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I was also glad to see a bit of Jenny in this one. The emotional attachment seems quite strong in the original timeline, and sorta in the second, but not in this one. It's a bit of a shame, maybe. Sandcastle/Caramel/Sundae (Sunday?) were...interesting/intriguing... I liked it. It seems like stuff is happenning

G'day, I am trying my hand at writing a four or five chapter mini-netnovel. I was told that a plan is always good, but that writing a first chapter and working it out from there is better. So I started it, and it's not going anywhere, fast. This is the third rewrite, and I tink I got the first part right, up till the second chorus of the song. Basically, the story will be about (stop reading if you don't want to find out) a bloke, Josh, who was raped by a man he didn't know, who later turns out to be Henry, and the five years afterwards. The rape will be the second half of the first chapter and won't be erotic but will be descriptive. The first two years (chapter two) he is a recluse until he goes on a cruise. The cruise (chapter three) he meets John, and they form a bond. Chapter four is him dealing with his problems with John, and lots of intimate moments, not just in sexual terms. Chapter five would be John having an affair with Henry, and Josh catches them and recognises him. Josh gots practically nuts, but eventually repairs the relationship with John (chapter 6), three weeks before the opening sequence. Here is the very start... --------------------------------- "Que sera, sera, whatever will be, will be; the future's not ours to see. Que sera, sera; what will be, will be

It's morning in America, and.... (EDIT-The campaign )

I think she's being a bitch, but out of concern for Davey. She is still his mother, and if the only way she can confirm that to herself-and Davey is to be a bit nasty about it, I think it's worth it. It's not like she's being actively malicious.

G'day Myr, don't tell Dan i'm here, i wouldn't want him to think I was being adulterous....

G'day, I'm Hugh, and i'm a new Danaholic. It started just 8 days ago, on a warm Friday night. I was reading through nifty and ventured into the rarely-visited sci-fi/fantasy section, and clicked on do over fr a mysterious reason. I read it and read it and then...it ran out! I clicked the links at the bottom, deperate for more, and yes! He did provideth it! More Do over! But, alas, I accidentally clicked on the Do Over Redux pge and read the summary. Woe! I went back to Do Over and read it, despite what I had learned. After far too long in front of the computer on , I was gald of my decision. I read the final chapters on the monday, and knew I was hooked. And this is one addiction I ain't giving up just yet Also, Novelty, I attempted to rwrite my own story, as well. I got a paragraph in, and realised it was awful I'm going to leave it to the experts

I'd like to see some psionic corps

OK, you've got me hooked on to the next chapter But Davey has a girlfrind? I remember him saying somewhere in the original Do Over that he would never have one again...

g'day y'all