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  1. Jean87

    Will

    @Mark Arbourthat was a good chapter. And now the best character is born.
  2. Jean87

    Chapter 8

    When Heaven Meets The Valley The hush before the Holy Hallelujah, Where shadows stretch and silence swells, I knelt in the pit of despair beneath the mountain of redemption, The pit seemed so far from where redemption dwells. But then- not thunder, nor flames, nor trumpeter's roar, Just a whisper stirring through the trees, A breeze that's warm and inviting found my fractured soul and stitched it back together, A grace too tender and loving
  3. Unwavering Love at Calv'ary's Hill, by Brandon Jean I pray to you, Lord- not only that these words move your heart, but that the Holy Spirit would speak through these words. Let my, words be true and pleasing to you, God. I lift my voice through storms and flames, not for fame nor glory's claim- But for the Refiner, who calms my soul and mends my broken heart, The Lamb, the King, who made me whole and safe once again. When shadows fall and hope is just a trickle, I look to C
  4. Jean87

    Chapter 74

    First off he cheated on Claire then had the balls to ask Claire for an open marriage. Scumbag point goes to Jack, Another point goes to Jack for going for the cliché of the younger collage. Then he gets a freaking unlimited amount of scumbag points when he decided to hit on the very loose Amber, not only in front of Claire but he had to lean over Claire to hit on Amber. And this time I think he lost everyone's respect for good.
  5. Jean87

    Chapter 74

    @Mark Arbour That was a good chapter. I'm glad that Claire finally apologized to Will. I am also glad that Jack, was finally seen as a scumbag that truly needed to be put in his place. And now that Claire has made up with Will I think Grandmaman will feel restricted because Claire is not going to be in Isedore corner. So I say that she will apologize to Will. But not really mean it. Just so she's not at odds with everyone.
  6. Jean87

    Chapter 72

    Was it Jeremy who screwed half the people in the Norwegian skating contest and was indiscreet enough to have photos taken of him leading to the suicide of a skater? that is so not how it happen YES will did screw a lot of guys at the Norwegian skating contest. However, Will was not so reckless that he got photos taken of him getting by Shane. Michael, JJ guard was hired to take photos of will being blown by Shane by Jenny and send them to the USFS who would have revoked Shane's membership and that would have destroyed his skating career. But that was not what lead to Shane killing himself. What lead Shane to kill himself was being molested, by his figure skating coach.
  7. Jean87

    Chapter 72

    are we talking about Will, or the old JJ without medication? 🤣. Speaking about Jermey He is doing really good. I just want to see how he handles the drama of Thanksgiving dinner with his brother and Grandmaman, and Clair acting like three baboons.
  8. Jean87

    Chapter 72

    Your right that the feud between Will, and Grandmaman, has gotten out of hand only because she will not apologize to Will, she needs to take a lesson out of Marie's growing pains when she had to learn that apologizing helps heal the rift that developed between family members. And I also agree that that people in the household has done worst things. But here the big difference they have apologized for them. And I know what your hinting at when you say especially Will, for what he did to Brad's and Robbie's cars and clothes and drugging Robbie, but here is the thing at the age Will was when he did this he did not have the develop brain to control his emotions and to control his decision making part of his brain and we don't fully have control over it until the age of 25 when the frontal lobe of the brain is fully developed specifically the Prefrontal lobe of the brain. So even now when Will is 18 he still does not have full control over his emotions. So it is more understandable that Will is more likely to have volatile explosion than let's say Stef who is in his late 50's.
  9. Jean87

    Chapter 72

    @Mark Arbour That was a great chapter. I just love that even Will, thinks Amber is hot. I think the only way that Isadore is only going to act proper is if JP tells her off. Maybe going as far as telling her that if she does not apologize and truly mean it she is no longer welcome at the house, since technically JP has all the right to kick her out since they are divorce and she has no clam or right to be at the house. I think that she will not truly understand how badly she acted towards Will, until that happens. Clair on the other hand I think she will need a bigger incentive to apologize to Will, like maybe Will needs to remind her of the promise she made to him when he made it home from 911. And I also think that Will, is right about not backing down with those two because they have done this to him before.
  10. Jean87

    Chapter 15

    I would also of said you can dump the debris into Dr. Jensen office
  11. Unwavering Love on Calv'ary's Hill, I lift my voice through storms and flames, Not for fame nor glory's claim- But for the One who calms my soul and mends my broken heart, The Lamb, the King, who made me whole and safe once again. When shadows fall and hope is just a trickle, I look to Calv'ary's crimson sky. The nails, the thorns, the crown of grace- All find me kneeling face to face, I cry out Save me God. Unwavering faith through trial and night, You are my strength, my guiding
  12. Unwavering Faith I lift my voice through storms and flames, Not for fame nor for glory’s claim- But for the One who calms my soul, The Lamb the King, who made me whole and safe. When shadows fall and hope is just a trickle, I look to Calv’ry’s crimson sky. The nails, the thorns, the crown of grace- All find me kneeling, face to face, Crying out save me, God. I believe in the Father’s boundless love, In Jesus- truth, the way, the life. And by the Spirit’s holy flame, My heart
  13. The Sound of the Ultimate Sacrifice, Through trembling night, the bugle weeps, A mournful cry where silence sleeps. Soft notes drift- then rise then fall Another farewell whispered, a solemn call of the ultimate sacrifice. Beyond the ridge, where banners lay, The wailing wind and sorrow stay. For every tear, a mother's cry, Her sacrifice etched in the sky. For every tear that streaks the land, A brother's oath- no soldier left behind. A steady hand in duty sworn, Though l
  14. Jean87

    Chapter 3

    Tears, the Language of the Soul They fall without a sound, A river etched in quiet pain, Tracing lines upon the skin, Like whispers lost in rain. Each drop holds a shattered dream, A memory sharp as a razor blade And bright as blood, Echoes of a distant voice, That brings comfort as it fades into the night. Yet not all tears are born from grief, Some shine in love's embrace— An embrace that is eternal, Like silver threads of gratitude, Or joy’s unbridled grace. For tears are
  15. Jean87

    Grief

    Grief By: Brandon Haines Grief is like a river that is winding and wild, a tide that pulls, a whispering child that is whispering for a love that is gone but not forgotten. It flows through valleys deep and wide, hiding beneath the shifting tide. It flows through valleys deep and wide, hiding beneath the shifting tide, grief is like the Mariana Trench deep and uncharted. Grief is like a river that is calm one day and untamed the next. A flood of sorrow, a spark of flame. It disapp
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