Tony S.
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Oh, somebody is going to make the first move soon, indeed. 😁 But who?
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My ankle kept me off patrol for three days. That sounded better than it felt. On paper, light duty meant rest. In practice, it meant inventory sheets, radio batteries, supply crates, and enough small chores to make me suspect Mason had personally decided immobility was bad for morale. Miguel called it my retirement. “You had a good run,” he said solemnly while I sat outside the tent cleaning dust from the grooves of a radio handset. “Short career. Inspiring, though.” “I twisted my
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The morale phones only worked when everything else decided to cooperate. Power. Satellite. Weather. Nobody ever seemed to know exactly why they were available one week and silent the next, so whenever word spread that the phones were up, Marines drifted toward the plywood shack near the PX almost instinctively. Some walked in smiling. Not many walked out that way. I joined the line after breakfast. There were only four phones inside, separated by thin plyw
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You're right! That makes much more sense. Thanks for pointing out.
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The assignment sounded simple enough. A team of engineers needed to inspect a damaged culvert several miles from the base before repairs could begin the following morning. Our job wasn't to repair anything. We were there to make sure everyone went home. The convoy dropped us off just before sunset. The engineers immediately disappeared beneath the bridge with flashlights and measuring equipment while Mason established a security perimeter around the shallow valley. The place
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By the middle of our third month, the mountains had stopped looking unfamiliar. That didn't mean we trusted them. It simply meant we had learned to read them. The ridgelines that had once seemed identical now carried their own personalities. We knew which valleys stayed cool well into the morning, which dry creek beds were easiest to follow, and which slopes stole your breath long before you reached the top. Mason rarely needed to unfold his map anymore. More often than not, he'd
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After a while, the days stopped announcing themselves. Somewhere between the fourth week and the fifth, Afghanistan ceased to feel like the place we'd been sent and became the place where we lived. Patrols blended into one another, distinguished less by where we went than by what happened along the way. Some lasted only a few hours. Others kept us outside the wire until long after sunset. Most passed without a shot being fired. That didn't make them safe. It only made us better at
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The convoy left the wire at a speed I'd never experienced before. Even during training, our vehicles had moved cautiously over rough ground, careful not to outrun the terrain. Tonight there was no caution. The Humvee lurched over every rut and washout, suspension groaning beneath the weight of Marines, ammunition, and equipment packed tightly into the back. We bounced hard enough that my helmet struck the armor plating more than once, each impact swallowed by the roar of the engin
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Our first patrol stepped off before sunrise. By 0430, the base was already awake. Generators droned steadily behind the Hesco barriers while Marines moved through the darkness beneath the glow of red-lensed flashlights, checking rifles one last time, tightening straps, topping off canteens. Nobody spoke unless they needed to. There was no ceremony. No speech reminding us of the importance of the mission. Just another checklist, another accountability report, and another order to m
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For a straight guy, Lawrence is way too gay for Bastien and I'm not complaining 🤪
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The company didn't change overnight. It changed by degrees. The morning after the announcement, nobody woke up any earlier than usual. Nobody ran faster during PT. Nobody suddenly became more serious. From a distance, everything looked exactly the same. Only the conversations had changed. The jokes still came. They simply ended a little sooner. Everywhere I looked, Marines had begun making quiet preparations. Some hurried to call home one last time. Others packed family photographs int
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People imagined military life as a string of extraordinary moments—explosions, gunfire, impossible acts of courage carried out under a hail of bullets. Movies had taught them to expect constant action, as though every day in uniform was another battle waiting to happen. The truth was much quieter than that. Most of military life was built on repetition: waking before sunrise, running until your lungs burned, training until your muscles ached, cleaning weapons that were already clean, then traini
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The fleet was nothing like I expected. Boot camp had taught us discipline. The School of Infantry had taught us the basics of surviving a battlefield. The fleet taught us how to live. The first morning, a staff sergeant met us outside the company office, glanced down at the paperwork in his hands, then looked up at the six of us standing in formation. "So these are the new boots." Nobody answered. He smirked. "You'll get used to that word." He wasn't wrong
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Thank you everyone! This is another slow burn story so be patient until the real romance gets into the story! I promise it will be worth it.
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Training at the School of Infantry settled into a rhythm much faster than boot camp ever had. The days were longer in some ways and shorter in others. We spent less time learning how to be Marines and more time learning how Marines actually worked. Patrol formations replaced close-order drill. Land navigation replaced memorizing procedures. The instructors still expected perfection, but they no longer hovered over every decision. They handed us a problem and expected us to solve it before t
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Home smelled exactly the same. The moment I stepped through the front door, I was greeted by garlic, soy sauce, and whatever my mother had decided needed another hour on the stove despite already being cooked. The familiar scent wrapped around me so suddenly that, for a second, Parris Island disappeared. The shouting. The sand. The smell of gun oil that had settled into my hands no matter how many times I washed them. All of it gave way to home. "Kent." Mom cro
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By the ninth week, boot camp had stopped feeling temporary. When I first arrived at Parris Island, I'd measured time in Sundays. Every Sunday meant another letter to Ken. Another page filled with whatever I was allowed to say and everything I wasn't. I'd write about blisters instead of exhaustion, rifle ranges instead of fear, funny stories instead of the nights I wondered whether I'd made the biggest mistake of my life. Somehow, the letters changed before I noticed I was changing.
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Looking back now, I couldn't tell you what happened on the twenty-third day of boot camp. Or the thirty-seventh. Or the fiftieth. People who had never been through it always imagined boot camp as one unforgettable moment after another—obstacle courses, rifle ranges, drill instructors inches from your face. They pictured every day as something dramatic. The truth was stranger than that. Most days were almost indistinguishable from the ones before them. We woke before
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It's not mainstream. But this will be a proper military novel. I tried to do my research. Hope it comes out OK. 😜
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By the time Ken pulled into the parking lot at MEPS, there wasn't much left to say. We'd spent the drive talking about everything except where we were going. He'd complained about the traffic. I'd made fun of his driving. We argued over whether the diner coffee had been strong enough to dissolve a spoon. He'd told me to write every week. Even if it was only three words. Still alive, dumbass. Then he'd smiled that crooked smile of his and told me to go be the best of myse
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Lawrence is head over heels. And in such a short time too.
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Thank you so much!
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The house sounded different the morning after I told Ken. Not quieter. Just... careful. Mom was already in the kitchen by the time I came downstairs, humming along to the old radio she insisted still sounded better than anything digital. The smell of bacon drifted through the house, followed by pancakes and coffee strong enough to wake the neighbors. Dad sat at the dining table with the newspaper spread open in front of him, reading over the top of his glasses instead of thro
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From now on it will be a slow burn story of Kent's journey in the military camp. I won't say much about what is going to happen but I hope you will enjoy the ride.
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Thank you guys. I was really reluctant whether to do this story at first. It will be a really long story this time as we learn about Kent's life in the military service and also the root causes of his trauma.
