be synonymous. Not being a writer and somewhat dyslexic, story development is not my strength, but the more boring and the less boring can be melded . On to the next chapter!
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    Chapter 11

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I am not a writer, but it is interesting to read the author's plan for the next chapter.😏
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    Chapter 5

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 5

    So far a good story-line! It meshes with the last book also!
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    Prologue

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Prologue

    A lot of background from the first book! MOST helpful! Not sure if you want comments this much time after the book.
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    Chapter 12

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 12

    You're a good enough writer that telling your readers about the number of narrators is a waste.
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    Chapter 1

    jaclp commented on Lupus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Good start! I guess I will be reading the whole series! Thanks!
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    The epilog was a great set-up for the next book. I liked this one better than the last. It seemed to flow better, but then I am not a writer! Good entertainment!
  11. jaclp
    I hate bipolar disorders. They are so difficult to treat. You have people who know everything is perfect or everything is broken beyond fixing! 😒
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  13. jaclp
    I HAVE found manic depression one of the hardest diseases to treat. It was a constant battle because the circumstances could always change 180 degrees. Circumstances frequently bore little to do with the circumstances, and people frequently had no feel for the turns!
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    Epilogue

    jaclp commented on Stellar's story chapter in Epilogue

    Overall a good story although I found it getting bogged down with the story line. If it been me I probably would have tried to decrease some of the story line at k 's estate, but I am not a writer. Would give it 4 out of 5.
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    Crucible Of War

    jaclp commented on Stellar's story chapter in Crucible Of War

    Can't say I have read a sci-fi plot quite like this one so congratulations . The addition of the relationship between the main characters also adds some fun
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