Marzipan Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 I was wondering, is this kind poetry something you'd like to read in series? I feel I have more to say about my dragon and his hunter. My Beautiful Dragon And, sorry the link won't work Link to comment
Nephylim Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 I think this is a story waiting to be told. The start was so empassioned, rich and amusing. I would love to see more of the hunter and his dragon. I want to see if at any time the dragon will eat the hunter or the hunter tame the dragon 1 Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 I think this is a story waiting to be told. The start was so empassioned, rich and amusing. I would love to see more of the hunter and his dragon. I want to see if at any time the dragon will eat the hunter or the hunter tame the dragon You and me both I was thinking about turning this into a full on fantasy story, but I think I'll stick with the poem form. If I decide to continue. And here is a link that will work, thanx to Colinian. My Beautiful Dragon Link to comment
JoejoeGreene Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 Very clean. I really enjoyed it. Will the dragon also be allowed to become a voice? Can he talk in a rythm of flight? 1 Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 5, 2011 Author Share Posted April 5, 2011 Very clean. I really enjoyed it. Will the dragon also be allowed to become a voice? Can he talk in a rythm of flight? He definitely has a voice, but only in the hunter's mind. Rythm of flight, there's a thought... Link to comment
Bumblebee Posted April 5, 2011 Share Posted April 5, 2011 you heard what i thought in chat.... (and i cant be bothered typing it all out again ) but its really good, and its a more story type poem (which i dont normally read or like) but i liked it 1 Link to comment
Frostina Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 Can i say something? :D please?? pretty please?? Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 Can i say something? :D please?? pretty please?? I'm affraid to ask what... Link to comment
jian_sierra Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 A story-poem (or poem-story, whatever) is really cool! Please share whatever you call it with us 1 Link to comment
Frostina Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 I'm affraid to ask what... :devil: U shud be Afraid!!! so... can I? Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 6, 2011 Author Share Posted April 6, 2011 :devil: U shud be Afraid!!! so... can I? No!!!!!!! Shut up - errr - darling. Link to comment
jian_sierra Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 No!!!!!!! Shut up - errr - darling. Let her talk! Link to comment
Frostina Posted April 6, 2011 Share Posted April 6, 2011 Let her talk! what say u and i find a quiet corner? Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 13, 2011 Author Share Posted April 13, 2011 Secon chapter is out now. Dreaming of my Dragon. I would be happy to hear your thougts. Link to comment
jian_sierra Posted April 14, 2011 Share Posted April 14, 2011 Well are you sure you'll be happy to hear my HONEST thoughts? Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 15, 2011 Author Share Posted April 15, 2011 So... chapter three is out. This one is told by the Dragon's pov. It enlightens about the Dragon's past. And he has a name too More about the swimming Dragon in the next chappy then. And his name will be revealed then too! I think. Fallen Narcissus Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 Another good poem Thank you Bee Link to comment
Bumblebee Posted April 16, 2011 Share Posted April 16, 2011 Thank you Bee because of how much I suck at writing reviews, I never know what to say, but I want to read more and that I feel that I can relate to the Dragon except that my Narcissus doesn't join me in my dreams... oh and is a girl 1 Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 16, 2011 Author Share Posted April 16, 2011 because of how much I suck at writing reviews, I never know what to say, but I want to read more and that I feel that I can relate to the Dragon except that my Narcissus doesn't join me in my dreams... oh and is a girl I'm so happy that you get something personal out of my poem. Poems are always so personal, both to the poet and the reader. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. There will be more to this poem Link to comment
Marzipan Posted April 30, 2011 Author Share Posted April 30, 2011 Chapter four of my Dragon saga. Dragons Don't Swim This chappy is dedicated to Frostina, my dear friend. Link to comment
Frostina Posted April 30, 2011 Share Posted April 30, 2011 Chapter four of my Dragon saga. Dragons Don't Swim This chappy is dedicated to Frostina, my dear friend. WOW!!! That's a first!! Thank you so so so much babe! 1 Link to comment
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