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Busted chapter 42

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[i didn't know Joe was a mime, I swear!]

 

Chris woke up, feeling more rested than he had in months. For once his sleep had been undisturbed by the raw dreams that always heralded Alex's appearance, or the erotic dreams of his own that had been as bad in their own way. There wasn't any trace of the fatigue that Alex brought either.

 

His first alarm went off then. He hadn't been up before his alarm in a very long time. It was nice. He gave the pillow he'd grabbed one last hug, then rolled over and turned off the alarm. He turned the other three off. No point in having them go off when he was already awake.

 

There was something subtly different that morning. It was more than just him getting up, more than just a good night's sleep.

 

He shrugged and stretched as he got out of bed. He padded over to the dresser, the floor under his feet cool and comfortable. He grabbed a clean t-shirt and boxers, then stripped off the shirt he'd worn to bed and threw it at the dirty clothes in the hamper.

 

He froze. There was a rich green shirt on top of the pile. He didn't own any green shirts. Chris picked it off the top of the pile. It was still a little damp, and had a smell to it that was intense but not unpleasant.

 

Three things registered on his brain.

 

The shirt was Joe's.

 

He was smelling it.

 

He had an erection that almost hurt.

 

Chris threw the shirt back as if he'd been burned. This wasn't right. He wasn't supposed to be feeling this. Megan had shown him that. He didn't need anyone. He was fine with just Toby. He certainly didn't need Joe.

 

Except he had last night. Maybe need was too strong a word, but he'd been miserable and Joe had made him feel better. Dragged him out and made him have fun. Hell, he'd even made Chris dance, something he'd not done in a long time. And he'd even enjoyed it.

 

Afterwards, once they'd gotten home, he'd been so

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TheZot
These have been a particularly olfactory couple of chapters!

They have been, haven't they? I'd not given it all that much thought. It makes sense though. We've already established Joe notices scents, and it is a very primitive thing. No surprise that it'd hit Chris.

 

'Specially as they did both spend the evening dancing, and neither of them showered after. Scents would be... somewhat in evidence.

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Lucy Kemnitzer
These have been a particularly olfactory couple of chapters!

They have been, haven't they? I'd not given it all that much thought. It makes sense though. We've already established Joe notices scents, and it is a very primitive thing. No surprise that it'd hit Chris.

 

'Specially as they did both spend the evening dancing, and neither of them showered after. Scents would be... somewhat in evidence.

 

I just noticed something. Joe very distinctly noticed Chris's scent and did not notice that it was particularly like Alex's, though it must have been enough like Alex's because Joe didn't realize he was with Chris until he was fully awake.

So, like enough not to be disturbing when he was expecting Alex, but unlike enough that when he wasn't expecting Alex he wasn't disturbed by the Alex aura.

 

That's interesting, whether you did it on purpose or not.

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TheZot
I just noticed something. Joe very distinctly noticed Chris's scent and did not notice that it was particularly like Alex's, though it must have been enough like Alex's because Joe didn't realize he was with Chris until he was fully awake.

So, like enough not to be disturbing when he was expecting Alex, but unlike enough that when he wasn't expecting Alex he wasn't disturbed by the Alex aura.

 

That's interesting, whether you did it on purpose or not.

It was on purpose. Joe's noticed that they were sort of different in the past (similarity wouldn't be surprising to him, since he thinks they're twins, regardless of whether it actually works that way) but he's going to take it as him getting the two of them mushed together in his head. I should add that as part of the text.

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