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Fascination - 1. Chapter 1

Time and space seemed to stop,
my world coming to a halt.

My heart beats into overdrive,
thumping harder,
faster,
than ever before.

Starting at my toes,
I can feel my blood pulsing,
through every nerve,
every fibre of my being.

Muscles twitch,
trying to wake up,
attempting to move,
held down by invisible bindings.

My eyes glaze over,
staring unseeing into oblivion,
white blinding light slowly fades away,
until darkness takes over.

Copyright © 2012 Bumblebee; All Rights Reserved.
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On 04/12/2012 07:23 PM, SoullessCynner said:
I liked this poem a lot. It made me shiver the first time I read it. You're good. :hug:
Thanks for reading Cyn :):hug:
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On 04/12/2012 07:28 PM, Foopy said:
you have exceptional imagery :) quite an interesting picture you paint :P
Thanks TJ :D
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Beautifully written, the words kind of drew me in! I felt the world stop from the way you described it....Is it about death?

Great poem, Bee! :)

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On 04/12/2012 07:36 PM, Tara00 said:
Beautifully written, the words kind of drew me in! I felt the world stop from the way you described it....Is it about death?

Great poem, Bee! :)

You can take what you want from the poem, so if you see it as being written about death then it might be ;):hug:
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On 04/16/2012 09:41 PM, Frostina said:
It's such a hard hitting combo of words! :o enough to make us just... stop!

wow, Bee! just... WOW!

Thanks Frosty :)
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On 06/30/2012 05:48 AM, Mark92 said:
Always liked your poetry Bee. This is one of the best. Good work :hug:
Thanks for reading and reviewing Mark :)
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