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  1. Jean87

    GHB

    to answer your first question it depends on quite a few things but to answer it quickly yes they can. and to speculate on your second question, I think that would not change Will's perspective I actually think it will make Will be more insistent that Travis gets a therapist to help him with his past trauma of abuse during his childhood. I truly hope not but I think it can go of two ways if Travis doesn't get help it is an echo of Jeff Hayes from all those years earlier. And if it is I see it affecting Will for years like Jeff's death did for JP. or Travis gets help dealing with the demons of the trauma of his abuse during his childhood. And if Travis does that I see that he'd be able to deal with the scenes that he has such a hard time dealing with. and me the secondary beneficiary.... @Mark ArbourI hope you write it to where Kendo gets publicly humiliated by being arrested for r***. and if Kendo does Travis would be able to play it out still that he's straight by pointing out that he was drugged with GHB so consent is not there legally. since it would come out that he was the one doing the penetration.
  2. Jean87

    GHB

    @Mark Arbourthe first part was good and the last part was good as well it was the middle part that I did not like even though it was not graphic it still needed a warning on the GHB/r***. because it does not matter who's on top or bottom if you are given GHB and have sex with someone that is legally r*** because Travis was not able to give consent does not matter if he did not say no or stop because of the GHB takes your ability to soberly consent
  3. Jean87

    GHB

    I knew you'd come to appreciate Will's hot temper as a kid
  4. Jean87

    Blow Jobs

    Okay so like Kendo dying by O.D. which has a slow death and it's like Prometheus for the effect that it would have on Travis
  5. Jean87

    Blow Jobs

    so you want a slow and hard okay the Chinese torture 1000 cut
  6. Jean87

    Blow Jobs

    @Mark Arbour good chapter all it needed for it to be the greatest chapter is Kendo being ate by a *ucking shark while surfing. Just saying hint hint ;p; not really the same since when Travis had a problem with a guy Will gave him up completely no bj no anything what does Travis do he blows the guy that Will has a problem with. Even though I don't like or trust Kendo at all I really don't see how he could out Travis without outing himself. it depends on the person who is doing the filming and as long as it doesn't interfere with the show plus Travis character is written as using drugs so Aaron could say he just thought Travis was taking sugar pills to get in the mind of a person that takes elicit drugs. I wonder if Kendo is going to use that as a way to screw Travis so like a date rape drug. well I suggested the only way to make the chapter greater would have been Kendo get eaten by a shark I say I don't like Kendo either.
  7. Jean87

    Dexies

    @Mark Arbourgood chapter. Travis needs a rude awakening. Like maybe if he does blows Kendo, Will surprises Travis and catches them and dumps Travis. And remember Will's family owns the company that is doing the show so that can truly backfire on Travis. and I really do think that needs to happens if Travis blows Kendo because I believe that once Kendo gets that blowjob I believe he will become even more ruthless in the pursuit of getting Travis either to *uck him or him *uck Travis
  8. Jean87

    Chapter 6

    @KKirkgreat chapter I love how you add the pictures of what the characters look like. I think that adds just the right amount of detail that gets the reader to be able to imagine what the characters look like. As Paris Hilton would say that's hot.
  9. Jean87

    Chapter 10

    @KKirkgreat chapter. I think that Len has more feelings for Jody then he is willing to admit. Case in point the flushing of the toilet while Jody and Micky were in the shower while the water was running. Or it could just be that he was being a more like a best friend
  10. well of course there is major drama coming I see that Travis is more like Robbie, and I hope Travis doesn't do what Robbie did to Brad throughout their relationship.
  11. @Mark Arbourgreat chapter I just hope that something does not happen to Travis with him taking both zanny's and ambien at the same time.
  12. Jean87

    Chapter 7

    or doing both
  13. Kintsugi of the Soul By Brandon Haines Sometimes the road feels endless… like I’ve walked a thousand miles… trying to find the place my soul can rest… and all I can breathe out is… “Lord, I’m tapped out.” Sometimes the storms inside me rage louder than the ones around me. I’ve wrestled with myself… with the shadows of my own ugly sin, with the parts of me… that I wish I could bury… and all that’s left in me whispers… “Lord I’m tapped out.”
  14. When My Faith Went Quiet By Brandon Haines There was a time when my faith wasn’t gone… just quiet. A soft ember instead of a flame, a belief I carried loosely, never reaching, never clinging- just assuming You’d always be there. I wasn’t hurting. I wasn’t weary. I was stubborn. Too sure of myself, too proud of standing on my own, too convinced I didn’t need… to be held. My hands didn’t let go in despair… they let go i
  15. Kintsugi: is the Japanese idea of taking a broken pottery, vase and fusing the broken piece back together with gold
  16. Jean87

    Chapter 19

    well as they say hell has no furry like a scorn woman and that is what Jennifer was since she got the idea that Will liked her. and for Charlene she has no reason to have a big mouth as big as a big mouth bass.
  17. loved the book can't wait for the next book. Well worth the read well written. Killian is a well-rounded character he does have his moments of being self-absorbed with his job and forgets true priorities. But still a really caring character.
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  18. Jean87

    Beard

    I think will should just hire someone to break Kendo's pretty face no pretty face no job no job no way for Kendo to be on a movie set.
  19. Jean87

    Beard

    Travis won't listen to Marie at all if he won't listen to the man, he says he loves then he won't listen to just a friend. And that is the best thing that would happen. The worst would be that Travis starts to resent Will because he thinks that Will is just being too jealous. I think Travis might have to learn it the hard way.
  20. Jean87

    Dear God

    Dear God By Brandon Haines Dear God, I didn’t come with polished words tonight. Just the ones that survived the day. The ones that tremble a little when I try to speak them out loud. You know the cracks I carry. You know the ones I hide. You know the places in my heart that I pretend are mended, but they are still broken — not because You haven’t touched them, but because they were so shattered they need more time to me
  21. Jean87

    Chapter 29

    @Josh AterovisWow What a Great Chapter. it is like reading a truly talented Author book. Almost to the quality of Jane Austin Pride and Prejudice.
  22. Jean87

    Chapter 28

    @Josh AterovisWhat A Great Chapter!!!!! man your writing is getting better and better from the first Book to this one.
  23. Paint Me the Life Where She Stayed By Brandon Haines If you could take this aching memory and stretch it across a canvas, would you paint the life I longed for- the one where she stayed whole? Start with a morning without fear, where her breath came easy, where her laughter fills the kitchen instead of the quiet hum of worry. Give her a body that never betrayed her, hands steady enough to hold all the years we were meant to share.
  24. Jean87

    By Pure Mercy

    By Pure Mercy By Brandon Haines Sometimes the road feels endless… like I’ve walked a thousand miles… trying to find the place my soul can rest… and all I can breathe out is… “Lord, I’m tapped out.” Sometimes the storms inside me rage louder than the ones around me. I’ve wrestled with myself… with the shadows of my own ugly sin, with the parts of me… that I wish I could bury… and all that’s left in me whispers… “Lord I’m tapped out.” I’ve w
  25. Jean87

    Chapter 13

    Why did everyone assume I was careless? hmmm lets count the way you can be careless 1 you haven nearly gotten killed twice in book one granted those were not from you being careless 2 you nearly got Asher and yourself killed in book 3. 3 you contaminated a home after breaking and entering and if the guards had not been killed they would have killed you with bloody shoe prints and throw up must I go on because I am sure I can think of more ways.
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