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Watergame - 30. Chapter 30

Note: All sexually involved characters in this story are Eighteen years of age or older except for the growing love between (now) eighteen year old Kevin and his (now) seventeen year old boyfriend, Jake.

Chapter 30 begins on Monday morning, August 27th. Classes at Brighton University will be suspended from Friday the 31st until Tuesday the 4th of September to give the students a long weekend over Labor Day. Julian will be leaving Friday morning to hook up with his family, and his boyfriend, to spend Labor Day Weekend on the family yacht.

Julian, now a senior, has reconnected with his former dorm-mate, Levi, whom he shared a dorm room with for his first two years of college. Levi is straight, but was instrumental in helping Julian to come out, and become the proud and openly gay man that he is today. Levi doesn’t have a homophobic bone in his body, and is Julian’s best friend on campus. Levi has taken it upon himself to play cupid now and to help another very lonely gay friend to find a boyfriend.

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Watergame Chapter 30, A Story of Gay Love by Douglas Spencer

Entering the classroom for his 11:00 AM class, Levi intentionally sat next to his target, the attractive Mickey Jones.

Levi, as the class ended, "Mickey, hold up!" Mickey stopped in his tracks, wondering what Levi wanted. "Mickey, I’m Levi, would you do me the honor of sharing lunch with me today?"

Mickey was surprised, as most of the other students usually just ignored him. He was not the most popular boy in class, but this big black classmate just invited him to have lunch with him.

Mickey, with a smile on his face, "I’d be honored to have lunch with you, Levi, no one else has ever invited me for lunch." Levi and Mickey walked to the dining hall and entered. They went through the line and got their lunch trays, and Levi paid for both of their lunches, and looked for a suitable table for two. Finding one at the end of the room, Levi led Mickey to it, and they sat down. It was in an ideal spot, where Levi felt he could chat with Mickey, about private stuff, without a lot of ears.

"Why did you want to have lunch with me?" Mickey asked.

"Because I want to get to know you," Levi replied, "is that a sin?"

"I guess not," Mickey answered, "but most of the students tend to ignore me, I really haven’t made any friends here."

"Is that your fault, or theirs?" Levi asked.

"Probably mine," Mickey responded, "a lot of them think I’m gay, and they don’t want to be friends with a fag."

"Mickey, please be truthful with me, and I promise I won’t be judgmental, are you gay?" Levi asked.

Mickey, looking down at his tray, "I’ve tried to conceal it, but some actions and habits give me away." Mickey was about to burst into tears, and Levi saw some start to slide down his face.

Levi, grabbing a napkin, "Mickey, dry those pretty eyes, we don’t have time, or a need for tears." Mickey tried to muster a smile.

"Mickey," Levi spoke softly, "I have time for gay friends, some of my dearest and closest friends, and my dorm-mate are gay. There is a reason I asked you that, and also, are you attached, or available?"

"I’m not sure where you’re going," Mickey said, "but I’m not looking to hook up with a black dude, if that’s where you’re leading."

"The boy I want you to meet is lonely, white, and has a serious case of the hots for you." Levi said, "When he saw you this morning, I thought he was gonna cream his jeans!"

"Really?" Mickey said, a grin creeping onto his face. "I don’t know where it might go, but I think I’d like to meet him."

"His name is Everett," Levi stated, "Come to the senior dorm, room 105 about 6:00 PM tonight, and we’ll introduce you to our friend Everett. From there on, it’ll be up to you and Everett where you take it."

"I’ll be there," Mickey stated, "I won’t miss this golden opportunity. Thanks, Levi." Levi and Mickey headed out of the dining hall to their next classes. At 4:00 PM Levi and Julian both returned to their room, classes over for the day.

"Julian, do you have Everett’s number?" Levi asked.

"No," Julian replied, "but I think I can get it from Jeff." Julian made a call to his boyfriend, and Jeff was able to look it up in his phone, and gave it to Julian, and he wrote it down.

"Call Everett, and ask him to hook up with us for dinner tonight, about 5:00 PM," Levi instructed, smiling. Julian, suspecting that Levi had something up his sleeve, made the call, and Everett agreed to meet them for dinner.

While the three boys had dinner, Levi explained that he had talked with Mickey, and that Mickey was to come to their room at 6:00 PM, and wanted to meet Everett. Everett was excited.

About 5:45 PM the three returned to room 105 and Mickey was already standing outside their door, not wanting to be late. Levi unlocked the door and invited Mickey to come inside with the other three boys.

"I think introductions are in order," Levi stated, "Mickey, this is my dorm-mate, Julian White, and our mutual friend, Everett Slocum. Guys, this is my classmate, Mickey Jones." Mickey shook hands with Julian, and then with Everett.

"Everett," Julian said, "As we promised you, if we ran across a single gay boy, we would try to get you a friend." Everett and Mickey looked into each other’s faces, and smiled.

"Everett," Mickey confirmed, "you are gay, and unattached, if I understand correctly?"

"Very much so," Everett replied, "and very lonely—I’m in desperate need of a good, like minded friend."

"I need to give you a test," Mickey said, "excuse me, guys." Mickey gave Everett a tight hug, and kissed Everett on the lips. Everett welcomed the kiss and shared one back with Mickey, wrapping his arms around Mickey, affectionately. Levi and Julian glanced at each other, grinning, and hoping their ‘cupid’ activity worked. Julian observed that, when the boys broke their embrace, both of them had bulges in their crotches. They have, evidently, turned each other on.

"Everett, do you have a dorm-mate?" Mickey asked.

"Yeah," Everett replied, grinning, "I’m in the junior dorm, and Johnnie, my dorm-mate is a boring, straight dude."

"I just transferred here from Catalina U, as a junior," Mickey explained, "but I’m in the overflow dorm, and I have the room to myself—so far. Would you like to go there with me, so we can get to know each other better?"

"I’d love to," Everett replied, a smile on his face.

"Let’s go then," Mickey said, "Levi, Julian, thanks for everything," Everett grabbed his backpack and left with Mickey, headed to the overflow dorm.

Julian, grinning, "You’re very welcome, don’t do anything I wouldn’t do!"

"No promises," Everett stated, grinning, "catch you guys later."

Arriving at Mickey’s room, Everett dropped his backpack on the floor and the two boys fell into a tight hug. Mickey pulled Everett down on the bed, and they started to make out, both boys were feeling the constraints of their clothing.

"My pants are feeling really tight tonight," Everett commented.

