Hollow Reality by Simon

[Cia]

 

Reviews copied for Hollow Reality, as of 12-17-2010

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Allerron

 

Very disturbing story on several counts. Sad too. But, I've

always maintained that literature is supposed to entertain, shock and/or make

the reader think. On one level this story did entertain me, it gave me a

brief glimpse into someone's pathetic life. It also had a bit of shock

value to it and it certainly DID make me think. I'll probably be thinking

on this one for a long time to come, reflecting on how losing one's own identity

is perhaps the greatest sin in the world.

I cannot even begin to express how impressed I am at this one, very deep and

intense. KUDOS!

 

Date: 06/15/2010 11:47 AM

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: taina1959

 

WOW! This was very, very good! Extremely cold but good. And to think that

there are people out there that are just like that, who don't care about

anything or anyone but themselves. Makes you think hard about our own

lives.

 

Date: 06/14/2010 03:57 PM

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nephylim

 

Bloody hell. Way to go to shock in the first chapter. Woohoo. I love

it. There are one or two rough patches but who the hell cares. The best

tweed jackets have patched elbows. That was utterly awesome.

 

Date: 06/14/2010 12:40 PM

 

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Cia

It was all you, I just rearranged things a tad It's dark and sort of

creepy but a very good story, one of emotional and physical dependence and

addiction. It's very much a cynic's story, but since the main character is an

assassin that stands to reason, I don't think they are your typical warm and

fuzzy types Great work.

 

Date: 06/14/2010 09:40 AM

 

Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: The Nature Nut

Whoa, that was different, dark, and fascinating. Original perspective. Nice

story. Thanks for being creative. I enjoyed it.

 

Date: 06/13/2010 08:30 PM