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  1. Albert1434

    Chapter 26

    There is no Estate what there was when to the debtors! That why he sold the Plantation!
  2. I Roasted Coffee today it smelled great!
  3. Albert1434

    Chapter 26

    "I can see why those questions stand out. Some of those answers haven't been fully revealed yet. Miles knows more about his father's death than he's willing to share, and the circumstances surrounding the shooting are tied to events far larger than a simple family dispute. As for the estate and any documents he may have carried from San Francisco, those details are still waiting beneath the surface.
  4. Albert1434

    Chapter 26

    I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was hoping Miles's arrival would be a surprise. His story ended up becoming more important than I first expected, and there is still more to learn about what he's been through.
  5. Albert1434

    Chapter 26

    I liked this chapter. You could really feel Miles's relief when he finally reached Julian after spending two weeks worrying he might be too late. I also liked seeing Julian reassure him that this is his home now. Once Miles has had a chance to rest, I think it would be nice to see Julian gently ask what happened and why he's so afraid. Miles has clearly been carrying a lot, and Julian can remind him that he's safe now and has a future here.
  6. The Long Two Weeks Koa waited for us beside the cart, standing in the shade of the kiawe tree. His boots were dusty, his arms folded, the horses flicking their tails lazily in the warm morning light. When he saw us coming up the path, he straightened — calm, steady, composed, as though he had been rooted there the whole time. “You’re home,” he said. His voice carried that familiar clarity, warm and sure. “Good to see all of you back in one piece.” Dani
  7. Then why didn't you do it to yourself
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