"Mine too," Mickey replied, "shall we get more comfortable?"

Both boys rose from the bed and stripped, and stood in front of each other, taking in the beauty of each other’s naked bodies. Everett wasn’t too certain how Mickey was going to react to his uncut penis, knowing that some guys consider it a turnoff.

"Wow!" Mickey remarked, "you’re uncut! I’ve never tricked with a dude that was uncut."

"I guess that’s probably a turnoff?" Everett said.

"Not at all," Mickey replied, wrapping his fingers around Everett’s boyhood, and feeling the silky smooth foreskin, "it’s just a little different. I wanna suck it!"

"Hold off a few," Everett stated, "I want to wash it first, I wouldn’t want you to get a bad taste of me." Everett went into the bathroom and soaped up a washcloth, cleaning his pecker well, especially under the hood, and the head of it. Mickey watched, fascinated, but also anxious to take it into his mouth. Just to be on the safe side, Mickey also washed his own pecker. The boys then returned to the bed and Mickey lowered his mouth over Everett’s freshly washed cock.

This was actually the first time that Everett had ever been sucked by another boy and it felt remarkably wonderful. As a rule, it was Everett that did the sucking, as most of his previous sex partners were reluctant to suck an uncut pecker. Mickey actually ‘wanted’ to suck his uncut dick. Mickey pulled the foreskin back so that he could give attention to the head of Everett’s cock, and Everett felt his orgasm rising.

"I’m getting pretty close to climax," Everett warned Mickey, and Mickey speeded up his assault.

Mickey, pulling off for a few seconds, "Let it cum, I’m ready to receive it!" Mickey was so into pleasing his partner, he felt that touching his own erection would cause him to cum, and he was leaking a steady stream of precum from his own pee slit.

"I’m cumming," Everett warned, as his cock started to pulse, shooting several ropes of sperm into Mickey’s warm and waiting mouth. Once the spasms subsided, Mickey pulled off, grinning and swallowing the tasty treat. Mickey used his thumb and forefinger to squeeze the last few drops out, and swallowed them as well, then cleaned the head and hood of Everett’s cock with his tongue.

"Switch positions," Everett ordered, and the boys swapped positions, now Everett’s mouth was filled with Mickey’s boyhood.

"I’m nearly there, already," Mickey said, "I’m hot as hell! I almost shot my wad, just getting you off. Oh fuck, I’m gonna cum! Right now!" Everett felt and tasted Mickey’s sperm, filling his mouth. God, Mickey tasted good, and Everett sucked Mickey dry.

The boys fell into another embrace, kissing and tasting each other’s sperm in each other’s mouths. Both of them were exploring each other’s bodies with their hands. Finally, they both sat up on the bed.

"Thank you Everett," Mickey stated, "I’ve wanted to experience sucking you off for years, and you have fulfilled my dream. I think your cock could become addictive!"

"Mickey," Everett said, "I like you—a lot, but I would hope you like me for more than just my uncut pecker."

"Everett, we’ve only just met today." Mickey said, "we have much to learn from, and about each other, and I’m eager to learn. Relationships can’t be built just around a desire for a boy’s cock!"

"So you are relationship oriented?" Everett asked.

"Isn’t that what we all want," Mickey replied, "someone to love, and call our very own? Do you have classes tomorrow morning?"

"I’m free on Tuesdays," Everett said, "What about you?"

"I have a lab at 1:00 PM on Tuesday afternoons," Mickey replied, "Why don’t you sleep over with me tonight?"

"I’d like that," Everett replied, smiling, "I need to call Johnnie, my dorm-mate, and tell him I’m staying over with a friend, so he won’t report me as missing." Everett made the call and Mickey grinned. Both boys are looking forward to learning more about each other and sleeping together in Mickey’s twin sized bed.

Neither Everett nor Mickey ever did get dressed again that evening. They lounged around in Mickey’s room naked, cuddled on the sofa and watched a couple of TV shows together, and chatted until about 11:00 PM, finally deciding to go to bed.

Once in bed, they made out for a few minutes, both of them getting erections, but not having any more sex. They just enjoyed the feeling of each other’s naked bodies lying close, and fell asleep, arms holding each other.

About 6:00 AM on Tuesday morning, Mickey woke up, sporting morning wood, and gazed into Everett’s beautiful, sleeping face. Mickey reached down under the blanket and wrapped his fingers around Everett’s flaccid pecker, which awakened immediately and stiffened. Filled with lust and desire, Mickey slowly removed the covers from Everett’s body, and replaced his hand around Everett’s sheathed pecker with his hungry mouth.

Everett, awakening, "Oh, god, what a glorious way to wake up! I gotta pee pretty bad, and I’m not gonna last." Mickey ignored Everett’s comments and sucked on, totally enjoying the feeling of Everett’s boyhood in his mouth. "I’m gonna cum!" Everett exclaimed, as he started to shoot several ropes of tasty sperm into Mickey’s mouth, Mickey swallowing it.

"What a tasty pre-breakfast snack!" Mickey exclaimed, as Everett jumped out of the bed and headed to the toilet to pee. Mickey still needed to pee, and still had his morning wood.

As soon as Everett returned from the bathroom, he pushed Mickey onto his back and attacked Mickey’s stiff woodie with his mouth, causing Mickey to start approaching his orgasm. "I’m mighty close, Ev, I still gotta pee." Everett worked Mickey’s erection for just a couple more minutes.

"I’m cumming, Ev!" Mickey exclaimed, as his cock started to pulse, filling Everett’s mouth with sperm, and Everett swallowing the delicious meal. "LET ME UP!" Mickey hollered, "or I’m gonna pee in your mouth!" Everett let Mickey up and Mickey quickly headed to the bathroom, to relieve his bladder.

Mickey, returning from the bathroom, and sharing a hug and kiss with Everett, "Shall we see about some real food?"

"Sure," Everett replied, "maybe we can hook up with Julian and Levi and share breakfast with them." Mickey and Everett got dressed and headed to the senior dorm to try and hook up with Julian and Levi.

Everett, on the way to the senior dorm, "Just a heads up, Mickey, they may not be dressed yet."

"Whoopie doo!" Mickey remarked, "Like we’ve never seen naked boys before?" They arrived at room 105 and knocked at the door. As Everett had suspected, Levi and Julian were still naked. Julian looked through the privacy glass, and seeing Everett and Mickey, he opened the door, and the boys stepped in.

Mickey, snickering, "You were right, Everett, they’re still naked!"

