I would like to send feedback often, but sometimes I have reservations about the style of the writer, and can't make up my mind whether some particular style is just personally annoying and a true style of the author, or if it's really less than perfect writing. I just finished reading up to date on a great serial story, but the author kept putting this stock phrase whenever he was explaining something. It was like listening to some one who keeps putting the term "you know" very frequently in the conversation; the mental result in me is like running fingernails over a chalkboard; it interrupts the story flow to the point where I need to re-read the passage to get back on track.
How does one address this type of thing to an otherwise good writer who definitely is becoming better and better as the story progresses?
daffy106
