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Arthur in Eblis

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Genres: Fantasy
Sub-genres: General Fantasy

Sometime in the remote past, a tween named Arthur leaves Arcadia to seek his friend, kidnapped by slavers and taken to Eblis, the land of dark magic and evil. Armed only with his wits, inchoate magic, and a dagger, Arthur begins a Heroes Journey.

 
This story is copyright © 2013 by David McLeod. The characters, concepts, and plot are original, and are the property of the owner. Anyone may quote from this story or publish this story as long as credit is given to its author and to the Gay Authors web site. Permission to write and publish additional stories that take place in the worlds created by David McLeod is also granted. It is hoped that authors of such stories will give credit to David for having created the interesting and complex universe in which these worlds exist. Please contact David at boh.translators@gmail.com.
The word “boy” refers to a male of the age of consent (at least 18 years old).
Copyright © 2013 David McLeod; All Rights Reserved.

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Timothy M.

Of all your single stories, this is probably the most complex, since it weaves three separate threads into one. Each of them is compelling and has interesting characters, who interact wonderfully.

It's a little confusing that the first part of Arthur's tale turns out to be much later in time than Robbie's initial chapter, but not so much that I lost track.

The best part of the story is how the boys gradually turn this into a quest, complete with facing challenges and getting aid from Good people and defeating Evil people. And by doing this they also became free of whatever past hurts they suffered. Not to metion bringing Light to Eblis.

David McLeod
On 08/11/2014 02:57 AM, Timothy M. said:
Of all your single stories, this is probably the most complex, since it weaves three separate threads into one. Each of them is compelling and has interesting characters, who interact wonderfully.

It's a little confusing that the first part of Arthur's tale turns out to be much later in time than Robbie's initial chapter, but not so much that I lost track.

The best part of the story is how the boys gradually turn this into a quest, complete with facing challenges and getting aid from Good people and defeating Evil people. And by doing this they also became free of whatever past hurts they suffered. Not to metion bringing Light to Eblis.

This started as two different stories, neither of which was long enough to publish. It was a bit tricky to merge them, and some of the seams may be a little rough. Glad you were able to piece them together.
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