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The Genesis Galaxy - preview


JamesSavik

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The Genesis Galaxy

 

 

A technician wearing Interstellar News Network press credentials met Captain Carson and Dr. Palmer in one of the Starbase conference rooms.

 

He had them sit, set up the video links and asked,

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The story should be really fine, at least as good as your last one, "Twilight".Go on , it's worthwhile, even if you didnt have a lot of comments :P .

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What I liked was how natural the data dump was. By making it an interview, the characters were able to supply information that would normally be just assumed by them.

 

There's certainly a lot of scope there for where it goes next :)

 

James, you're really good with SF and I'd like to see more from you in that genre, if you are inspired to write it :D

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