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JamesSavik

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Damn. I didn't think it sucked that bad.

 

Scrap that.

old bob

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The story should be really fine, at least as good as your last one, "Twilight".Go on , it's worthwhile, even if you didnt have a lot of comments :P .

Phantom

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Looks interesting... can't wait to see where it goes from here :)

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Graeme

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What I liked was how natural the data dump was. By making it an interview, the characters were able to supply information that would normally be just assumed by them.

 

There's certainly a lot of scope there for where it goes next :)

 

James, you're really good with SF and I'd like to see more from you in that genre, if you are inspired to write it :D

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