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  1. MarioAC

    Life as a Family

    out of the park guess?, there is (was?) a third child.
  2. MarioAC

    Chapter 13

    that, or being late. 😢 you , my friend, do not play fair.
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    Chapter 13

    I'm at the middle of the chapter and somehow I have a feeling my worst fear , and I would bet , most of teenagers' , and of anyone for that matter, is about to come life: that in reaching for help you end in the very vicious hands of your wrongdoer.
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    Chapter 12

    one thing to say about our guys making errors and bad decisions: they're teenagers, a walking ticking bom of hormones, emotions, feelings and raw reactions (as any adult out here, less the hormones party, I think), faced agaisnt incredible horrible situations threating their known world, of course they're gonna struggle to even breath. so all of you claiming to know what would you do in such events, stop. I'll admit I was entering such holier-than-thou path, like "hey, do so and so" or "why not calling the bluff?" and such, but honestly I don't think even most of adult people would know how to answer to the game, a tragedy in itself. my one hope is for our "pieces" to learn (on time!) their capacity to own the game and come the other side victorious.
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    Chapter 5

    no, I don't get it. they're being blackmailed to pose as a gay couple so not to be exposed as a gay couple??
  6. now wait. kitt moved into town at the middle of seventh grade, then came the summer swim meet, and now we are into ninth grade high school?... how come?! where did eighth grade go?
  7. MarioAC

    Perturbed

    Upgrade (2018) is the name of the movie that came to mind from the experience of Bond, Josh Bond -turned Jason Bourne meets Jack Reacher-.
  8. MarioAC

    Chapter 39

    I so don't want to read this last chapter 'cuz will mean story is over and I do not want it to finish.
  9. MarioAC

    Chapter 27

    is Ned sending codificated intel to Will tru his dear-pa letters? Where does he get it? and how?, from whom?... and who taugh him to code?, when?!
  10. MarioAC

    Chapter 5

    "- JUEZ: ¿Quién mató al comendador? - PASCUALA: Fuenteovejuna, señor."
  11. MarioAC

    Chapter 3

    where's weston?!!
  12. MarioAC

    Chapter 8

    not to be greedy but man YOU have to live another 50 years 'cuz I certainly want to know about the adventures of these new athos, porthos and aramis with their recently found d'artagnan.
  13. MarioAC

    Chapter 3

    yey!... the big player is in the game!... let's see what you can do agaisnt fearcefull tacos in your way!
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    Chapter 32

    I knew it, I knew it! Told you so back in the Prologue: " Father is no Red King but Orange King! ".
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    Chapter 24

    I already said it, I like drama. Nevertheless, for the ferocity with which Father fights the Carters, a handsided legal confrontation on the merits of "homosexuals-not-fitted-to-parenting" from a fervent conservative CPS zealot would be one more front to face. and oh! the drama of TRYING to keep tommy from jacob!, weston would be recruited as the youngest csis operative asset.
  16. MarioAC

    Chapter 24

    uoh stop right there. how come tommy remained with the carters'?, I'd at least expect a savage fight with child services (there is a child agency in canada, right?). now that would've been an interesting chapter. and I'm not saying he doesn't belong there. but, you know, I like drama.
  17. MarioAC

    Prologue

    I just realized, "Father" is not Red King but Orange King! OMG!! #oknobutyes
  18. MarioAC

    Chapter 15

    nah, I still don't get it. If faced with the posibility of a young parenthood -yeah, yeah, abandonment and such- , ain't a better chance of saving face by actually telling the person(s) involved?... Just tell the tell to Will and have him do the research, I'd find that more truthfull than having him not knowing at all and then throwing the whole damn bussiness to his feet. But hey, that's me, and propably that's why I didn't get into politics, wouldn't ever have the nerves.
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    Chapter 9

    now wait. how is it having a child in your highschool years is a scandal? not the first nor the only one heard of. specially for the "confused" youths (as most of gays at that age are called by not so much understanding grown ups). even if unknownlly or unwilling. I'd understand how that could be scandalous for a conservative man but for liberal?... come on!
  20. MarioAC

    Chapter 8

    oh please no, you seriously want me to star the readings over. I just can't figure out who's who from when. too many secrets and too much past.
  21. MarioAC

    Chapter 6

    william is going to washington for the nafta meetings and what are the chances of him reaquitancing some elusive mexican diplomat we all know capable of playing cia, mossad, and mi5 as his own pawns? wouldn't it be ironic to have him help the carters to now face the holier-than-thou conservatives? with all of his resources and his own intricated web of underground "helpers"... nah. too much.
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    Chapter 5

    so many people remembering about this and that which happen in the carters' past that I couldn't figure out what they were talking about... and now I get is 'cuz of previous previous previous previous series not published here. */me goes seaching nifty* and now I have to star all over my readings!...
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    Chapter 17

    just how big of a player is this alvarez character? somehow he got conservative canadians, serbians, probably a chinese woman and now an iranian into the plot... how come? and lets not forget he also got cia and mossad crashed into each other with flying colors. who's missing? maybe a pro-apartheid southafrican or a falkland islands resented argentinian...
  24. MarioAC

    Wind

    nah i dont get it... kilian is supergodsunsummoner and still gets knocked off by st*pid little whiney mini lord??
  25. MarioAC

    Consequences

    just wondering. illiath in the east across the sea, dleth and serran in the south, mountain range in the west... what's in the north?!
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