"I hope we didn’t offend you," Levi stated, "we enjoy our nudity."

"No offense, I think most gay couples like to be naked around each other," Mickey said, his eyes focusing down to Levi’s large, but flaccid manhood.

"Well," Levi replied, "just to set the record straight, no pun intended, we’re not a gay couple. Julian’s boyfriend graduated last spring, and he is living with Julian’s family, in Dunbar, and I’m straight. Julian and I have been dorm-mates our first two years here, and now again for our senior year. I love Julian, with all my heart, but like a brother, not a lover. We’ve never done anything sexual together, but we do enjoy being naked together. It’s just a way of life, that we enjoy."

"I see," Mickey replied, "Everett and I thought you two might like to join us for breakfast, that’s why we came over this morning."

"Thank you for the invite," Julian said, "give us about five minutes to get dressed, and we’ll be happy to go to breakfast with you two. Have a seat and we’ll be right with you." Everett and Mickey sat on the small sofa, and Mickey reached for Everett’s hand, and Julian observed, smiling. Levi and Julian got dressed, and the four boys headed to the dining hall together. They got their trays, and sat at a table together, Levi across from Mickey, and Julian across from Everett.

"Just curious," Julian asked, grinning, "did you guys spend the night together?"

"Yeah," Mickey replied, "just getting to know each other."

"They look like the cats that got the cream!" Levi remarked.

"We did," Everett replied, grinning sheepishly, "get the cream!" Julian grinned, understanding the connotation, but it went over Levi’s head.

"We were really hoping that you guys would hit it off," Julian stated, "were we successful?" Everett and Mickey glanced at each other, grinning.

"I think so," Mickey replied, "we do have a lot in common."

"I wish we could be dorm-mates," Everett said.

"That might be possible," Levi said, "Mickey, you’re in the overflow dorm, don’t you have a spare bed in your room?"

"Yeah," Mickey replied, grinning, "There were no openings in the junior dorm, so they put me into the overflow, but I don’t have a dorm-mate."

"Maybe," Levi suggested, "if you talk with the dorm people, they would let Everett share your room in the overflow dorm. If you guys really want to share a room together, it’s worth a shot."

"I don’t care for Johnnie, my dorm-mate in the junior dorm," Everett said, "he’s straight and boring, would incompatibility with a dorm-mate maybe give me some leverage?"

"Maybe," Levi said, "it might not be wise to mention that he’s straight, but incompatibility might be considered a reason to want to move. It would probably help if you apply together, that is, if Mickey really wants you for a dorm-mate."

"Oh!" Mickey exclaimed, "I’d love to have Everett for a dorm-mate, Everett, would you like to share my room?"

"I can’t believe you’re asking me that!" Everett exclaimed, "of course I would!"

"In that case," Mickey said, "lets go see if we can get you moved."

The boys left the dining hall, Levi and Julian headed to the senior dorm and Mickey and Everett headed to the dorm office. Mickey and Levi have a Lab session to attend at 1:00 PM today, but neither Everett nor Julian have classes on Tuesdays.

Mickey and Everett filed their request at the dorm office, and the supervisor asked them to take a seat, and he would talk with them. A few minutes later he asked them both to come into his office.

"I have your application for Everett Slocum to move from the junior dorm and share a dorm room in the overflow dorm with Mickey Jones. I am going to deny this request." The supervisor stated. Everett and Mickey looked at each other, both with an expression of shock and disappointment on their faces

"Easy, guys," he said, "it might not be all that bad. Mickey was placed in the overflow dorm because of a lack of beds in the junior dorm, with the understanding that we might move him, if an opening came up in the junior dorm, and an opening has come up.

Everett, your dorm-mate, Johnnie Benton, is getting married, and he and his bride have applied for one of the off-campus apartments, and been approved. He will be relocating this weekend to that apartment, which leaves a one-bed vacancy in your dorm room. Since you boys are both juniors, what if we alter your request, to move Mickey from the overflow dorm into your dorm room, in the junior dorm?"

"That would work!" Mickey exclaimed, smiling. Mickey and Everett both glanced at each other and grinned. "So when could I move?" Mickey asked.

"We need to give Johnnie time to get his stuff moved to the apartment," he said, "Mickey should be able to move in on Sunday, but we might not have a key for him until Monday."

"Thank you, sir, very much!" Mickey exclaimed. Both boys shook hands with the supervisor, and were very pleased. They walked out of the dorm office with a spring in their step. They both want this, and can hardly wait to tell Julian and Levi how their request worked out.

After lunch, Mickey has a Lab with Levi at 1:00 PM, and will share the good news with him then. Everett will likely show up at Julian’s dorm room shortly to tell him of the good news.

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Monday morning at Kenworth University, Kevin and Ryan woke to the alarm at 7:30 AM and climbed out of their beds, both boys sporting morning wood and needing to pee. They walked into their bathroom and stood together, pissing into the shower, and Ryan turned on the water, flushing their pee down the drain.

That was a lot easier than trying to direct their streams into the toilet, as both boys were completely erect. After relieving themselves, their peckers returned to the flaccid state, and they got dressed. They grabbed their backpacks, mounted their bikes, and headed to the dining hall for breakfast, still dining on Ryan’s pass.

About 8:45 Kevin and Ryan left the dining hall, along with a bunch of other freshmen, and headed to the multipurpose hall for the freshmen orientation, entered the auditorium and sat together. After an hour and a half of (mostly) bullshit, Coach Crane, the football coach, took the podium. He announced that any of the students here on Football Scholarships, or new students wanting to try out for the football team needed to be on the football field at 6:00 PM this evening, then turned the podium over to Coach Franklin, the basketball coach.

Coach Franklin made a similar announcement for the potential basketball players, and their initial meeting would be at 6:00 PM on Tuesday evening, in the gymnasium. Coach Franklin then turned the podium back to Dean Jones. Dean Jones stated than any of the students that still needed to obtain passes for the dining hall, could purchase them, as well as bus passes, in Room 107 right after orientation was done. After another half an hour of BS, the students were released, and orientation was over.

Ryan accompanied Kevin to room 107 to purchase his dining hall pass, and suggested they also get bus passes in order to go into town, without needing to ride their bikes. It would also be an advantage to have the bus passes to be able to ride the bus to some of the buildings on campus during inclement weather. They could get soaked to the skin, riding their bikes on rainy days. It’s tough, being a freshman on Kenworth University Campus!

