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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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A Horses Tail. - 1. Chapter 1

I raced down to the stables,
concerned about my Annaday,
to find him with that defiant look on his face,
standing slouched in his paddock.

He neighed as I got closer,
he knows who I am,
he knows it’s me and not anyone else.
I swear he smiles when he sees me.

He didn’t move but an inch,
normally he walks over,
trying to push his way through the gate,
it should have worried me more than it did.

I spoke softly to him,
attempting to reassure him,
while I listened to his gut,
I heard noise.

He started to nibble on my back,
softly blowing on my skin,
his cute way on trying to bite me,
though he never does.

He seemed fine,
I patted his neck,
telling him that he was worrying me,
that I loved him.

I said I would see him in the morning,
as he rubbed his face over my shoulder,
pulling me into a hug,
and squeezing me tight,
I wrapped my hands around his neck,
kissing under his mane,

I patted him one last time,
he neighed to me,
as I walked away,
before nibbling at the grass.

He seemed fine.

Copyright © 2011 Bumblebee; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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On 10/16/2011 06:13 AM, Mark92 said:
Lovely poem Bee, I know this really hurt, but it gets easier with the telling. Well Done :hug:
Thanks Mark :hug:
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On 04/11/2014 04:39 AM, UnsatisfiedPest said:
That was lovely. You should write more.
Thanks for the review Ryan :)
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