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  1. Hi Thirdly, I plan to read your story. But, I’m not much on comments. Thanks in advance for your story. 🙂
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    Empty

    empty frame decoration beauty at the edge in the beginning at the end beauty but nothing except foolish filler mars the captured soul doubt refusal the sad silence the only gesture left 1.7.19 Monday
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    Chapter 5

    This chapter takes you there… You know that place you hope every good story goes to ... that WOW
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    Chapter 4

    I kind of hope that Kieran some how over comes Geston in a redeeming way.... especially since Geston’s actions are not entirely his own? Wouldn’t Kieran see beyond retribution? He is remarkable.
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    Chapter 3

    Relationships like these you describe are so compelling. I am so very envious. And happy to be reading.
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    Chapter 2

    Well, gosh. This chapter is a wonderful example of why your writing is ... wonderful. I recall another set of triplets. I think I will read it again.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for a new story to spend my nights with. 😇
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    Chapter 1

    Gosh, thank you. don’t get many readings or likes or comments so thank you twice.
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    A pale pink

    Thank you guys. I don’t know why you give me a look/like. It’s very kind.
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    A pale pink

    A pale pink Lightly shields Conceals A darkly heated Will Gilded ego With imitation patience For kindly meant Compliment You look nice today 6.21.18
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    All day

    All day I have... All day I can... All day I will... What? Hold hands Hide burning eyes Smile calmly Stand and walk out Leave Speeding Unmoving Unmoved Untouched Unabled Gripped Hard Demanding What? A smile A tear Both Anything Nothing It yearns with grace Visit Over 6.16.18
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    Working question hark

    I had a dream... a friend gone... how close... how distant reality
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    Working question hark

    Working Quest...guessing Question Hark Moving Stars are Returning Moving Heavens Wind Playing And there It Is Alignment An opposite fate A turning reversal Dragged slowly Tears mark A crying 6-6-18 Wednesday
  14. I am commenting because your story deserves readers and comments.
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    Satisfaction

    Good chapter, great story. Thanks.
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    Dead and Snow

    A violent, and yet compelling chapter. Thanks.
  17. One of my favorite songs. Thanks for the good chapter.
  18. Good luck with your story. I will watch for more chapters.
  19. I like the story, but yes I’m worried for Danni.
  20. Sweet little cliffhanger you left for us. Thank you very very much. 😊
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    Vigilance

    Liberty seems a little bit bolder than Cameron. 😊
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    Vigilance

    Doesn’t Cameron heal fast?
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    No Brakes

    I can see that the two men are going to be a great duo. Thanks.
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    Reassignment

    Well, I already like the story. Thanks.
  25. Enjoyed the start of your story. Thank you.
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