The line of students at room 107 was nearly 100 students long and it took Kevin and Ryan over an hour to work their way to the front of the line. By the time they took care of their business, they would barely have time to make it to the dining hall for lunch and there were still about 50 more students in the line behind them.

Arriving at the dining hall, the sign at the entrance stated lunch hours were from 11:30 AM until 1:00 PM, and it was 1:05 now. They were still able to get lunch, and Kevin initiated his pass. It was fortunate that the dining hall stayed open late today to accommodate the orientation students.

After lunch, Ryan and Kevin returned to their dorm room, and like the previous day, Ryan stripped as soon as they entered the room, and Kevin followed suit. The two boys wanted to compare their class schedules, and see what classes they might share, although their disciplines were different. Kevin’s major is Information Technology, and Ryan’s is Business Management.

Sitting on the small sofa together, both boys with their class schedules in hand, were starting to compare their schedules. Ryan innocently placed his hand on Kevin’s inner thigh, and the feeling of Ryan’s hand on that sensitive area made Kevin’s pecker start to erect. Kevin glanced down to Ryan’s crotch, and Ryan was erect, and even had a drop of precum glistening at his pee slit. Looking up into Ryan’s face, Ryan was grinning. Was Ryan was putting the make on him?

"Ryan, you’re making me hard," Kevin stated.

"I know," Ryan replied, still grinning. Kevin was at a loss for words, not sure what was happening. Kevin moved his face closer to Ryan’s and Ryan lowered his head, meeting Kevin’s lips with his own succulent, black lips. The two boys shared a spontaneous kiss, and Ryan’s tongue slipped into Kevin’s mouth, seeking Kevin’s tongue. Both boys now had stiff erections, standing tall.

"Kevin," Ryan said, "I wasn’t completely truthful with you last Saturday, the day you arrived. I told you that the Royal’s had a gay player, but I didn’t tell you that that gay player was me. When I found out that you were gay, it was a very welcome and pleasant surprise. I’d much prefer to have a white gay dorm-mate than a black straight dorm-mate."

Kevin, smiling, "I think the feelings are completely mutual, and I still am not ready to trade you in!" Kevin initiated another kiss with Ryan and the two boys shared an affectionate hug.

"Kevin," Ryan stated, "I’ve never made it with a white boy, can I find out what a white boy’s milk taste’s like?" Ryan pulled Kevin to his feet and pushed him down on his bed, kneeling between Kevin’s legs, and preparing to take Kevin’s boyhood into his warm and waiting mouth. Kevin was highly aroused, and was helpless to resist, wanting to return the favor ASAP. Ryan seemed every bit as skilled in giving head as Jake, and Kevin was willing to feed his dorm-mate. Ryan’s meal was not far away.

"Ryan, I’m not far off," Kevin said, "Do you want me to cum in your mouth?"

Ryan, pulling off for a few seconds, "Of course, how else would I get to taste you!" Kevin started to moan and groan, totally enjoying this surprise oral attack on his boyhood. Kevin felt his orgasm building, getting closer by the second. Kevin’s hands were stroking Ryan’s short cropped, Velcro-like hair that felt so much different than Jake’s.

"I’M GONNA CUM!" Kevin gasped, and Ryan tightened his lips on Kevin’s cock, driving his orgasm forward. Kevin’s cock started to shoot a healthy load of semen into Ryan’s mouth and throat, and Ryan was moaning in pleasure. Ryan swallowed most of Kevin’s ejaculate, then rolled the bit that was left around in his mouth, contemplating the flavor. "Well, how is it?" Kevin asked.

Ryan, grinning, "Tasty, and not a lot different from how a black dude’s cum taste’s. I could get used to it pretty easy!"

"My turn," Kevin stated, "get on your back!" Ryan pulled off, and repositioned himself, and Kevin knelt between Ryan’s legs, to return the favor. This might be a challenge, as Ryan’s cock is somewhat larger than Jake’s, but Kevin is up for the challenge. Kevin’s mouth was quickly filled with Ryan’s BBC. He is used to Jake’s seven inches of erect cock, and Ryan’s manhood is about nine inches long and half again the diameter of Jake’s.

Never in his life had Kevin had a cock quite as large as Ryan’s in his mouth. Kevin was conscious of the harm his teeth could do, and was trying to be careful not to harm this BBC. Ryan’s pecker was streaming an unbelievable quantity of precum, and Kevin was keeping it swallowed. He really wanted to please Ryan.

"I don’t know if my mouth is big enough to do you justice," Kevin stated, "you’re bigger than any cock I’ve ever sucked before."

"You’re doing fine, buddy," Ryan replied, "it’s feeling pretty incredible to me, and if it’s any consolation, I usually cum pretty fast. I’m really aroused, it won’t be long." Ryan’s comments encouraged Kevin. Kevin had about four inches of Ryan’s length in his mouth, and that was about all he could take, especially with the extra girth of Ryan’s cock. Kevin was giving Ryan his best.

"Oh Fuck! Oh Fuck!" Ryan exclaimed, as his cock started to spasm, and shooting his load into Kevin’s mouth. "God that feels good!" Kevin pulled off, but couldn’t speak, his mouth was so filled with Ryan’s cream. Kevin was contemplating whether to spit or swallow, finally starting to swallow Ryan’s gift. Ryan must have ejected about twice as much cum from his balls as Jake had ever shot. Kevin never had this much cum in his mouth before.

"Thanks, dude!" Ryan exclaimed, "That was one of the best head jobs a boy has ever given me, not that I’ve received a lot of them. I sure hope that’s not the only time you do me, I could enjoy that on a daily basis!"

"You sure do cum a lot!" Kevin remarked, "I’m not too sure about doing you daily, but you do taste a lot like my boyfriend, and I would be willing to do you again, on occasion. I’ve never sucked a cock as big as yours before, maybe I can get used to it with practice."

Ryan, snickering, "You can practice with this cock anytime you want, as long as I can return the favor. I really enjoyed sucking you off too. Maybe we have become friends—with benefits." The two boys shared a hug and kiss, tasting each other’s mouths.

Ryan, as the two boys settled back on the sofa, "Kevin, I think I could fall in love with you."

"We can’t let that happen, Ryan!" Kevin remarked, "I love having you as a dorm-mate, and I like you a lot, but I have someone that I am in love with, and Jake and I have committed our love, and our hearts, to each other. I couldn’t stand to break his heart—that would break my heart! If you and I can have a little fun now and then, like we did today, I’m cool with that."

