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RIP - Comicality
    K.C.
  • K.C.
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  • 06/12/2011
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Be Mine - 1. Chapter 1

 

The first moment I saw you,

I wanted you to be mine.

But everything was so very wrong,

 

Wrong day!

Wrong place!

Wrong time!

 

All the stars refused to shine,

They disappeared that night.

 

I wondered all alone inside the darkness.

 

Someone else waited for you,

on another shore,

faraway.

 

It was his touch your body knew,

and the reason you had to go.

 

Just a name, that’s all you gave me,

with the sweetest sound from your lips.

 

Your voice, my only companion on so many lonely nights.

 

Time chipped away at my soul.

Would you ever return?

Would our paths ever cross again?

 

I didn’t need to fall…

I was already in love with that familiar voice that haunts my sleepless mind.

Is it possible to dream while wide awake?

Can it be?

 

His auburn locks were shorter now,

But those green eyes still held the same shine.

 

The sunlight only shone for him,

 

He returned

to be

just

mine!

Thanks for reading. Let me know what you think.
Copyright © 2011 K.C.; All Rights Reserved.
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Marzipan

This was touching and beautiful. I think it is very possible to dream wide awake - I do that. Lovely lovely poem!

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K.C.
On 06/12/2011 03:45 PM, Marzipan said:
This was touching and beautiful. I think it is very possible to dream wide awake - I do that. Lovely lovely poem!
Thank you. I was feeling kind of reminiscent this weekend. :D
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carringtonrj

sweet. good use of "auburn" - a great word to use! you write directly and emotionally. interesting reading. you obviously have talent.

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K.C.
On 06/17/2011 06:52 AM, carringtonrj said:
sweet. good use of "auburn" - a great word to use! you write directly and emotionally. interesting reading. you obviously have talent.
Thank you. Those emotions raging at the onset of a relationship are so intense. I'm glad you like it.
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Tenebrae

Love lost and found again. A very good rendering that sparked a memory in me of my first crush. I got the feeling from this that age and waiting only made the reunion even better. That is what I'm hoping for in the future with my crush and this has given me a feeling that maybe my repressed memories weren't all that bad after all. :)

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K.C.
On 07/14/2011 08:21 AM, Tenebrae said:
Love lost and found again. A very good rendering that sparked a memory in me of my first crush. I got the feeling from this that age and waiting only made the reunion even better. That is what I'm hoping for in the future with my crush and this has given me a feeling that maybe my repressed memories weren't all that bad after all. :)
Hey Tenebrae- so sorry for the late reply. Glitch in the notifications maybe. Thanks so much for reading. I hope your reunion is just as sweet! Good luck :D
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comicfan

Sometimes you don't lose something, you just have to wait for it to come around again. Very sweet poem, KC. I like the emotion you strike here.

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K.C.
On 08/10/2011 03:44 PM, comicfan said:
Sometimes you don't lose something, you just have to wait for it to come around again. Very sweet poem, KC. I like the emotion you strike here.
Well, when they leave the country, you think that they're gone forever...but he came back just for me! **giggles** This many years later and I still get tingly thinking about it :D Thanks Wayne!
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