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Nephylim

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  1. Nephylim

    Chapter 43

    I cannot deny the incredible amount of crazy Julianna has stored up in that small body of hers. Stupendous amounts. Lord, is that woman cray cray. I hope you get to the end without too much stress.
  2. Nephylim

    Chapter 43

    Ah yes, that's right. There's another player isn't there. Mustn't forget him
  3. Nephylim

    Chapter 43

    Well, he might have shot her if she hadn't been pregnant. I'd like to think he wouldn't have because it would have been devastating to the twins, but I don't know if I would have had enough restraint in the circumstances.
  4. Nephylim

    Chapter 43

    Yes, yes she is, but hold your horses. We can't just kill her because she's pregnant and the baby has hurt no one.
  5. Nephylim

    Chapter 44

    Julianna was down, with Aria sitting on her chest and Jay’s foot on her neck. As Drew stepped out into the corridor, Julianna started to thrash and scream, while Amara tried weakly to pull Aria away. “Come away. Please. She’ll hurt you. Please.” Aria didn’t hear, or at least didn’t listen. He was screaming as loudly as Julianna, yelling at her incoherently and punching her wherever he could get a fist to land. Jay, on the other hand, appeared entirely impassive as he pressed down coolly
  6. Nephylim

    Chapter 22

    Glad your phone made it Even gladder that you're enjoying my stories. Take care of your blood pressure
  7. Nephylim

    Chapter 16

    RIP phone Mwahahaha. I hope it survives Thank you for your comments
  8. Nephylim

    Chapter 8

    Just remember the is always a happy ending. Well, usually. Thank you for your comment. I'm really happy you're enjoying the story
  9. Nephylim

    Chapter 41

    With this whole Brexit debacle we're at the least popular we've ever been with the rest of Europe and rightly so. It frustrates me that people are so short sighted and ignorant. Then we pander to that *bleep* Trump. Sigh. That's why I don't get involved with politics if I can help it
  10. Nephylim

    Chapter 41

    No, thank you. You rock!
  11. Nephylim

    Chapter 43

    “Maman?” Amara said, shock evident in every part of his body language and tone. “What… Is this a joke? A trick?” Julianna laughed, and the hint of madness made Drew feel sick. He’d been in enough standoffs to realise this was one of the most dangerous situations—when the assailant was not reasonable or predictable. “No joke, my angel. Wait just a moment, Mother has business to take care of.” She smiled sweetly and threw a kiss at the twins, but the soft, almost affectionate tone changed
  12. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Hahaha. You made my day I am not sadistic. Wait. Yeah, I am If it's any consolation I go easier on the boys than I have on other characters I've written. Note, I said easier not easy
  13. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    I know it can be tricky, but generally the context should tell you. It just takes a little patience to get used to it. I'm not going to italicize it because that would be disrespectful. I don't italicise "him" and "her" so I'm not going to single out "their". Being non binary myself that goes against my own sense of identity, and it feels invalidating. I know you didn't think about it in that way, and I hope you understand why I'm not going to take your suggestion. Please keep making suggestions though, because I'll always consider them. ❤️
  14. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    That's why I don't want soaps, too. Nothing new to say Fair warning there are going to be a couple of chapters coming up with cliffhangers so you might want to stop readig for a couple of weeks then come back and read them all.
  15. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Dammit, my coffee addiction gets in everywhere. Fixed. Thank you. Never apologise for helping me to make my story better Well, I wouldn't want to keep everyone hanging too long. Who knows maybe I'll post tomorrow, but I warn you, the next couple of chapter all have cliffhangers.
  16. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Hehe. Thank you. I corrected it. The question is - will they get out of it.
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    Chapter 42

    I'll tell you that Ben meets his demise in a rather unexpected way Whether it's slow and/or painful you'll have to wait to find out. I think Courtey Act was a bit bland to be honest. She came in thinking she had it in the bag and I don't think she really tried. She's done amazing things since Drag Race though so kudos for that.
  18. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Very interesting. You'll find out on Wednesday
  19. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    I quite liked Pearl. She could be a bit freaky when she wanted. Not like Sharon Needles (who I ADORE) but some of her later stuff was cool. It's her voice though!! Who needs valium when they can listen to Pearl. I kept feeling like she was a music box that was running down and someone needed to come along and crank her up. She had classing moments, though. "Do I have something on my face?"
  20. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Hmmm Interesting
  21. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    He he but when you get to a point like this, just before a big reveal, you HAVE to have a cliffhanger, it's the law. Just ask anyone who writes soaps On the bright side, I posted late this week so you don't have so long to wait for the next chapter
  22. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Really? Interesting.
  23. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Ben's like the proverbial bad penny - he just keeps popping up. But everyone's luck runs out sooner or later.
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    Chapter 42

    Okay, I'll give you that. Bianca is the best queen in the history of the world evah! But Adore is so...adorable. It's not about outer beauty at all. I just love her to death. I want to cuddle her. She's so clueless. I didn't realise she's a friend Of Jeffrey Star. They've done some hilarious you tube videos. Courtney Act is...*rolls eyes* But she's not the worst. Back to Bianca. She's totally the dog's bollocks. I LOVED her films "Hurricane Biana" and "From Russia With Hate". I'm a hopeless fangirl!
  25. Nephylim

    Chapter 42

    Aria set his back against the wall in the corridor and leaned over, grasping his knees with his hands, as if he’d been running a race. He glanced up at Drew. “Did I do alright?” he asked nervously. “Could you tell I was shitting myself?” Drew snorted and grinned at Aria. “You astonish me,” was all he could think of to say. “Come on you,” Jeff said, ruffling Aria’s hair, much to his chagrin. “Let’s get back to that lot downstairs. No doubt they’re getting into some kind of trouble.” T
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