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7.31.14 and other dates of insignificance - 1. Poem One, Good

7.31.14
 
Good
 
 
by Foster
 
 
I don’t know
Who I am
Today
I’ve been off
For so long
I know there have been whispers
From those dreams
Leaking out
Clever little witticisms
The past
A friend
That I hardly remember anymore
Did we love
Did I care
Did I do wrong
You can stare
For a very long time
At nothing
The sky might be falling
And the ground might be calling
And an ending will come
A life is just another speck
From head on perspective
It’s flat
Fallen silent
All cliché
Left among the echoes
When I was hunger
He didn’t want me
Too shy
To be bolder
Inopportune
When I was younger
Quiescent
Crazy spent
All the slow-moving moments
My kisses were all ridiculous
My touch too much
My words too many
My burst of need
Laughable…
Just laughable
 
Did I just recall
Something
Completely forgotten
 
 
 
It’s a Thursday
Isn’t it.
 
 
 
 
 
Copyright © 2014 Foster; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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You have an interesting way with words. The piece seems regretful. Maybe you should write a companion piece imagining what your future will hold having learnt all these hard lessons. :)

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I agree with RJ; it seems very sad.

 

I love the way it's written though. I'd love to read more. =)

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On 08/01/2014 03:53 AM, carringtonrj said:
You have an interesting way with words. The piece seems regretful. Maybe you should write a companion piece imagining what your future will hold having learnt all these hard lessons. :)
Thank you Carrington.
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On 08/01/2014 04:29 AM, Lisa said:
I agree with RJ; it seems very sad.

 

I love the way it's written though. I'd love to read more. =)

Thank you Lisa.
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