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Chapter 1 ( First passage )
Hardianarcher commented on Hardianarcher's story chapter in Chapter 1 ( First passage )
@VBlewYou’re in for one hell of a ride. See you September 1st! ✨ -
“So…” The therapist looked down at his clipboard. He’d been silent long enough that Zain was starting to wonder whether the man was carefully choosing his next question or quietly calculating how many years he had left until retirement. Across the room, a wall clock ticked with obnoxious confidence. The office was aggressively, violently ordinary. Beige paint. A box of off-brand tissues. A half-dead succulent in the corner. A framed photograph of a lake that looked as though
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In the second installment of the trilogy, Zaïn is forced to confront the truth of who he truly is, while his newfound bond with Hadrian threatens to consume them both. As the Dazaris’ plans close in, new threats emerge from the shadows, plunging Redwaters into darkness… once again.
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@Seraph28 First Chapter drops September 1th 🫶🏼
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@VBlew Thank you from the bottom of my heart ❤️ Messages like this make all those years spent writing Welcome to Redwaters worthwhile. I always hoped readers would fall in love with these characters and feel their connections as deeply as I did while writing them. And yes… this is only the beginning. There is much more of their story still to tell. Thank you for believing in them and for coming along on this journey with me.
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@Seraph28 I don’t think you realize how much this message means to me. ❤️ When you spend years creating a world, the hardest thing is knowing whether the emotions you felt while writing it will reach someone else. Reading that these characters became companions to you is the most rewarding feeling. This book was never just about magic or battles for me, it was about belonging, love, finding yourself, and the people who become family along the way. Thank you for waiting patiently, for caring about them, and for letting them become part of your own journey. I’m truly grateful.
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Final Chapter The bougainvillea gardens of the palace had never looked so violently alive. Magenta and crimson blossoms spilled over white marble arches, vines twisting around pillars carved with victories long past. The fountains still ran. The air still shimmered with golden light. But the palace was in mourning. From the western balcony, Yara spotted her. Queen Uma stood alone at the center of the lower terrace, surrounded by a storm of color, cla
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@Seraph28The torture is finally coming to end with the final chapter next! Thank you so much for following this story! 💙
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@VBlew Thank you so much for your comment! Can’t wait for you to read the final chapter! 💙
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Fifteen Years Earlier The palace slept under twin moons, pale light frosting its spires like something sacred and already doomed. Uma stood at the arched window, moonlight threading through her dark hair — all but one silver strand, bright as a secret the universe refused to keep. She watched the balcony, where her son laughed. Zain was four. Barefoot. Fast. Happy in a way that didn’t know it was temporary. Violet butterflies burst into being around him — not creatures
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@Seraph28 it certainly is 😂
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@VBlew You picked up on everything! 🙌 With only three chapters left, there’s still so much to unravel—both in Zain’s world and in Redwaters. Every character is about to be tested in ways they never expected, and everything they thought they knew will be pushed to the edge. Buckle in… it’s about to get intense. 😈Thank you for your comment ! ✨
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@Seraph28 Thank you for the comment! I promise it’s not me being mean—it’s just the way the story wants to unfold 😅 Cliffhangers are part of the deal, right? And honestly… you haven’t even seen the worst of it yet 😂 Buckle up!
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Hadrian hated himself. Hated the words he’d forced out of his mouth—each one a blade meant for Zain but carving deeper into his own flesh. He told himself it was necessary, that ending it was the only way to keep Zain safe. But the lie was bitter. He was the one who wished the possession had never ended. He was the one who wanted to stay recklessly at Zain’s side, cost be damned. He had believed, with a faith that terrified him, that Antinous and Hadrian were right to consume each other in
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@andy cannonThank you so much for your message! Can’t wait to have your feedbacks! You also have access to the corrected version: from chapter 1 to 14 for better pacing 🫶🏼
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@VBlewThank you so much for you comment! 🫶🏼 it was a heavy chapter, but everything will soon come to a close ( final chapters very soon)
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@Seraph28 It was…😢
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Chapter 18 Hadrian’s throne was not merely marble and gold; it was an altar to power, the apex of the known world. Rome sprawled at his feet—dust of Hispania, mist of Britannia, sun-scorched Syria—each territory a verse in his living epic. Below the dais, the Great Hall pulsed with orchestrated chaos: courtiers, envoys, priests. Voices layered like incense smoke, ambition and worship woven into one. And yet, Hadrian’s attention was narrowed to a single, intimate ritual. A
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@VBlew I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter!✨ As for the bracelet…let’s say that it will bring a fresh perspective to Hadrian and Zain’s relationship…
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@andy cannon Thank you so much for your comment! If you enjoyed that part the next one won’t disappoint 😉🤞🏼
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@Seraph28 🤞🏼😂🫶🏼
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@Seraph28 Thank you! Yes, I’ll stick around to finish the story no matter how long it might take 😂 hope you enjoyed the new chapter 🫶🏼
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Chapter 17 Memory did not return to Zain in pieces. It came like a flood, rushing fast and merciless, dragging him under. The suns. The laughter. The sting of a first heartbreak. Every detail was waiting for him, sharp as the day it was carved into his skin. He was sixteen again. A boy, not yet the man he had been forced to become. Standing in the courtyards of his mother’s kingdom, watching as the boys of a neighboring clan spilled through the gates. They filled the space like
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@Seraph28Haha you caught me red-handed! I did go there 😈💔—Malik deserved better, I know. But his fate had to shake the board a little... and let’s just say, the storm ahead needed thunder to roll in first. As for Bashar... no comment, but I’m nodding very aggressively behind the screen 😂👏 I promise the next Chapter will make the heartbreak worth it. And who knows, in Redwaters... not even death is always the end. Thank you for reading—and for surviving an emotional whiplash during Easter! You’re a real one 🥚💥👑
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@gmc Always so happy to read your feedbacks! Hope the story keeps its promises for you!
