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The winding path - 1. Anticipation

I guess I could have entitled it "Great expectations" :)

Anticipation

A date for the present - A present for my date

 

Hours, minutes, seconds, slowly are ticking by,
Yet, too many remain until I see your smile,
Until we truly meet, my blue-eyed Gemini.

Over the past few days I've been so distracted,
Forgetting where and when I am supposed to be,
Looking in the mirror, and seeing but a grin
Or an impatient sigh where sadness used to be.

Today, you will take me to a place of history
We will walk the gardens, take some rest on a bench
And remember ancient stories of secret love.

And after our dinner, when time calls for good-byes,
I will slip in your hand this small piece of paper
Silent words expressing my thousand wishes.

A wish to lose myself in the blue of your skies,
To melt with you into the high heavens above,
To strive together for a future paradise.
In other words a wish that... really, this is Love.

I wrote this on the day I met this guy for the first time in August 2010. I printed the poem and gave it to him after our first dinner together, as we parted ways.
The discussion thread is at http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/29159-anticipation/
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Marzipan

Ohh... A true story behind this... What happened next?

 

I like how much boldness you have to do such a thing.

 

About the poem, the anticipation and the exitement was really there. It felt real. Thank you for sharing!

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Frostina
A wish to lose myself in the blue of your skies

 

**sighs**

 

So beautiful. :) what did he have to say???

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Bleu
On 04/03/2011 08:45 PM, Frostina said:
A wish to lose myself in the blue of your skies

 

**sighs**

 

So beautiful. :) what did he have to say???

He has mesmerizing blue eyes :) Well, I only gave him a paper with the address where the poem was posted. I didn't want him to have to read it right there and then.I think he liked it. :)
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Bleu
On 04/03/2011 08:41 PM, Marzipan said:
Ohh... A true story behind this... What happened next?

 

I like how much boldness you have to do such a thing.

 

About the poem, the anticipation and the exitement was really there. It felt real. Thank you for sharing!

Yes, true story. Hehe, boldness indeed. Maybe that was overkill for a first date, even though we had been chatting quite a bit prior to the date. Anyway, we dated for some time. In the end it didn't work out, but I don't regret the poem.
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jian_sierra

I already read this the first time you posted it on the Poetry Discussion forum, but since I want to show my support, I decided to leave a review. I think this poem is really sweet thumbsupsmileyanim.gif

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Bleu
On 04/04/2011 01:11 AM, jian_sierra said:
I already read this the first time you posted it on the Poetry Discussion forum, but since I want to show my support, I decided to leave a review. I think this poem is really sweet thumbsupsmileyanim.gif
Thank you John :) Coming from the King of Sweet himself, it is really appreciated.
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Toast

The eagerness and hope for love. The possibility of a new beginning. The wonder of the company of another. It is all so real it those first ticks of the clock.

 

I like this, this first bloom of attraction. And I like that it leaves us to decide the fate of love's first joy.

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Bleu
On 04/04/2011 04:46 PM, Foster said:
The eagerness and hope for love. The possibility of a new beginning. The wonder of the company of another. It is all so real it those first ticks of the clock.

 

I like this, this first bloom of attraction. And I like that it leaves us to decide the fate of love's first joy.

Thanks. :) I wrote the poem in the heat of the moment, while I was feeling this anticipation. There was also a battle within between the wish to believe in love and the rational thought telling me I was getting way ahead of myself.
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