I finished this first chapter in two seperate readings, fell a sleep on it last night. I'm seeing the serious undertones of this story under the light layering that is so signature to you. This is probably the heartbreaking story I have read in a while. I wish Eric would not have so much selfhate in himself. I can see the gray area in this story, but I also do understand that attractions can not be explained. I will read on.

To be fair, I had an entire collection of stories already in the works before GA was nice enough to bring me on board, and "Untouchable" was already a part of my site.  That's the only reason it remained. And since then I've stopped updating it here and have only been updating on Nifty for the past two years or so. So NO sneaky tactics! Don't get me in trouble. Hehehe!