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    jian_sierra
  • jian_sierra
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  • 02/27/2011
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Tell Me - 1. Chapter 1

Tell me things I do not know

Tell me about strange and faraway places

Tell me something I have yet to experience

Tell me, tell me

 

Tell me about nature’s beauty

Tell me the majesty of the sky at night

Tell me the wonderful things in the world

Tell me, tell me

 

Tell me about different cultures

Tell me things about people you know

Tell me all about humanity

Tell me, tell me

 

Tell me how you feel as you gaze into the horizon

Tell me your first thoughts when you awake

Tell me anything about you

Tell me, tell me

 

Tell me why you are here with me

Tell me your feelings towards me

Tell me what you think about me

Tell me, tell me

 

I can acquire the knowledge that I ask of you

I can see the beauty of nature by myself

I can befriend the people around me

I can get to know you better

 

But I want you to tell me these things

Because I would like to see things the way you do

To experience life from someone else’s perspective

And feel emotions other than my own

 

Tell me

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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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Mark92

Hi Jian, Why do you say you cant write? You have a way of saying things that give off emotions.

 

I for one am loving your work, and i'll get to the longer ones as soon as I can.

 

Excellent work Jian :great:

 

And ......off to read more LOL :boy:

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jian_sierra
On 06/12/2011 07:48 PM, Mark92 said:
Hi Jian, Why do you say you cant write? You have a way of saying things that give off emotions.

 

I for one am loving your work, and i'll get to the longer ones as soon as I can.

 

Excellent work Jian :great:

 

And ......off to read more LOL :boy:

Awww that very sweet of you. Thanks for your kind words. Just know that I'm blushing now :D (I don't know how to make the blushing icon so I hope this suffice.)
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jian_sierra
On 07/18/2011 02:02 AM, carringtonrj said:
I like this. a lovely thing to write for a lover.
Indeed! Thanks for leaving a review :)
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