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Miles thought he was ready for his dinner with Troy, and I am sure that Troy did as well, but they were not... That kiss is a screaming demon of a danger sign, but not sure that either of them are going to fully recognize it. Troy initiated the kiss and Miles stopped it, but those storm clouds I saw previously have turned into full blown tornado weather. I so love Marco Polo...
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These type stories are so interesting to read, and we have a few really great choices to pick from here. As always, @Myr, thanks for the dive...
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Chapter 19 Back on Dry Land
centexhairysub commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 19 Back on Dry Land
What about Daisy? How did they end up finding them? Jamie and Connor will take time to adjust, sounds like Jamie is doing better than Connor; but they need time to figure out who they are back in civilization, and how they are going to deal with who they are now. Imagine burying your child, only to discover they are alive... WOW. -
The sea is a cruel mistress, and Julian has lost Sam to her. Julian may well blame himself at some point, if only he had insisted that Sam stay with him; but Sam was an honest and loyal man and he had given his word to the captain and he would not have left the boat before fulfilling his obligations. To go from such joy to such sorrow will make it harder on Julian; but he has those that do truly care for him around him, and they will do what they can to ease his suffering. Daniel will be with him, and we can all hope that Sam's death does not cause a wedge to come between them. Sam would have wished only the best for Julian. Just really sad...
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A delightful mix of new characters and old friends that we have enjoyed for so many stories. A new protagonist that comes from such a different background but finds his life in the midst of our usual friends and their families. You would not really have to read the previous Seachange stories, but they would definitely be beneficial to understand some of the minutia and background information that comes out in certain areas. That said, this is mostly the story of a new protagonist and his fitting into these established settings. Don't want to say too much so that any surprises are maintained. Sit back with a lovely glass of tea and perhaps a scone or two and enjoy this newest story in this delightful saga.
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And the choice will be.... A lovely story that is a wonderful mix of newer characters and just enough of the familiar characters to blend in and give us that wonderful feeling of joy and happiness that there is so much love and friendship in the world around us. Levi has come full turn; he took a trip back to see his mother's grave and visit some familiar things. He has Jamie to take care of and try to be the best big brother he can be to Jamie. He has his friends and Brooke, and now perhaps Toby as well. Can't wait to see that next story in this wonderful saga.
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Well, we got some background on a stop on the way to the event. Some interesting ways for this to go from here. I do like the two main protagonists, but both Cliff and Gary just annoyed me, hope we don't see much of them. Can't wait to see where you take this one.
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Have enjoyed all of these stories, and while I would like for them to continue, you must do what is right for you, your feelings, and your writing. Hope to see a new story from you soon, you are simply too talented to keep these stories to yourself, even if we are greedy gits, they do brighten our days and nights and give us all something to look forward to. All the best on any future endeavors.
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Chapter 19 Grouse, Chickens, and a Pry Bar
centexhairysub commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 19 Grouse, Chickens, and a Pry Bar
Glad your recovery continues, but take care and don't rush yourself... Runyan and Willie James have their own place to live, yes, it is part of Barnswallow, but just separate enough that they will be able to live their own lives as well. They need to be able to a rhythm and establish their own lives. Find a way to mesh their lives and find something that they can both help support themselves and that they enjoy. Let's just hope they are far enough from their old place that no one sees and reports back to their families. I think that Runyan's family learned their lesson about saying anything, but Willie James's father would cause trouble just because of the hate that he carries in his own soul. August and Fletcher as well as Runyan and Willie James are all making plans, can't wait to see what becomes of them.- 34 comments
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I am so hoping that the ones entombed in the stone are not removed and subject to this. Never a pleasant job, but one that is necessary in all communities and cultures.
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Adjustments and… Hazing?
centexhairysub commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Adjustments and… Hazing?
I would so have that gym teacher fired. Any teacher that knowingly allows hazing of any type, especially what happened on days one and two should be fired and honestly arrested. The fact that Kurtis had the good sense to ask Connie before trying to kiss her says a lot about him. Carl is an ass, why is there always a few of them around, and why does anyone else ever listen to them?- 56 comments
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Troy is going to have to be honest with himself, first and foremost. He had told Owen about the texting and the dinner, why not be open about the beach? Troy and Owen seem to be falling into a rut of sorts; with occasional bouts of outstanding sex. But is that enough to justify keeping a wedding planner busy? Like a few of the others, Owen seems more distracted and more involved than I would have expected for it being end of term, even with having the responsibilities of being a department head. Maybe the job interview, or maybe something else, we will see. Miles is being the gentleman, just keeping it light and easy and keeping everything out front and honest. Why do see storm clouds gathering in the distance???
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A treat that will not soon be forgotten. Each person was touched by Julian's generosity from the youngest child to the oldest of the workers. They all received a blessing on good stewardship from Julian. Julian and Daniel grow ever closer; Daniel knows that Julian's heart belongs to Sam. But that begs the question, just where is this going between them? Beautifully written, the colors, smells, and scents of the day just leapt off the page.
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Group Synergy Exercise
centexhairysub commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Group Synergy Exercise
Well, a truly interesting start, and so much going on. We already have a number of truly interesting characters and of course a delightful and charming setting or two already coming into focus. Can't wait to see what happens next. -
How sad, a young star perishes in the same manner as his character on a popular TV show...
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