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    Chapter 6

    Thank you.
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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 4

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    Chapter 3

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    Chapter 2

    Thanks for another chapter
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    Chapter 1

    I like the beginning. Seems like my kind of story. Thanks.
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    Chapter 15

    Thanks for the very good read.
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    Chapter 12

    Exciting. Very. Thanks.
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    Chapter 11

    Wonderful.
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    Chapter 9

    Good chapter.
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    Chapter 8

    Nicely done.
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    Chapter 7

    Very good.
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    Substitute

    All out No control Substitute Reticence To rectify A hard passage Between Resolutely reluctant Explicitly rash And standing alone After facing That look Of ... Disbelief 5.30.17 Monday
  14. Readers will always want to read whatever you write. I certainly will. You are one remarkably talented writer. Also, very kind – How you care and respond to readership. Thank you.
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    Counting

    Counting hurts Comparing pain Making eye contact At midnight Like broken eggs Scrambled into Compromise Balancing odds Placing bets Hoping to win Or lose Just playing However hard Got rules Principles Need more On impulse Sudden need Later regret Love Is not relieved On order Something That makes sense Any suggestion Hope Expectation Tomorrow Saturday 5.6.17
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    Scattered Pieces

    A stress And twist Between Peace In pieces... ~Shy away ~Turn inside ~And run outside Inclinations Expectations Explanations A tangled life Line A blocked Artery A stalled Start To be happy With inevitable sadness Happy plus the fine print Maybe acceptance Minus A reasonable option The actuality Considered I mean well But Cannot project only reflections Qualities requiring False inspiration A smile A laugh Joy shared Like an addiction To Happiness Short heart beats Long recalled Someone was happiness The same one as sadness Saturday 4.30.17
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    Drowning in Pink

    Ha Humor Next Piece Entitled Pinkicide ?
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    Drowning in Pink

    That bloody Rhododendron In bloom Again Pink Could of died Years ago Should have After all Considering I suck the beauty out of... Hearts Minds Souls These are Imaginary burials Long gone love Complete with Epitaphs Last bitter taste Looks and glaring hurt And words Never silenced echoes A fucking damn Dam That holds on Breaks Bursts Blackens Every time That Beautiful Loved Rhododendron Blooms Friday 4.28.17 Been a while, since I wrote one of these down.
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    Poem

    So many software changes have muddled my old formats, sorry, hope you will forgive.
  20. Your writing is magic… Makes the story more than real.
  21. Thank you. Oh, how I love reading your story.
  22. Thank you.
  23. Thank you. Congratulations to the new mated pair. Kellar and Tobyn are amazing characters.
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    Chapter 9

    Thank you.
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