"I understand," Ryan replied, "I’ll try to keep my emotions at bay."

"I think we need to try and find you a boyfriend," Kevin stated, "so you can have a love of your own."

"That would be nice," Ryan replied, "I’ve never had a boyfriend, most of the boys I’ve ever hooked up with just wanted to have some sex, and most of them were one-way, me sucking them off. How can we find someone?" Ryan asked.

"Advertise," Kevin said, "there are ways to put yourself out there, and let other likeminded boys know that you’re available, download ‘Grinder’ and see who else is available. You might even find another boy right here on campus that would have similar feelings and interests." Ryan grinned, liking the idea.

"Will you help me?" Ryan asked.

"Sure, first you need to download the app to your phone, then join grinder, and upload your ad, and wait for responses," Kevin said.

Ryan, a few minutes later, "OK, I’ve joined, what should my ad say?"

"Maybe something like ‘Lonely on campus, freshman student at Kenworth University looking to meet like minded boys for fun and friendship. Your photo gets mine.’"

"I don’t have any photo’s of me on my phone," Ryan said, "can you take a couple of me?"

"Sure," Kevin replied, "do you want to show all, or just from the waste up? Some guys like to show just their genital area, or maybe just their ass."

"Why would they post a picture of their cock or ass?" Ryan asked.

"Grinder is mostly a hook-up site," Kevin explained, "and a lot of guys are just turned on by seeing a boys cock or ass, depending on what they’re looking for. You may want to show your face, if you’re looking more for friendship. Guys looking to fuck like to see asses, guys looking to suck a cock like to see your manhood."

"Don’t any of them just want to meet, and maybe become friends?" Ryan asked.

"Some do," Kevin said, "that’s why I suggested a photo of your face."

"Should we take the photo in the nude, or dressed?" Ryan asked.

"Yeah," Kevin said, grinning, "one or the other. It probably depends on your preferences. Is your priority finding a boy for sex or for friendship? If you’re just looking for sex, you might want to show yourself naked, and display your nice BBC."

"What’s a BBC?" Ryan asked.

"You really are out touch with the gay community," Kevin said, "BBC is gay lingo for ‘Big Black Cock’ just like GWM means ‘Gay White Male’ and BBM would be short for ‘Bi Black Male’, you’ll learn the slang. If you show a photo of your ass, it’s like stating you want a dude to slip his cock up your boy pussy."

"Oh, I’ve never been fucked," Ryan said, "and I don’t think I’m ready for that! I just like to suck, and be sucked."

"So," Kevin grinned, "you’ve got a virgin boy pussy just waiting for some boy to bust your cherry!" Ryan grinned and was getting a good gay sex education from his dorm-mate.

"I think I’d rather see a boys face before I meet him, rather than his other body parts, should I state that I’m a GBM?" Ryan asked.

"If you post a photo of your face," Kevin explained, "any prospective date would know that you are black, and posting on Grinder would let them know that you are gay, or at least Bi. Pull on a tee-shirt and I’ll take a non-sexual photo that you can post, and see what happens. If they’re interested in you, you can always text them a photo of your BBC if they want to see what you sport, down below."

Ryan pulled on a mostly white tee-shirt and stood against the white dorm wall, and Kevin took a couple photo’s of Ryan from the waste up, and then lowered the phone and took a close-up of Ryan’s lower, still naked body, that left nothing to the imagination.

"There," Kevin stated, "you’ve got the photo’s in your phone. If your first priority is in making friends, I would post only a photo that shows just your upper body and face."

"Thanks Kev," Ryan said, "how long might it be before I get a response?"

"Hard to tell," Kevin replied, "I’ve never used the App. It might be a couple of hours, it might be a week. You’ll get a text from the App if someone responds. If they’re really interested in meeting you, they’ll likely leave a phone number, or email address."

"I’m posting it now," Ryan said, "I sure hope I get responses."

"I’m inclined to think you will," Kevin stated, "just on campus I’d bet there are at least ten or fifteen lonely gay boys that are looking for gay friends, or at least hookups."

Ryan’s wait for the first response was short, about a half an hour later he received a text from the App: ‘Brandon would like to meet you, call him at (XXX) XXX-XXXX’.

"I got a response!" Ryan exclaimed, showing the text to Kevin.

"Brandon, huh?" Kevin replied, "Well, he’s tossed the ball into your court, the next play is yours. He was kind enough to give you his phone number."

Ryan, smiling, dialed the number, and a man’s voice responded with "Hello?"

"Hi," Ryan replied, "did you respond to my ad, on Grinder?"

"Is this Ryan?" Brandon asked.

"It is," Ryan said, "the text said you’d like to meet me."

"You’ve got a really friendly face, the kind of boy I want to meet," Brandon said, "if you would be free, about 8:00 PM, we could meet at the student canteen, and maybe share coke’s, and get to know each other a little."

"I don’t have any plans," Ryan said, "I can meet you there, but how will I know who you are?"

"I’m a black dude, and I’m wearing black jeans and a black tee-shirt, and I’ll be sitting alone at a table, waiting for you," Brandon said. "We’ll only have about an hour, because the canteen closes at 9:00 PM, I’m looking forward to meeting you, Ryan."

"Great!" Ryan exclaimed, "I won’t stand you up, I’ll see you about 8:00 PM." The two boys hung up, and Ryan started to dress, getting ready for his ‘blind date’ with Brandon at the canteen. Ryan is one excited young man. The Grinder App stated the best place to meet up with someone is a common public place, and the student canteen is an ideal location.

"Be careful, Ryan," Kevin stated, "get to know Brandon before you go anywhere with him, I’d hate for you to become a statistic!"

"Thanks, Kevin," Ryan said, "I hope he’s as nice in person as he sounds on the phone. I should be back sometime after 9:00 PM." It was about 7:30 when Ryan left the dorm room on foot, heading toward the student canteen, about a twenty minute walk away.

About 7:50 PM Ryan entered the canteen and looked around, spotting a really handsome black man, dressed in black and sitting alone at a table. He cautiously approached the table.

Brandon stood, "Ryan?" he asked, extending his hand. "Brandon Hall." The two boys shook hands.

"Ryan Wilkins," Ryan said, smiling. Brandon was much more handsome than Ryan expected he would be.

"Please be seated," Brandon said, "I’ll get us some drinks, on me, what’s your pleasure?"

