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It is a pleasant short story about 2 lucky friends!

Now begins the unraveling!

Well, three books down, hopefull, the next will be up or at least not further down!

An interesting way of writing! A basic story line with outtakes for the side players! I like the story line, but the outtakes tend to slow it down. I won't complain!🫠

I hope you had a wall for diagrams and maps of the characters and plot line for this series of stories! I'm not sure I could even plot them now even having read them within the last 3 to 4 weeks.

Interesting start! The story line appears to be equal parts fantasy adventure and teenage angst. It will be interesting to see which wins out! On to book three!

I Agee this was one of the better chapters. I am not sure that boring and plot development have to be synonymous. Not being a writer and somewhat dyslexic, story development is not my strength, but the more boring and the less boring can be melded . On to the next chapter!

I am not a writer, but it is interesting to read the author's plan for the next chapter.😏

So far a good story-line! It meshes with the last book also!

A lot of background from the first book! MOST helpful! Not sure if you want comments this much time after the book.

You're a good enough writer that telling your readers about the number of narrators is a waste.

Good start! I guess I will be reading the whole series! Thanks!

The epilog was a great set-up for the next book. I liked this one better than the last. It seemed to flow better, but then I am not a writer! Good entertainment!

I hate bipolar disorders. They are so difficult to treat. You have people who know everything is perfect or everything is broken beyond fixing! 😒