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The Vanishing Act - 7. Chapter 7

Sorry for the wait, I've just been so busy. Well we are finally there, the last chapter...

Ivan Volkov's reach extended far deeper than anyone had imagined. He had cultivated a network of informants within the Russian secret service, giving him access to sensitive information and enabling him to move freely without fear of detection. Using this network, he orchestrated the kidnapping of Rodion Kovalenko, believing that the renowned historian held the key to the whereabouts of the precious white diamond.

Volkov's plan was almost flawless. His men intercepted Kovalenko as he was leaving his home, sedated him, and transported him to a remote location. There, they interrogated Kovalenko relentlessly, demanding that he reveal the secret of the diamond. Despite the torture, Kovalenko refused to budge. He knew that the diamond was more than just a valuable gem; it was a symbol of Russia's lost heritage.

Meanwhile, Detective Carter and his team were hot on Volkov's trail. They managed to intercept a communication between Volkov and his accomplices, leading them to the location where Kovalenko was being held. In a daring rescue operation, Carter and his men stormed the hideout, freeing Kovalenko and neutralizing Volkov's henchmen. However, it was too late. Kovalenko, weakened by torture, succumbed to his injuries.

Volkov's failure to acquire the diamond did not deter him and he had now become a threat to the stability of the Russian government and the president himself. His growing power and influence had made him a liability and the Kremlin decided to take action. A covert operation was in preparation. The Russian secret service who had been monitoring Ivan Volkov's activities for months, well aware of his growing influence and his involvement in illicit activities, were about to act. They knew he was a dangerous man, but they needed concrete evidence to bring him down., so a trap was carefully laid.


In the heart of Moscow, a man named simply Sven, sat in a dimly lit room, his fingers dancing across a keyboard. Sven was not a man of many words; his job required silence and a keen eye for detail. He was a mole, planted deep within the inner circle of a notorious smuggler Ivan Volkov.

Volkov, a man of immense wealth and power, with his smuggling operations spanning continents was the target. Sven had been working for the Russian secret service for years, slowly but surely gaining Volkov's trust. He was the perfect man for the job, his loyalty to the Motherland unwavering.

Sven received a message from his handler. The Russian secret service had a proposition for Volkov. A priceless artifact, hidden deep within the heart of Russia, was up for grabs. The artifact was said to hold immense historical and cultural significance. The bait was being laid, the Russian secret service wanted to use Volkov's greed to uncover the smuggling route and then move in for the kill. Sven knew Volkov would be drawn in, unable to resist yet another acquisition. He would be tempted to act by the promise of such a valuable prize.

Sven met with Volkov in a secluded location. He presented the Russian secret service's proposition, painting a picture of untold riches and fame. Volkov was immediately intrigued. He saw this as an opportunity to expand his empire and solidify his position as the most powerful smuggler in the world.

Sven laid out the plan. Volkov would need to send his men to retrieve the artifact. Once they had it, they would need to find a way to smuggle it out of Russia. Sven assured Volkov that he would provide him with all the necessary information.

Very quickly Volkov's men began to devise the smuggling route. They would use the same warehouses and corrupt officials they employed usually. It was a tried and tested method and this new treasure would escape detection hidden in another Russian Dolls shipment to the States. Sven watched with a mixture of satisfaction and dread. He knew that the end was near.

Volkov, meanwhile, was becoming increasingly paranoid. He sensed that something was wrong. He began to suspect that Sven was working for the Russian secret service. But it was too late. The trap had been sprung.

As Volkov met with the Russian secret service official to finalise the transaction, he was unaware that he was being recorded. The conversation was a damning piece of evidence, implicating Volkov in the illegal trade in artifacts. The tape was later provided to Eliott Carter who would present it at the trial of Volkov.

The Russian secret service agents were ordered to allow Volkov and his men to leave Russia, the Russian government wanted to avoid any embarrassment from the whole affair, and they were assured the recovered artifacts would be returned. It was the perfect scheme.

Somewhere enroute Volkov and his men who were accompanying the illegal shipment were ambushed by the FBI. So completely obsessed had Volkov become with his own power and greed, he had become careless. He would never previously have been there with the shipment, but somehow Sven had convinced him that his presence was essential. Sven had planted a doubt in Volkov's mind that he was about to be betrayed.

In a remote spot on a rural highway, the trap was finally sprung. Bullets hailed down as Volkov and his men were trapped and determined to fight their way out. Eliott was there, watching the last battle unfold, and finally it was he who arrested Volkov.

To extract a full confession, Eliott did not shy from using psychological tactics. He confronted Volkov with the recorded evidence and threatened his extradition back to Russia. This was never really on the cards, because the deal with the Russian secret service was that the Russian government wanted rid of Volkov. Eliott promised him a dreadful end in a Siberian Gulag in the frozen wastes of the Artic Circle, or else a confession, thus forcing him to admit his crimes. Cornered and desperate, Volkov began to unravel, until finally in a moment of weakness, he revealed his direct involvement in the torture and murder of Damien Moreau.