"Sprite would be fine," Ryan replied, sitting down, as Brandon went to get them some drinks. About three minutes later Brandon returned with two Sprite’s, placing one in front of Ryan, and taking a seat on the side of the table, closest to Ryan. Brandon, at first sight, seemed to be very friendly, and very likable.

"Ryan," Brandon said, "I hope you like Nacho’s Supreme, I just ordered us a sharing size."

"A man after my own heart—I love them, thanks," Ryan replied, "I hope you’re not just trying to get into my pants, already."

"Ryan, I don’t just hop into bed with any gay boy I meet!" Brandon stated, "I want to get to know you first, and maybe if we click, we can have some sex later. What year are you in?"

"I actually just arrived," Ryan said, "I’m a freshman, and I’m here on a basketball scholarship. So is Kevin, my dorm-mate. We’re in Redmond Hall, B-side. We share room B-2"

"Does he know you’re gay?" Brandon asked.

Ryan, grinning, "Yep, we both are, I couldn’t ask for a more desirable dorm-mate, and we’ll be team-mates on the college basketball team, too."

"Are you guys sex partners?" Brandon asked.

"Not as a rule," Ryan answered, "Kevin and I have messed around a little, but he has a boyfriend back home that he is totally in love with. He and I have shared no intimacy, his heart belongs to Jake."

"I’m also in Redmond Hall," Brandon explained, "A-side, and I’m a sophomore. My dorm-mate is a straight dude, and has a girlfriend that lives near here. I have a heart that is unattached, and is dying to belong to a nice boy. Someone I could fall in love with, and call my own. I was hoping, when I answered your ad on Grinder, that you might be that boy."

"So, if I’m understanding you correctly," Ryan said, "you are relationship oriented?"

"Very much so," Brandon replied, "I just need to find the right boy to build that relationship with." Ryan smiled, maybe Brandon likes him—he hopes.

It was close to 9:00 PM and the nachos and drinks were gone. The staff at the canteen were preparing to close, for the night. Brandon went to the cashier and paid the tab, and he and Ryan walked out of the door together. Since they both lived in Redmond Hall, they walked toward the dorm together. In front of Redmond Hall they stopped to share a hug with each other.

"May I," Brandon asked, holding Ryan’s face in front of his, and pressing his lips onto Ryan’s, and the boys shared their first kiss together. It felt good to both of them, and they both felt a swelling in their pants.

"Brandon," Ryan said, "Why don’t you come to room B-2 in the morning, about 8:00 AM. I can introduce you to Kevin, and we can all go to breakfast together."

"I’d like that," Brandon replied, smiling, "I’ll see you about 8:00." Brandon headed to the A-side and Ryan to B-2.

Kevin, as Ryan walked in the door, "How did it go?"

"Quite well, thank you," Ryan replied, "Brandon is a sophomore, and his dorm room is over in the A-side of our dorm. He is super- nice, and I like him—a lot. He’s gonna come to our room about 8:00 AM, to meet you and go to breakfast with us in the morning."

"Did you guys—do—anything?" Kevin asked, curiously.

"No, not yet," Ryan replied, "we’re just getting to know each other, and—well—we kissed—and he’s an awesome kisser! I can hardly wait to see him again, I think he likes me."

"I’m glad you guys hit it off well," Kevin said, "I’ll see you in the morning, goodnight, and sleep tight."

Kevin and Ryan stripped, and slid into their beds, falling asleep soon afterwards. Ryan is hoping that Brandon want’s to get to know him as much as he wants to learn more about Brandon.

Tuesday morning Kevin’s phone alarm sounded at 7:00 AM waking both Ryan and himself. Kevin and Ryan shared a shower together, dried and exited the bathroom about 7:45, and there was a knock on their door. Ryan, expecting Brandon, looked through the privacy glass and saw Brandon standing there. Ryan opened the door, inviting Brandon into the room. Brandon seemed a little surprised, catching both boys still naked.

"Please excuse us, Brandon," Ryan said, "we just finished our showers. Brandon, I’d like you to meet my dorm-mate, Kevin Collins, and Kevin, this is my new friend, Brandon Hall.

Kevin, naked, unashamedly stepped toward Brandon, offering his hand, "I’m pleased to meet you, Brandon." Brandon shook hands with Kevin, but his eyes drifted down to Kevin’s boyhood, and he smiled, evidently enjoying the view. Brandon’s eyes then drifted to Ryan’s somewhat larger boyhood, taking in the view of what his (maybe) future boyfriend had to offer, then wrapped his arms around Ryan’s naked body, and gave Ryan a good morning kiss and hug, making Ryan’s flaccid pecker stiffen a little, becoming half erect.

Brandon and Ryan pulled apart, and Brandon playfully gave Ryan’s half-erect pecker a loving tug, and Ryan grinned.

"Do you guys normally hang around naked?" Brandon asked.

"Only every chance we get," Ryan said, grinning.

"We can’t help it," Kevin added, "we just like our nudity."

"If we had more time," Brandon remarked, "I’d love to get naked with you guys. I think I’d like it. I know we gotta go get some breakfast right now"

"Brandon," Kevin asked, "what are you doing, right after lunch, say, about 1:00 PM.?"

"Nothing," Brandon replied, "I have two classes this morning, one at 10:00 and one at 11:00, but nothing on Tuesday afternoons."

"Ryan and I have to meet with our basketball coach at 6:00 PM tonight," Kevin said, "but after lunch we’ll be hanging around here, naked, until dinnertime. You’re more than welcome to join us, if you wish."

Brandon, grinning, "That’s an invitation I can’t decline!" Ryan and Kevin grinned at each other, they’ve found a taker! Kevin and Ryan dressed, and the three boys grabbed their backpacks and headed to the dining hall for breakfast. Soon after breakfast, they all headed in different directions for their10:00 AM classes.

After lunch, Kevin and Ryan headed to their dorm room, and were comfortably naked five minutes later. At just about 1:00 PM, Brandon was knocking at their door. Kevin and Ryan answered the door together, welcoming Brandon to their lair. Stepping inside, Brandon grinned, seeing both boys already naked.

"Were you guys serious, about us all hanging naked together?" Brandon asked.

"Ryan, lets show Brandon how serious we were!" Kevin remarked. Ryan and Kevin wrestled Brandon onto Ryan’s bed. Kevin started to untie and remove Brandon’s sneakers, while Ryan took care of unbuckling Brandon’s belt. While Ryan pulled Brandon’s trousers and boxers down and off, Kevin removed his shirt. Brandon allowed the two boys to strip him naked, with no resistance at all.

