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@Freemantleman Your comment had me snorting, swooning, and furiously blushing all in the span of one scroll 😂💀 Thank you for seeing the heart and the chaos of this story—you're spot on about the dogma, the chosen family, the broken prophecies, and the very human messiness wrapped in immortal drama. As for the titillation—listen, the oven is preheating, the spice is marinating, and the next chapter might just have you needing two pairs of glasses. I’ll work on that braille version, but no promises—I hear the smut in raised dots hits different. 🫣 Thank you for reading with your whole soul and your mischievous heart. I’m beyond grateful (and slightly scandalized)💜🍆💜
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CHAPTER 16 Garth pushed through the wall of students crowding the front of the precinct, his blazer clinging to him from the rush. The chants outside still echoed faintly as he stepped into the stark quiet of the station. His shirt hung loose, sweat lining his temples, but his grip on the phone was firm—like it might disintegrate if he let go. Fleur, Darcey, and Elliott were waiting near the reception desk. The moment he saw them, he moved straight for Darcey. “I’ve got the video,
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@gmcHadrian and Zain share many similarities that will become increasingly evident as the story unfolds, particularly when exploring their pasts. This common ground creates a powerful chemistry between them, but it also leads to moments of conflict and tension. The main character's communication—or the lack thereof—will play a pivotal role in unraveling many of the group's challenges as they move forward. Thank you for your comment!
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@gmcIt certainly wasn’t the ideal outcome for Zain, but it was the only way the queen could ensure he wouldn’t attempt to return and risk capture. I’m looking forward to hear your thoughts on what lies ahead for Zain and the group!
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@gmcThank you so much for your feedback! We made some edits to improve immersion and have published the revised versions in chapters 16 and 17. We hope these updates enhance your experience of the story. Thank you so much for your support, and welcome to the adventure!
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Chapter 7 The library was thick with silence. Heavy. Suffocating. Fleur paced, her heels clicking against the wooden floor, her breath shallow. Her thoughts tangled, swirling like a storm. Ouray sat by the fire, lost in its shifting glow. Zain slumped on the couch, hollow-eyed, still trapped in the nightmare they had just lived through. Then, at last, Fleur spoke. "What are we going to do?" Her voice was barely a whisper, yet it cut through the air like a blade. Ouray turned
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CHAPTER 1 Hadrian sat on a weathered bench, the wood cool beneath his palms, rough splinters pressing into his skin. His tailored suit—dark burgundy with a black shirt—seemed almost absurd in its contrast to the crumbling stone and everyday bustle of Redwaters. Before him, the square stretched out in soft bursts of life, laughter, and chatter, but he felt as though he were a ghost among them, invisible, detached. The sky hung low, a thick, suffocating gray, and the air tasted
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@FreemantlemanThank you so much for your kind words! I'm thrilled to have you back on this journey. As we approach the final arc, the next chapter will be supersized—packed with even more excitement! I truly appreciate your support and can't wait to share what's next. ❤️
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@FreemantlemanIt would definitely make for an exciting read! I just might give it some thought... 😉
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@Seraph28 So happy to hear from you again! I'm glad you’re enjoying this format—it will be a key part of the story moving forward. Wishing you a wonderful weekend!
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@VBlew First and foremost, thank you for your comment! I'm thrilled that you've returned to continue the adventure. More about the entity will be revealed very soon—stay tuned!
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The dull pounding of his heart slammed against his ribcage, a painful echo resonating all the way to his throat. The air, heavy and thick, seemed to close in on him with every ragged breath. The steel of the handcuffs bit into his wrists, the icy grip of the metal digging into his skin as the vehicle jolted along the wet asphalt. In the back of the police car, Zain stared at the blurred reflection of his own face in the grimy window, the glow of the streetlights sliding over his tense featu
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@VBlewThank you so much for your comment 🙏🏼 Raad will have to engage in profound soul-searching... The next chapter could take an unexpected turn... Fleur is undoubtedly on a journey of self-discovery... I'm delighted you enjoyed the chapter!
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Thank you so much for your feedback! This chapter was indeed one of the most revealing in terms of relationships and the overall plot. Darcey's hinting at Sienna’s true motives, Ouray’s hidden past, and how everything might be tied to Fleur’s nightmare that started the whole journey... The love triangles serve to highlight the parallels between such different characters. Each relationship allows the characters to connect with different parts of themselves, which I believe is crucial to their story. I really hope you’ll enjoy what’s to come!
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The Redwaters River stretched out before Sienna, shimmering under the silvery moonlight. The humid night air enveloped her body as she stood motionless on the bank. Her eyes followed the relentless current, each movement of the water capturing her attention. She felt the youth and vitality of her new body, that of Rose, like a rekindled flame, even though her powers were still restrained. She stood there, frozen, but her mind was boiling with tumultuous memories and thoughts. The recent con
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Guys don’t hesitate to comment on the topics/characters you’d want to se more or less of!
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@Seraph28Thank YOU for all the support and feedbacks, it really is priceless to my process! 🙏🏼💙
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The first lights of day began to filter through the curtains in Hadrian's room. Zain woke up disoriented, realizing he had fallen asleep there, watching over the immortal the previous night. He quickly turned his head to the left. Hadrian was still sleeping soundly, his face bathed in serenity. Despite the trials they had gone through just a few hours prior, Zain couldn't ignore the butterflies in his stomach, the gentle excitement that enveloped him upon waking up next to him. Just thinkin
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@Seraph28 Thank you! Any feedback Is a new perspective to better understand what works and what doesn’t, and different opinions are the best way to get there! Happy you enjoyed latest chapter’s intertwined parallels, we’re going to get more of that…
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Hello! Don’t hesitate to give me your opinions on the parts you guys : liked the most /disliked the most, as we move to the next part of the book! 🤍
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@VBlew Indeed, the fact that Zains’ powers were channeled with such evil intensity and rage set off something significant we’re about to delve into in the upcoming chapters.. Thank you so much for you comment! So glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you for you support!
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@Seraph28It’s indeed one of the longest! This chapter also marks the halfway point of the book, so it had the delicate task to cover most of the first part’s plot as well as effectively reinstate the remaining threats looming for our favorite characters ! Very happy to read you enjoyed it! Thank you for you support!
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Within the majestic confines of the manor, thoughts swirled in Hadrian's mind. Standing firm in the training room, he relentlessly pounded the punching bag, each strike resonating in the tension-laden air. Putting an end to Marsha represented much more than just a victory. It was the end of an era of anguish, where the mystery surrounding Carolina's murder weighed heavily on them all. Neutralizing her would also ensure Fleur's protection from the sinister designs of the deranged witch.
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@Seraph28Very happy to see you back too! Not to worry, another 11 chapters are on the way! Hope you enjoyed this one!
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@VBlew Thank you so much for commenting! So happy to see that you enjoyed the chapter and very excited for you to read the next one !
