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  1. centexhairysub

    Last Words

    A fitting tribute; but I could use a few more deaths as the members of that rotten family are hunted down and killed in any number of horrible and truly gruesome ways...
  2. Really like this; I can feel JJ's pain and panic. Working in the business he is in; something like this would be terrifying. JJ has so many underlying issues anyway that gaining weight could push him to do something unfortunate. I could easily see JJ becoming bulimic. He already talked about how little he was already eating, that in itself can cause a host of both physical and psychological issues to arise. Brad must really care about Jake to put up with his attitude; Jake seemed to be just trying to pick a fight so he could go away mad. Can't wait to meet the rest of Mike's family, this is going to be so good.
  3. OMG, I swear when I was reading this chapter I totally saw Kathy Bates when she was in "About Schmidt" with Jack Nicholson. It just popped in my head.
  4. centexhairysub

    epilogue

    While I thought the story was well written with interesting characters and good pacing; the ending came so out of no where; that I just don't know how I feel about the story overall. I did like how Peter took it upon himself to end Angela; and Tommy and the rest by doing so. I think in a way he knew that Simon wasn't going to stick around; either Angela was going to direct him to the master or he was going to go off and try to find him on his own. Wish we could have gotten a little more of what was going on around Peter and how everyone handled what happened and the other disappearances.
  5. centexhairysub

    of Monsters

    Well, damn, I did not see that coming at all; totally threw off what I thought was going to happen. Still well written but this just came out of no where, doesn't fit well with what was developed so far.
  6. centexhairysub

    Chapter 28

    So Granger, Winkler, and Jacobs are off on another excursion; at least this time Granger and Winkler won't have to be dressed as women. While I am sure that in the end all three will survive, I do worry about this trips; luck isn't limitless for anyone. George is lucky that Caroline and his father have his back on the Homefront; because I just never will trust the Guild, even if they share an objective in this instance. In reality, for a variety of reason, no one but George could make the trip to Saint Petersburg. I am sure that Weston will prove himself sufficient to get the ship and crew back to London. Don't relish Treadway's job of having to explain matters to Caroline, although she understand duty very well herself. Have to say that these last few chapters have flowed beautifully and the writing has just been superb. Can't wait for the next update.
  7. centexhairysub

    Hunter

    Well, once again, they did not think this out. Why try to get somewhere during the day and then not give yourself enough time to do so? Tommy isn't going to just roll over and play dead for them; and you would not think that either Peter or Simon is much in the way of a fighter....
  8. centexhairysub

    Blood

    Well, Angela's behavior at the windows was very reminiscent of Salem's Lot, so I had already considered this implication. But who made her a vampire? Even in the old lore, someone would have been there to turn her... Wish we knew a little more about Simon's past. He certainly took Peter without much preparation and seemingly fairly easy; not something you would expect a teenager his age to be able to do. Questions and more questions, can't wait for the next update.
  9. centexhairysub

    Witnessing

    This chapter was so well written. The pacing and flow was excellent as well. Parts of this chapter were so realistic that I honestly felt a momentary start when the fog came down the hill toward Peter. The deal with Angela floating at the window so reminded me of Salem's Lot...
  10. centexhairysub

    The Ruined City

    Another well written chapter, but the pacing seemed a little off on this one, not sure why. This group works well together; but Eli is right; if that many people died there, the skeletal remains would be all over the place; plus who cut the rope? Even without Dr. Grimm's reaction, common sense would say that there are others in the city. The question is are they sane? Are they from there or did the Eastern Army send them? Who do they see their allegiance belonging to?
  11. Okay, I do have to say that I really do like the story; but what the hell... They are about to go on a super secret, highly dangerous mission; and they pick this moment to sleep together for the first time??? Even if they are cold as ice, and nothing in either of them says they are; this could completely compromise the mission. Are they going to be focused on each other at a critical moment and miss something; or even worse, not be able to get something done because they are worried about the other. There are reasons that people that are involved are not on teams this together...
  12. centexhairysub

    The Date

    Writing is really good and the pacing is excellent. Now that we are away from the medical part somewhat; I am liking the story better. Eli and Ryan do seem to have great chemistry and they both have tragedy in their past; sometimes it helps if the other person understands that issue in your past isn't always easy to move past.
  13. centexhairysub

    The Aftermath

    For a CMO, Eli doesn't come across as all that professional. 20 dead and he seemed to spend way to much time and energy on an issue that a nurse could have easily taken care of; get your priorities straight.
  14. centexhairysub

    The Party

    Well written and the pacing was good; but I can't believe for people that survived what they supposedly have that they could be this stupid. Who the hell throws a birthday party in an area knows for psycho's that are known as ragers; then turn up the music and start a bonfire? Why not just put a big sign out that says kill me???
  15. WOW. bleak worldview, but a great start to a story. Just enough to wet the appetite but leaving you wanting more.
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