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Rome - 2. Chapter 2

He spent hours watching the erection of a building for one of the Senators. When he walked away, he knew how to make cement, cut stone, and make bricks. He saw a physician treat a cut. He watched, asked questions, registering all of the new information in his mind. When he read a scroll concerning the Greek Campaign, he would tell Duccius. They would discuss a battle that was recorded or the strategy that was utilized by the Roman Army. In his way, without realizing it, he was educating Duccius on battle strategies that one day may save his life.

His grandfather, Gaius, gave him a desk, sheets of papyrus and ink, to encourage him to write what he learned. When Lucinius reached the age of ten, he had a small chest of scrolls. If you looked at what he had written, you would see where he recorded how to make cement, cut stone, make bricks, treat minor cuts, weave cloth, and make pottery from clay. Because of his father’s displeasure, he kept most of these writings at his grandfather’s home.

When Duccius reached the age of sixteen, he enlisted in the Roman Army. Appias was proud and gave a large feast in Duccius honor. Lucinius was sad to see him leave. They were more than brothers. They were friends. At the feast, Lucinius gave a medal to Duccius that had the picture of Mars. He told him he prayed to Mars to keep him safe. A priestess gave him this medal to give to him. Duccius hugged his brother, but when Appias saw this, he grabbed Duccius and told him to attend to his guests, pushing Lucinius away.

Celia saw this and was afraid for her son and how Appias would act after Duccius left. As long as Duccius was there, he would protect Lucinius. Now there would be no one. She had one coin to spend, her father and his friends in the Senate. Gaius had watched over the years after Lucinius was born how Appias acted toward him. Between Celia and Gaius, they selected a slave from Gaius’s household that would live in Appias’ home as a personal slave to Celia. The slave was Greek, and she spoke only Greek. She had two tasks: one was to minister to Celia, and the second was to report to Gaius any attempts by Appias to harm Lucinius.

In Senate chambers, Gaius would talk about the achievements of Lucinius. His friends would make comments to Appias about how lucky he was to have two sons worthy of the gods. Now Appias was in a bind. If he did anything to Lucinius, the Senate might turn against him. Gaius had mentioned to Appias he told the Consuls about Lucinius and his early age achievements. Without threats, Appias understood it was hands-off when considering doing anything about Lucinius.

Lucinius continued to study and read the scrolls in the Library as well as the Temple. The priest would take the time to answer his questions, and the priestess would teach him the songs of the gods. It seemed he became a favorite no matter where he went. People were glad to see him. He was extremely popular among the working class. If he had a coin, he would give it to the beggar. If he had any fruit, he would offer some to the poor. As a result, he became a favorite of the common people. It didn’t take long for the Senate to take notice. This put even more pressure on Appias to accept him. Celia told Appias that he was creating a favorable impression of the family among the people. Appias had to rethink his treatment of Lucinius. His fellow Senators were congratulating him on having two exceptional sons. Appias decided on the outside he would be friendly, but on the inside, he still didn’t like Lucinius. He was too popular, and he wasn’t a fighter. He didn’t live up to what Appias expected his sons to be.

When Lucinius reached the age of fourteen, Gaius held a feast in his honor. Appias didn’t understand why Gaius was doing this. If Lucinius were sixteen, he would have understood, but not fourteen. Gaius knew that as Lucinius grew older, he would be looked upon as a possible candidate for the Senate when he reached the age of maturity. He used this feast as an opportunity to introduce Lucinius to the members of the Senate. He had even invited the Consuls. Appias now had to smile and show how proud he was of his son. Even under the smile, he didn’t like what was happening.

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4 minutes ago, Kev said:

Lucinius so reminds me of me as a kid... I still question his dad but you have me hooked. Loving the story and looking forward to see if I need to book a holiday over to ancient Rome.😁

If you do be sure to go to Pompeii, they will feed you 

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What did I miss?I know Dads may favor one Son over another but I don't understand the degree of resentment Appias has toward Lucinius. And why would he object to his Sons hugging?

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1 hour ago, weinerdog said:

What did I miss?I know Dads may favor one Son over another but I don't understand the degree of resentment Appias has toward Lucinius. And why would he object to his Sons hugging?

Appias is a military man, he isn't too sharp, think brute. Lucinius isn't a military man, I'm sure you know some men who live  through their son, That was Appias.  He thought his second son would also be military bound,. when Lucinius was born, he was disappointed and would have ended his life if Lucinius grandfather hadn't step in. Think football and ballet, man glorifies his football son whereas he despises his ballet son

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OK.  I was a little confused, so I actually went back to the previous chapter.  Lucinius wasn’t mentioned in that chapter, so I was wondering when and where he came from.  Now I understand he is the 2nd son, by 2(?) years.  I thought this story was going to be about the older son.  Rather it will be about Lucinius.  I’m glad to see he has his brother’s support, seeing as his father (not so) quietly despises him.

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51 minutes ago, Clancy59 said:

OK.  I was a little confused, so I actually went back to the previous chapter.  Lucinius wasn’t mentioned in that chapter, so I was wondering when and where he came from.  Now I understand he is the 2nd son, by 2(?) years.  I thought this story was going to be about the older son.  Rather it will be about Lucinius.  I’m glad to see he has his brother’s support, seeing as his father (not so) quietly despises him.

I'm glad that you are able to sort that out. Yes, the story is about Lucinius, think about who wrote the scrolls.

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On 1/31/2021 at 1:38 AM, Clancy59 said:

OK.  I was a little confused, so I actually went back to the previous chapter.  Lucinius wasn’t mentioned in that chapter, so I was wondering when and where he came from.  Now I understand he is the 2nd son, by 2(?) years.  I thought this story was going to be about the older son.  Rather it will be about Lucinius.  I’m glad to see he has his brother’s support, seeing as his father (not so) quietly despises him.

Me too! At first I thought it was a typo and that Lucinius was somehow typed in instead of Duccius. Then the name appeared a few more times, I went back to the previous chapter to see if I had missed anything?

So my previous comment about Duccius being the "hero" of the story is incorrect.

At least I got the "worried" part right. Just not what and who I thought it was all about.

Appias is officially a @#$%&+!

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7 minutes ago, Buz said:

Me too! At first I thought it was a typo and that Lucinius was somehow typed in instead of Duccius. Then the name appeared a few more times, I went back to the previous chapter to see if I had missed anything?

So my previous comment about Duccius being the "hero" of the story is incorrect.

At least I got the "worried" part right. Just not what and who I thought it was all about.

Appias is officially a @#$%&+!

I typed in the  @#$%&+! and my computers hurt down. You naughty man, but you are right.

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On 1/30/2021 at 8:30 AM, CLJobe said:

I'm glad that you are able to sort that out. Yes, the story is about Lucinius, think about who wrote the scrolls.

I went back to the prologue.  You never mentioned Lucinius as the author of the scrolls there.  So we have the right to be confused! 😜

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31 minutes ago, Clancy59 said:

I went back to the prologue.  You never mentioned Lucinius as the author of the scrolls there.  So we have the right to be confused! 😜

Yes you do, there are hints. Please don't stay mad, enjoy the trip because a story is really a trip. And like. a trip, you will discover things as you go along. 

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2 hours ago, CLJobe said:

Yes you do, there are hints. Please don't stay mad, enjoy the trip because a story is really a trip. And like. a trip, you will discover things as you go along. 

I’m not mad. Just CONFUSED! 🤪I got it all cleared up now, though! 😁

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28 minutes ago, Clancy59 said:

I’m not mad. Just CONFUSED! 🤪I got it all cleared up now, though! 😁

I'm, glad  

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