"Now do you believe us?" Ryan asked.

"I’ve never been undressed by a boy before," Brandon exclaimed, grinning, "let alone two boys at once!" There was Brandon, lying on Ryan’s bed, totally naked, and grinning.

Kevin, stepping over to Ryan’s bed, and wrapping his fingers around Brandon’s large, stiffening boyhood, "Nice black pecker!"

"Do you like BBC’s?" Brandon asked.

Kevin, grinning, "I like almost all cocks! I’m not prejudiced. Cocks are King and pussy’s are—yucky!"

"I think I have to agree," Brandon replied, "I’m no fan of pussy. I’ve never been into one, and I never had a desire to even try it."

"Back in high school," Kevin said, "half the girls at Dunbar High wanted to date me, but I didn’t want a girlfriend, I wanted a boyfriend. I met Jake, and stole his heart, and we became lovers. Ryan met Jake, the day I arrived here. God, I miss my baby!"

"Oh, gosh," Ryan said, "it was heartbreaking to see those two part, when Jake had to leave Kevin behind and return home. I think both of them cried a bucket of tears! I’m certain that Kevin and Jake are truly in love." Kevin smiled, and nodded in agreement.

A couple of minutes later, Ryan spontaneously lay on his bed, next to Brandon, their bodies close. Brandon, smiling, snuggled even closer to Ryan, and wrapped his arm around him. Kevin, viewing the two boys, was pleased that they seemed so comfortable, lying on the bed together. It was a beautiful sight.

In another few minutes, both boys fell asleep, lying together on the top of Ryan’s bed, and both holding each other’s torso’s in their arms. It was only about 2:30 PM. and 2½ hours before chow time. Kevin quietly removed the blanket from his bed, and covered the two sleeping boys up. He then, still naked, sat at his desk and tackled his studies.

About 4:30 Kevin decided to wake the boys, as they needed to get dressed and go to the dining hall for supper. Viewing Ryan’s bed, Ryan was on his side, facing Brandon, and Brandon was lying on his back, obviously with a boner that was making a tent pole, holding up the blanket. Kevin politely shook the two boy’s shoulders, waking them, then pulled his blanket off, exposing both young men’s nine inches of morning wood. The two boys both had similar sizes of boyhood, and both were bigger than either his own or Jake’s.

"Fuck!" Brandon remarked, "This is the wrong time of day for morning wood!"

Kevin, grinning, "Maybe it’s afternoon wood? We need to get dressed, and go get some supper, Ryan and I have to be at the gym at 6:00 for our meeting with Coach Franklin. Did you guys enjoy your nap?"

"You bet," Brandon replied, smiling, "I wish we could sleep together overnight." Ryan grinned, liking the idea.

"Who is to say you can’t," Kevin stated, "if you two can stand to sleep together in a twin bed."

"But what if we wanted to—do—something?" Ryan asked.

"Hey," Kevin responded, "we’re all alike, in some ways, there is nothing you could do, that I haven’t done. If it feels good, do it."

"Ryan," Brandon spoke, "I like you, a lot, I’d love for us to spend the night together."

"Kevin, would you be okay with Brandon sleeping over with me?" Ryan asked.

"Of course," Kevin replied, "Ryan, I’m not your Daddy, you can do what you want to do, you don’t need my permission."

"Thanks, Kevin," Ryan replied, "you’re an awesome dorm-mate!"

"You know, Ryan," Kevin said, "I would expect the same respect from you, should the shoe be on the other foot."

"You’ve got it," Ryan said, as he and Kevin shared a loving hug. These two dorm-mates have quickly developed a love for each other, and Kevin feels that their relationship, as close friends, is strong. Kevin also likes Brandon a lot, and is hoping that Ryan and Brandon might become closer than just friends.

The three boys dressed and, as they were ready to leave the room, Brandon picked up his backpack.

"Brandon," Kevin asked, "aren’t you staying over with Ryan tonight?"

"I’m planning on it," Brandon replied, "but I need to do some homework, and I don’t want to leave my backpack where I can’t get to it."

"No problem," Kevin replied, "Ryan, loan Brandon your key, so he can return to our room, and study. We’ll be together at the gym, and I have my key to get back into our room when we’re done, in case Brandon needs to leave."

Brandon, accepting the key from Ryan, "Don’t worry guys, I’ll be in your room, awaiting your return from the gym." The three boys headed for the dining hall, and sat at a table together to eat. Kevin believes that Brandon’s interest in Ryan is sincere, and he has no reason to distrust Brandon. After dinner, Brandon headed back to Ryan and Kevin’s dorm room, and Ryan and Kevin headed to the gym for the meeting with Coach Franklin.

Coach Franklin explained to the twenty boys at the meeting that tryouts for the team would be on Saturday morning at 9:00 AM. Between the four boys present that are on scholarships and the other boys that were trying out, he would be selecting ten new members for the team, to supplement the six returning members, that were not present for the meeting.

After the tryouts, he would be measuring the boys, and ordering uniforms for those that would be on the team. The boys would be expected to have their own practice uniforms for the tryouts. He explained that Saturdays, during the fall would be, for the players, like any other weekday, and would be at 9:00 AM.

Once he had selected the members to be on the team, he would issue lockers, and the boys would not have lockers yet, on the tryout Saturday, but if they had towels, they would have the chance to shower after the tryouts, if they so desired.

After a brief question and answer period, Coach Franklin released the boys, and Kevin and Ryan headed to their dorm. When they arrived, Kevin used his key to unlock the door. Walking into the room, Kevin and Ryan both grinned, as Brandon was already naked. Seconds later, Kevin and Ryan were also naked.

"I took the liberty to pick up a couple six-packs of sodas, and put them in the fridge," Brandon stated, "you guys are welcome to have some."

"Thanks, Bran, that was very thoughtful of you." Kevin stated, as he and Ryan both grabbed one. "This is a welcome surprise, after that meeting." The three boys sat on the small sofa, like sardines, to watch a little TV before retiring, Kevin on one end, Ryan in the center, and Brandon taking the other end. Within a couple of minutes, Brandon put his arm around Ryan’s shoulders, and pulled him close. Ryan smiled, enjoying the affection from Brandon, and the closeness of their naked bodies.

Kevin, reaching for his phone, placed a call to Jake, and Jake answered quickly, anxious to talk with his boyfriend.

"Jake," Kevin asked, "where are you, right now?"

"I just got home, from the pizzeria," Jake replied.

