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    Chapter 11

    Timspfd commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I appreciate the answers to outstanding questions, like what does Ben really do for a living, and the issue of Matty not having gone away. The reconciliation between the serial killer with a fixation on hand damage of the last story, and the classic sociopath of this story haven't quite come fully together yet, but there's progress.
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    Chapter 8

    Timspfd commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I never heard anyone say the souls have to be detached from bodies.
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    Great story,nicely rounded out. Would love to see a Joss story or two. Maybe a mystery interspersed with flashbacks to when Joss and PJ first got together. Thanks for the great read.
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    Epilogue

    Timspfd commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    A beautiful ending. This was a great story, thanks so much for writing it for us.
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    A lovely story about patience and love, art and substance.
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    Plenty of well written action, mixed with well thought social content. While helpful to read ghe prior story, this one can stand on it's own just fine.
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    I believe it was mentioned in comments those two would be back, and conservation of characters said they would have something to do with Lyn and his coming out process. So no huge surprise. Fun though, and could have been more explicit. Only Alexander gets the detailed play by plays? The overstimulation mention was interesting. Combined with Lyns tight focus, and tendency to miss obvious social cues from his friends, he is reading as having a little neurological diversity. Mild, but helps explain how he could have missed social cues that look obvious to the readers.
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    The comment about Lyn not understanding queer tension was right on the nose. Would make a great band name too.
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    Chapter 9

    Timspfd commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Quit making me cry when it's supposed to be funny and light. Sigh
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    Chapter 1

    Timspfd commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A smart guy with a hockey player, where might I have heard that before? In Ottawa Tales the hockey team was played off as just coincidental. Just one of those things that happens. Hmm.
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    Chapter 6

    Timspfd commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Sorry if this looks like a repost. I accidentally posted it to chapter 4 first, but the comment about Dotties watch doesn't make sense there. Dottie is fixing herself to one time. Hugo is a citizen of Kulai now, he could take away her power there while she is distracted with linear time. With the aggregate he can also know when she dies and work backwards, depending on how watch possession works. She had a watch this episode which means she will blip out in the next day, which is a vulnerability point. Properly getting away from thinking in linear time is the trick of course, for both Hugo and our Dear Author.
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    Chapter 3

    Timspfd commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Dottie is fixing herself to one time. Hugo is a citizen of Kulai now, he could take away her power there while she is distracted with linear time. With the aggregate he can also know when she dies and work backwards, depending on how watch possession works. She had a watch this episode which means she will blip out in the next day, which is a vulnerability point. Properly getting away from thinking in linear time is the trick of course, for both Hugo and our Dear Author. Posted this on the wrong chapter, sorry. It is a response to chapter 6.
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