Volkov had commanded two of his henchmen to kidnap Moreau, believing that the art collector held the key to the whereabouts of the precious white diamond. The henchmen had followed Volkov's orders, abducting Moreau and subjecting him to brutal interrogation. Ultimately, Moreau had succumbed to his injuries, his life cut short by Volkov's greed.

The documents found in Volkov's possession when his city residence was searched, provided further evidence of his involvement in the illegal trade in antiquities. They revealed a vast network of contacts and transactions, implicating him in the smuggling of artifacts from Russia to the US and other countries.

One of the most shocking revelations was the connection between Volkov and the Russian Dolls business. This seemingly legitimate company was a front for Volkov's illegal activities, providing a cover for his smuggling operations. The dolls were exported around the world and their transport was used to conceal valuable artifacts, which were shipped to buyers concealed in the shipping containers.

The location of the Romanov bodies remained a mystery. Kavalenko's expert deciphering of the scroll had been crucial to their discovery, and his death left a void that might never be filled. The quest for the Romanov remains continued, but the path forward was now shrouded in uncertainty.

With Ivan Volkov in prison and the discovery of documents implicating him in the smuggling of antiquities, this brought a sense of closure to the investigation. Ethan and Maxim Turev were finally exonerated, their names cleared of any wrongdoing. The evidence against them had always been circumstantial, and Volkov's confession confirmed their innocence.

Anya Turev was released from custody. The Russian authorities, recognizing her role in tracing the stolen artifacts, accepted her explanation for her involvement in the affair. Her role in her brother's escape from the country was discreetly overlooked, as the evidence against her was inconclusive.

The wooden box and scroll, along with the real white diamond, were displayed in a museum in Saint Petersburg, having finally been returned by the United States. However, there was a lingering doubt about the authenticity of the diamond. Some experts believed it might be a replica. If this were true, the real gem and its whereabouts remained elusive, perhaps this was the ultimate vanishing act?

Without Rodion Kavolenko's expertise, progress on deciphering the scroll was severely hampered. Alexi Dumarov, resigned himself to the possibility that the mystery might never be solved, but he continued his research, hoping for a breakthrough.

Maxim Turev was granted leave to stay in the United States. He had found a new life there, and the prospect of returning to Russia was daunting. The events of the past year had taken a toll on him, and he needed time to heal and rebuild his life.

The end.

If you enjoyed this story, would like more, similar tales, let me know in the comments or reviews. Special thanks to Tal for his contribution to the story, and thanks for all your comments, likes, etc.
Copyright © 2024 E K Stokes, Talo Segura; All Rights Reserved.
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Every time I read a chapter of this story @E K Stokes Rasputin by Boney M. starts looping in my head. They were critically maligned, but I was a teenager growing up in rural Australia when they first hit with Daddy Cool and loved them immediately.

It did not surprise that Volkov was heavily involved in criminal activities. There appears to be a very blurred line between the legal and the illegal and the criminal and the non-criminal at many levels.

I look forward to reading more works by you @E K Stokes.

 

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Thanks to you all @Summerabbacat, @VBlew, @centexhairysub, sorry if Russia comes off looking almost like the good guys, but glad you all liked it and wouldn't mind some more. On which note, I have started another story, Murder in Paradise, it's got a little more steamy dark romance in it and it's a work in progress, but I'll try to get it published although with longer waits between chapters because it's hard to find the time this writing business needs devoted to it!

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Interesting story @E K Stokes, well written with suspense and mystery drawn out for readers.

Of course,  we know the barbaric reality of the gruesome murder of Tsar Nicholas, Empress Alexandra and their children in that Ekaterinberg basement in July 1918. That it took more than 25 minutes and was horribly slow and painful death.

We know of the desecration of the bodies, burned, acid and more and there separate burials in pits.

Finally in 1991, the bodies, after DNA samples from British royal family members verified the remains, were given a proper burial. Except for too of the children. The remains of Alexei and Olga have not been buried with the rest of the family.

Another mystery for Elliot Carter to solve?

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14 hours ago, E K Stokes said:

Thanks to you all @Summerabbacat, @VBlew, @centexhairysub, sorry if Russia comes off looking almost like the good guys, but glad you all liked it and wouldn't mind some more. On which note, I have started another story, Murder in Paradise, it's got a little more steamy dark romance in it and it's a work in progress, but I'll try to get it published although with longer waits between chapters because it's hard to find the time this writing business needs devoted to it!