"Can you go to your room, get naked and bring up Skype on your laptop?" Kevin asked. "I want to see all of the boy I love."

"Sure," Jake replied, "I want to see you too, gimme about fifteen minutes."

"Okay, I’ll see you, literally, in about fifteen minutes." Kevin said, and they hung up. Kevin set up his laptop on the coffee table, in front of the sofa, where all three boys could see the screen, and also be viewed.

"What are you doing?" Brandon asked.

"Setting up Skype," Kevin said, "I want you to meet my beautiful boyfriend."

"Oh, shit," Brandon said, jumping up, "We need to get dressed!"

"Easy, dude," Kevin stated, "we’ll all be naked together, including Jake. He likes to see naked boys, just as much as we do." Brandon and Ryan relaxed. Kevin put in the code to reach Jake, and a few minutes later, Jake’s naked body came into view.

"Oh, god, this is so cool, baby!" Jake said, "I wish I could reach out and touch you! And taste your cock. You look so real."

"We are real," Kevin said, "I want so much to wrap you in my arms and kiss you!"

"I can recognize Ryan," Jake said, "but who is the other dude with you two?"

"Jake, I’d like you to meet our mutual friend, Brandon Hall," Kevin said, "Brandon, this is my loving boyfriend, Jake Farmer."

"Jake." Brandon said, "I’m so pleased to meet you, Kevin has nothing but good things to say about you, I wish I could shake your hand, or even give you a hug. I know Kevin misses you terribly."

"No more than I miss him," Jake replied, "I hate sleeping alone! I’ve slept with Tony a few nights, but it’s not the same. I like Tony, but I’m in love with Kevin, and only Kevin!"

"Jake," Kevin asked, "did you and Tony—you know—have any fun—together?"

"You’re not going to believe this, baby," Jake said, "The impossible happened, I actually had a gay sexual encounter with the straight Tony Jenkins!"

"Really, that’s incredible!" Kevin exclaimed, "I’ve never gotten to first base with Tony, I didn’t think any boy could get that far with Tony, how did you swing that?"

"On the way back from Wisconsin," Jake explained, "we slept together in the motel room. He actually asked me to suck him off, I did, and then he got me off too!"

"UNBELIEVABLE!" Kevin exclaimed, "How was it, baby?"

"Not bad," Jake said, "He’s built a lot like you, down there, and I just imagined I was nursing your wonderful cock. He even tasted a lot like you! He got me off, but he wouldn’t let me cum in his mouth."

"That’s not at all surprising," Kevin replied, chuckling.

"At least he got a warm, wet washcloth and cleaned the cum off my body, and my cock. Baby, are you mad at me, for what I did with Tony?"

"No sweetheart," Kevin answered, "we made a deal that we could have some sex with other boys, while we’re so far apart. I’ve had a little fun on the side too, but your heart is safe in my keeping. Jake, my love for you is unconditional."

Baby, would you ask Ryan and Brandon to stand up," Jake asked, "so I could see what they look like, completely?" Brandon and Ryan both stood up, in front of the laptop cam, so Jake could get a better look at them.

"Wow!" Jake exclaimed, "Those two boys are HUNG! I don’t know what I would even do, with all that meat! Don’t sweat it baby, you’ve got all that I need, and all I ever want." Ryan and Brandon both laughed, stepped closer to the laptop and used their hands to wave their big cocks at the screen, giving Jake a good look at their manhoods.

"Thanks, guys," Jake said, "if nothing more, they’re fun to see. It looks like you guys all enjoy being naked together."

"We do, Jake," Brandon said, "It’s new to me, but I could get used to it. I wish you were here, naked with us. I think all of us gay guys enjoy seeing cock—including yours." Kevin pushed Brandon aside, and stepped close to the cam, giving Jake a view of his half -erect pecker.

"Oh baby, I want that inside my mouth so bad!" Jake remarked.

"Patience, baby," Kevin replied, "When I come home at Christmas time you can have it every night, and I’ll get yours too! We need to get to bed, we’ve got early morning classes tomorrow. I love you, baby, with all my heart. We’ll be in touch again soon."

"Goodnight baby," Jake said, "I love you too!" Jake disappeared as their connection was cut.

"Kevin, you’ve got a sweet boyfriend," Ryan said, "I think I’m a bit jealous, I don’t even have a boyfriend."

Brandon, with a look of sadness on his face, "You could have one, there’s an available boy standing right in front of you that has developed a very strong liking for you, just give him the word, and he’d be yours!"

"Brandon!" Ryan exclaimed, "Are you inviting me to be your boyfriend?"

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So we end another fun chapter in the lives and loves of our two loving couples, Jeff and Julian (J&J) and Kevin and Jake (K&J).  This chapter ends on Tuesday, August 28th, three days before the beginning of the Labor Day Weekend. Will Kevin’s dorm-mate, Ryan, become boyfriends with Brandon? Levi and Julian have played cupid, introducing their friend, Everett Slocum to the handsome Mickey Jones. How will that work out?  Hang on for the ride!
 
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OK, I have now read all 30 chapters in this story, over several months, and now it is time for some feedback. First off, I am from Australia, so one of the reasons I have enjoyed this story is to get acquainted with American culture - fast food, cars, college experiences, dorm life, American language, gay slang, and home-cooked meals. I didn't realise that there was actually so much difference between Aus and USA. Of course there are some similarities too, but for the most part, all I could see in mind's eye was the American sit coms that go across our TV screens here. I must confess I was a bit dubious about the way the story started with the watergames but that soon passed and it wasn't really that off-putting - but I did wonder why the title of the story applied to all 30 chapters when it only really applied to chapters 1 and 2. I have also had my doubts about including children in this story, especially in borderline erotic situations that had me a little uncomfortable at times. I also frequently got lost in the plethora of people involved and often forgot the relationships between the various individuals and families. Sometimes I had to go back and re-read earlier chapters to refresh my memory, especially if I was more than a few weeks between chapters. Overall, an interesting read, with lots of good sex (which is one of the reasons we come to Gay Authors). The story itself is a bit reminiscent of a "soap opera" on TV in that the story rambles on, with twists and turns, but no visible "plot line".  As a result, there is lot of predictability in the story. How come nothing ever bad happens? Don't these people have any bad moods, temper tantrums, or brain snaps? What do they do for drama and suspense? I do like a good romantic story, and there is plenty of that here. I would rate this at 8 out of 10 for a good read. Please understand my comments here are only constructive and designed to improve an already good writer.

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