Well! I thought Adam was a bastard, this Lian sounds far worse
Poor Nye does he really know what he's signed up for??
This story really intrigues me Nephy, nicely done
Hmmmm OK now I want to punch the bastard I know you'll probably laugh your head of at that from what Marky tells me about you.
Now it is poor Nye, what a manipulative nasty *insert banned word here*
And i'm still going to read on even though I want to rip his head off. Well done Nephy
Wow ummm ok poor Nye, this had a number of different effects on me. not all unpleasant.
Adam is really a nasty piece of work though isnt he? Bloody Nora! He's bad and I thought James Thomas was bad LOL.
I lean more to being Like Nye than Adam but ummm nuff said
Damn good read Nephy
WOW Nephylim wow. Marky pointed me towards this. Call it a fetish.LOL
Ive read his written work on The Legacy, and took an interest from there.
Fascinating, cruel and emotive. A real enjoyable read Thank you for writing it