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Capt vs Goofball Carter

   (7 reviews)
Genres: Comedy,
Sub-genres: Comedy Modern
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Steve's a wrecking ball of boredom, intelligence, and drama... except no one believes him. At all.

Especially not straight laced, Baptist, All-Canadian repressed jock Kenny Jensen who is convinced Steve is out to pull a prank on him.

Lydia, Steve's sister, all around smartest girl in the room, and utterly fed up with Steve's BS, sees the truth. But will the two boys? No chance, Lydia's going to have to fix it. Uggh, boys, why are they so dumb?

Copyright © 2025 Topher Lydon; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (21 members)

  • Action Packed 12
  • Addictive/Pacing 17
  • Characters 19
  • Chills 5
  • Cliffhanger 8
  • Compelling 15
  • Feel-Good 16
  • Humor 19
  • Smoldering 9
  • Tearjerker 5
  • Unique 15
  • World Building 8


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Vcs

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members
Here we have another delightful adventure by Topher Lydon. Climb aboard, folks. Capt vs Goofball is quite an adventure where chaos meets order.
 
Not sure why no one has offered a tissue warning, as this story has the audience laughing to tears. And don’t neglect to read the hilarious comments following each chapter!
 
Now then, time to move as our dear professor has more stories on offer...
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Paladin

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

Steve has a reputation for developing and implementing complex hoaxes and like the 'boy who cried wolf', he isn't believed when he is serious. Steve's reputation for pranks and his desire to be taken seriously collide when Kenny (Grade A+ student) is assigned as his tutor. Steve has to get Kenny to believe him, but Kenny is very wary, expecting to be pranked at any minute.

Add to this mix that Steve is also talented at devising money making schemes.

These two things set the scene for a rollicking schoolboy love story full of unusual, but lovable characters, surprise twists and humour that will capture your attention and keep you wanting more. Fortunately, the next chapters are already posted.

A highly recommended read.

Response from the author:

Animation Cartoon GIF by Maya Richman

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Seraph28

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

In this story Mr.Lydon attempts to answer what happens when an unstoppable force of chaos meets an immovable object of order. We are introduced to Steve, a young prodigy, who thrives on chaos and Kenny ,a jock, who is the epitome of order. What follows is beautiful chaos as two opposites try to find middle ground. The pacing , the humour in this piece and the multifaceted characters are captivating . This is a highly recommended piece of work for those who like a laugh!

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chris191070

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

We have Steve the master of chaos and Kenny who is a straight laced bapist.

Then we have Lydia, the smartest girl out to fix the problems.

But there is much more to this story it is a story full of comedy, entertaining situations and some interesting situations 😄 

Give it a read you will not be disappointed.

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