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Good News And Bad News
gothishin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Good News And Bad News
I think than in a deep, fundamental level, Adrian already start to fall for Edward. Same goes for Edward. I kinda like this dynamic of them treating each other like dirty little w* in bed and cuddling and teasing afterwards. It's a dance of dominance that is beautiful(and hot) to watch, but I wonder how long till this dance have a romantic music. And Oh Boy, Mike is a lucky one. Ryan is going to take him for a wild ride, I can feel it lol -
Out Of The Frying Pan And Into The Fire
gothishin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Out Of The Frying Pan And Into The Fire
Yeah, I don't want Mike to have a threasome with that Gino. What a prick. -
Sometimes, You Just Want To Eat At Home
gothishin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Sometimes, You Just Want To Eat At Home
I kinda wish Mike would have explored that threasome with Gino and his boyfriend. Maybe because lately I have been reading too much storys with cuckold lol. I knew Chris was too perfect to be true, but I'm still glad that his problem is that he's not completely out of the closet instead of being married with kids in the closet hahaha And I still can't decide how to feel about Edwards and what to expect of him. -
I think it's cute how in the middle of their crazy lifes, the three of them find time to meet each other and talk about their misadiventures and conquests. A true friendship.
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Poor Mike, always the unlucky one of the group Or maybe not... I can think about a few things you could have from blowing your boss that are much more delicious than a raise lol
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I'm surprised with myself. I didn't thought I would be this interested in Adrian's plot hahaha. But at the same time Edward is the cocky one of the relationship-not-really-relationship of them, so I can't stop thinking that would be wonderful to see Edward head over hills for Adrian, in his own way lol
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Of All The Gyms In The World, You Had To Walk Into Mine
gothishin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Of All The Gyms In The World, You Had To Walk Into Mine
Damn, I'm really hooked up on Adrian's plot now. Mike's plot also has a lot of potencial. -
Here I go to another adventure. I really like Jared and Mike. I totally understand this feeling of not being wanted and lack of self-steem like both of them express. I'm curious to know if you're going for a cuckold route or a open relationship one with Mike's povo. And Adrian... Let's see how this will go. If him and Edward explore some BDSM themes I would be totally on board. I know you flirted with this plot in some of your previous stories
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This story is probably the best of Laura so far. I really like the pacing and how the relationship between Mason and Rhys grow naturally, and how Toby has a great role in the events. Also I feel the story as a whole has a few inspirations in Ghost, which I really appreciate because it's one of the best movies ever. And the mystery and it's solved lawer by lawer was SO GOOD. Amazing job and amazing story.
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A satisfied ending. I just wish the hired gunmen was arrested too, but I think we can't have it all. Mason and Rhys more than deserves this happy ending, and I like to think Billy become a sorte of friend who come at the most unexpected of moments and leave the same way. You know, that he still will be present in Rhys and Mason's lives.
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I was not expecting to feel so emocional at the end. Rhys and Toby surely deserved that good bye, and I feel like their love doesn't end, just turn into a new feeling of gratitude for both of them being capable of living it. And I think Mason will make Rhys very happy, he deserves the joy of a peaceful love after everything.
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Nooooo we need to know who this mysterious man talking to Levine is
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OH MY GOD THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY. I thought Billy was Levi's minion, or maybe Boyd, but both of them are safe so I had no idea who is the running minion.
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A Little Mouse In A Too Big House
gothishin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Little Mouse In A Too Big House
Oh meu Good, so Levine was really the man who killed Toby? Or at least send someone to do It? And damn, poor Rhys. Ary is a coward because he should have tell Rhys what he saw that night. Not that they could do something about it, but at least Rhys wouldn't torture himself thinking he had something to do with Toby's morder. -
Ary has a lot of explanation to do. And Mason should treat Rhys like the adult he is and not sugarcoat anything. Rhys NEEDS to bem parte of this to find clousure about Tobys fate.
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This chapter was hard(no sexual joke intender lol). I feel like a Lot has been taken from Rhys and Toby. Their whole lifes in fact, and is really sad to think about it. Also the mystery is SO good
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The Truth Will Set You Free
gothishin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Truth Will Set You Free
I think I'm more worried about Toby being a cheater than about who killed him lol. Like, he can not have anything physical with Ary but maybe he had feelings for him too, in that case Rhys was being made a fool of. -
It’s All About The Money?
gothishin commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It’s All About The Money?
I kinda feel sorry for Ary. Can't exactly blame the guy for falling in love. Love one person is already a tricky thing, two is twice the trouble. Maybe in a paralel universe Ary, Toby and Rhys could have lived as a happy throuple, but I'm afraid in this world their story took a darker turn, especially for Toby. -
I'm glad Rhys was capable of stand for himself. Goddess knows what hideous things Levine would have done to him.
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Mason was a bastard with Rhys on this one. If he feels he shouldn't be involved emotionally, there was a lot of ways to deal with it than be an asshole with Rhys heart. Not to mention Rhys apologizing for doing nothing wrong.
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Things are getting more complicated by the minute lol. I have no idea to where we going.
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Mason was a dick with Rhys.
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Cute chapter. After the roller coster of emotions from the last ones, both of them deserve this moment. And I don't think Mason should feel guilty about anything. There's no cheating here, Toby is dead. It may be hurtful for Toby to see some things, but life moves on for everybody eventually.
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I think Rhys supposed secret is something money related. Maybe money Toby stole from the wrong people and cause his death. But omg, Levine is disgusting. What a horrible man, I hope he ☠️ at the end.
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Levine is a pig, no argument here, but I still don't think he's the killer. Its too obvious.