It is a story @E K Stokes and therefore I did not expect it to be realistic. I don't for one moment have any admiration or respect for Russia in its present state, although I am sure not all of its citizens are homophobic, barbaric, anti-semitic, drunken thugs.

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Ivan Volkov's reach extended far deeper than anyone had imagined. He had cultivated a network of informants within the Russian secret service, giving him access to sensitive information and enabling him to move freely without fear of detection. Using this network, he orchestrated the kidnapping of Rodion Kovalenko, believing that the renowned historian held the key to the whereabouts of the precious white diamond. - See, if you had gone into more detail about how Carter found someone connected to Volkov in some way that led him onto the idea of Volkov trying to kidnap one of the professors...then, that summarized intro would have been fine. Otherwise, I would have liked to have seen some of this playing out, too.

Meanwhile, Detective Carter and his team were hot on Volkov's trail. They managed to intercept a communication between Volkov and his accomplices, leading them to the location where Kovalenko was being held. In a daring rescue operation, Carter and his men stormed the hideout, freeing Kovalenko and neutralizing Volkov's henchmen. However, it was too late. Kovalenko, weakened by torture, succumbed to his injuries. - The second sentence and the rest of the paragraph would have been stronger if shown in detail. Seeing which member of Carter's team intercepted that communication, and how they obtained the location...seeing Carter leading his men into the hideout, etc. 

In the heart of Moscow, a man named simply Sven, sat in a dimly lit room, his fingers dancing across a keyboard. Sven was not a man of many words; his job required silence and a keen eye for detail. He was a mole, planted deep within the inner circle of a notorious smuggler Ivan Volkov. - Wait, we get a summary of Carter's hard work, but this Russian mole gets to have his moment in the limelight? LMAO

With Ivan Volkov in prison and the discovery of documents implicating him in the smuggling of antiquities, this brought a sense of closure to the investigation. Ethan and Maxim Turev were finally exonerated, their names cleared of any wrongdoing. The evidence against them had always been circumstantial, and Volkov's confession confirmed their innocence. - Seeing Ethan and Maxim getting exonerated, and seeing them in a safer place somewhere together would have been more satisfying. Ethan was the one on the path of vigilante justice, after all. I'd have liked to have seen him at the very least say something to himself about "Damien, they finally got the men who did this to you" or visit his grave and tell him that, or any variation of Ethan feeling like he did what he set out to do and that justice had finally been served. (as in his own personal feelings of justice)

Without Rodion Kavolenko's expertise, progress on deciphering the scroll was severely hampered. Alexi Dumarov, resigned himself to the possibility that the mystery might never be solved, but he continued his research, hoping for a breakthrough. - Alexi was a character that was put in play, so he needed a little limelight, too. Maybe showing him talking to some of his fellow professors about this kind of loss "So, you've made no progress with the scroll?" "Unfortunately not. I'll have to be satisfied with the fact that it's been found for now. "

Maxim Turev was granted leave to stay in the United States. He had found a new life there, and the prospect of returning to Russia was daunting. The events of the past year had taken a toll on him, and he needed time to heal and rebuild his life. - See, I'd have liked to have seen Maxim trying to cope, as well! 

Overall, it was a very good story. Crime mysteries are a gargantuan task to write. I've tried writing a crime mystery for over a decade and I know that getting just one chapter down is very hard work, let alone a whole story. Don't let anyone tell you this wasn't quite the achievement, to complete a crime mystery story, because it absolutely was. 


 

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@Thirdly you have been very nice to me and I sincerely thank you for all your detailed comments. Perhaps another author might have taken offence at how their story was dissected, but honestly not me. I found it really, really, helpful and am deeply grateful because I've got some great feedback on what I need to do. I have the plots for stories, I just need to get the detail and order right. Thank you, thank you, I feel very enthusiastic about my writing now!

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EK, I wanted to clear something up. That wasn't criticism, merely reactions and my personal opinions. Always take anything anyone says with a grain of salt. If you feel like polishing this story up at some point, you totally can. I've done it in the past with my oldest story. I gave you my opinions and some of the methods I use to see what you choose to use for your next project (you don't have to use any of it if you don't want to). Remember, you already have me beat by finishing a story of this genre. (I am still haunted by the crime one I have to eventually finish. So much research.) What I try to do is really figure out what the most important parts of a chapter is and try to make sure it is illustrated well with a decent limelight, something I usually do with my comic pages. The trick with mysteries, though,  is not withholding information, but hiding it in plain sight or in pieces to make readers try to piece it together themselves. What I like about what you did with this one is that the information you gave from one chapter to the other was gradual and in increments (at least for me who read it in one sitting). The pacing was great, as well, the action slowed when it needed to slow and picked up when it needed to pick up. Anything I haven't talked about or mentioned is top notch to me: characterizations, descriptions of locations, the plot itself, the ease and flow of reading...

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