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Im so glad you enjoyed it! This chapter does mark a turning point for pretty much every character...Thank you for commenting!
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Elliot is about to embark on a journey of his own...As for Marsha, she's not one to let go easily as we will see very soon, and also discover why... Thank you so much for you comment, and support!
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Guys let's discuss the chapter! Your feedbacks are very important!
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On the other side of the Portal- Zain’s dimension In the council chamber of the palace, a solemn silence prevailed, permeating every stone of the kingdom. Uma, seated alone, let her fingers graze her temple, immersed in deep reflection, persistent memories etched in her mind. The seats, once witnesses to lively discussions and crucial decisions, remained desperately empty, like forgotten remnants. The walls themselves told tales of the past, bearing countless conflicts, declared or avo
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Tapping into his powers will certainly a component to unlock some of Zain's lost memories, and him using so much of his magic could sadly facilitate locating him... which the next chapters will focus on, as well as getting to the root of the town's history and Hadrian's past... Thank you so much for your feedback and support! So glad you are enjoying the story!
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Thank you so much for commenting! i'm thrilled to read you enjoyed it so much! Just like parents aren't supposed to have favorites but secretly do, Zain's progression and many layers are on my list of the favorites parts to write about, and i'm so pleased to see that you enjoy him as well! Hope life is getting better for you, and thank you very much for the support!
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Guys let's discuss the chapter! Your feedbacks are very important!
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Inside the library, an atmosphere heavy with uncertainty prevailed. Fleur, consumed by heightened nervousness, seemed to be in a state of agitation, her footsteps echoing through the manor's floor, her thoughts swirling in a tumult of doubts and questions in the wake of recent events. Ouray, on the other hand, was plunged into a deep abyss of contemplation, his eyes captured by the flickering flames in the fireplace, while Zain, still in shock, slouched on the couch, his gaze vacant. The op
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Hadrian felt it deeply, the clock of his life was inexorably ticking away. He was trapped in that dark cabin, alone with Tucker. The gnawing pain that tortured him seemed almost eased by the prospect of finally uncovering the tragic fate of his friend Carolina. His voice, barely audible, shattered the stifling silence of the cabin. "What do you mean by 'she wanted to believe in love'?" Hadrian struggled to utter the words, his body weakened by the magic-deprived perimeter that was sapp
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I think what gets lost in this part is the emotional aspect that makes the characters act the way they do. The recent lead on Carolina's death is what makes them act so recklessly. Hadrian wants to fix the situation at all costs, feels guilty about his absence and what it caused, hence the rash decisions. Fleur wants answers and feels she can do everything on her own which leads her in harms way, as supernatural as the characters might be, their human characteristics are very much prevalent. As for Fleur's father, the answers will come soon enough, and might surprise you! Hope you like it a little! Thanks for reading!
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The sheriff has a special fascination towards supernatural creatures, especially Hadrian, that's why he would rather have a one on one with him instead of just ending him, its a twisted interest we can feel all along. As for the gucci shoes part, both Hadrian and Zain are fashionsita's, so buckle up! But IF Zaîn ends up saving the day, the shoes will play no part in it i swear! Hope you at least enjoyed it a little bit, you might like the next one better! Thank you for reading!
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Fleur was pale, her complexion perfectly reflecting the turmoil within her. The young witch sneaked discreetly into the Creeks, which had been closed for several hours, to access her secret room, a sanctuary where she could assimilate her recent discoveries in complete privacy. Having already informed Elliot that she would spend the night at Hadrian's to comfort him over his supposed breakup, she was determined to use this time to follow this new lead that had presented itself. Fleur was no
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We are slowly getting to the core of the story, a lot of revelations are bound to be revealed as we progress, and SHE will be explained soon, although she was already mentioned very briefly before in chapter two, right after Garth's revelations to Hadrian's, when he leaves the tattoo shop... Thank you for reading!
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Fleur has a lot to learn, and a long way to go indeed..And as for the "she", answers are coming soon... Thank you for reading, hope you enjoyed!
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Fleur's eyes slowly opened, but instead of waking up in Hadrian's car-the last place she was conscious in- she found herself inside the manor, bathed in the daylight filtering through the windows. "Ouray? Hadrian? Zain? Is anyone here?" she called in the library, hoping for a response, but only silence greeted her. About to leave the room to search for her friends, Fleur was blindsided by a surprising vision: a younger version of herself, barely fourteen years old, appeared before her,
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The next two chapters will provide you with almost all the answers to your questions, it comes out saturday! hope your'e enjoying the chapters!
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its not he last you'll see of her! thanks for reading!
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So glad you noticed that! and your'e in for a ride with this character, that i promise you! About your questions, the next two chapters will provide you with more than enough answers regarding Hadrian...Thank you for following the story, and commenting!
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He's got plenty indeed ! Thank you for reading, the next one will be up soon, and will dive more into the characters personalities ... hope you enjoyed!
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Like a fleeting fragment of thought, Zain felt nothing. He floated in a state of weightlessness, devoid of any tangible consequences. His doubts had dissipated, his anxiety was now a distant memory, abandoned in an inaccessible corner of his consciousness. He had lost all sense of his identity, his place in space and time. He was simply there, immersed in nothingness, experiencing a paradoxical sense of peace. However, he knew he needed assistance, but the reason for it still eluded him. Su
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Well i can't spoil you the next chapter (that will be up tomorrow), but you seem to be on right path... I am so happy to see that you seem to be enjoying my story! Thank you!
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Very happy to read that! so glad you enjoyed my story! pretty sure your'e gonna like what's coming next !
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The Creeks at night offered a lively atmosphere, a far cry from the tranquility of the empty room Fleur had traversed earlier in the morning. Human warmth had taken over the place, with about thirty people gathered, scattered throughout the different sections of the bar. A group of high school students, two girls and three boys, laughed heartily while competing in a game of pool. Not far from them, two other buddies, wearing their high school rugby team jackets, engaged in an epic foosball
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Very glad you enjoyed it! And by reading your comment, i feel you might like what's coming next! The next chapter is gonna be online in a few hours !
