Mark Arbour
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I love your stories! Did you go to the ranch?
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December 26, 2004 Escorial Palo Alto, CA Will “Relieved?” Marie demanded, outraged. “You’re glad he’s dead?” John asked, with just as big of a fly up his ass. I watched Claire react to their attacks by completely throwing up her shields. It was so intense it was like Captain Picard had spotted a Romulan. “You two are being assholes!” I snapped, and did it pretty loudly. “She says she’s happy Daddy is dead an
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December 26, 2004 Stanford University Hospital Palo Alto, CA Will “You drive,” I said to Travis, and tossed my car keys to him. “Bitchin’,” he said, sounding like the surfer that he was. We got into the car and he started driving back to Escorial. “I thought you were breaking up with me.” “I am annoyed with you, not angry, and it would have to be a whole lot worse than that for me to even think about breaking up
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Everyone makes mistakes. Travis’s sin was venal, not cardinal
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Most of my friends are just high.
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I’m known for unexpected developments. 😃
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This is the chapter where we meet Winkler, who will be a huge factor in Granger’s life.
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The battle scenes are fun to write!
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Let's see if this works
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Thanks fit the heads up. You’ll see it again when chapter 87 posts.
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Jackson Hobart. RIP
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Spoiler: not well
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I’m not convinced that at this point it’s Will’s job to do that. Isadore saw Claire make her peace with Will, so she knows the deal.
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December 25, 2004 Escorial Palo Alto, CA Will Marie and John had gone down to the hospital, while the rest of us had sort of scattered into different groups. Travis and I stood to the back of the room checking everyone out. “I thought about it, and if you want to fuck Paul, I’m good with that.” “I thought about it, and I only want to do that if you’re with me,” I said. “If you’re up for that?” “That could be fun,”
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Granger as a midshipman
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My favorite Granger pic so far. 17 year old lieutenant.
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I think that the reference to Zeus and Ganymede shows that Byron was playing the part of the novice.
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A few of Will and Travis. This is fun
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FYI chapters are consistently between 4000-5000 words
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December 24, 2004 Palo Alto, CA Brad I sat in the limo facing forward, with Claire sitting next to me. Jessica was across from me while John was looking at Claire. I had never seen Claire lose it like this. I had basically led her out of the house and to the car, totally directing her. I had to make sure she didn’t bump into something. I had originally thought that her going to the hospital was a bad idea, but I changed my mind and decided she may actually need to be admi
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I used Chat GPt. It’s super easy. Try it.
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The two phases of Brad.
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The Right Honorable George Granger, 1st Earl of Brentwood, Knight of the Bath, Holder of the Order of Charles III of Spain, and Knight of the Crescent in full regalia
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