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  1. jaclp

    Epilogue

    Overall a good story although I found it getting bogged down with the story line. If it been me I probably would have tried to decrease some of the story line at k 's estate, but I am not a writer. Would give it 4 out of 5.
  2. jaclp

    Crucible Of War

    Can't say I have read a sci-fi plot quite like this one so congratulations . The addition of the relationship between the main characters also adds some fun
  3. jaclp

    Key Of Hope

    Good character development. Mira stays on the sidelines.
  4. jaclp

    Light Of Faith

    Ya! It would shorten things a whole lot
  5. jaclp

    Shield Of Spirit

    I am fairly new to this site and apologize for not adding a comment earlier. I kept hitting liked, but didn't see any changes till I scrolled through the comments. I like the story as well as the main character. There's apparently a long way to go in the story. Thanks,
  6. jaclp

    Chapter 7

    Understood! I don't write. My is a technical/ physical calling, but I can understand how unhappy reviews can effect your passion. In any case good recovery!
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    Chapter 7

    It has been a good series though the first 1/3 of the second book didn't seem flowing as the rest. I will probably be buying the rest.
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    Chapter 3

    This was too easy!
  9. jaclp

    Chapter 2

    I can feel the final conflict getting closer
  10. Good read! Well put together! Some sex, but not overl y focused! I like Scifi and this fulfills a good story line.
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